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Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2013 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 28

Feeling so sad whipe reading this chapter but glad that finally Michael has let her grow and thaglt hopefully they will both grow. Its time for Michael to grow and stop fucking up.

I missed this story :(

Author's Response:

Hey you :) Yeah that's sad but it's time for Michael to let Lily breath. Maybe she will realize she loves him and stop lying to herself! Michael is the one who needs to man up and grow!! Aww, thank you! I'm sorry I didn't update in days, I'm just so busy (and lazy LOL) BE BACK SOON

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2013 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 28

I have no sympathy for Michael. At all. His tears, dramatic ass rants, the whole nine.. I just wish Lily would tell him to shut the fuck up. I'm beyond sick of him. He's weak, he's sorry, blah blah blah. I can't wait til he grows up to be a damn man. Lily needs to stick to her guns, whatever they are. The flip flopping is annoying as hell also. She needs to decide what she wants and stick with it. I really wish her and Usher would've worked out. He's the only man I liked her with in this whole story. And Debbie's big ass had a miscarriage? Mm. Whatever to that as well. I've just had enough. Michael really thinks that Lily is just gonna fall into his arms and everything will work out? NO! Stop being so fuckin weak and passive aggressive and take responsibility for your bullshit. That's why she can't stand him and has no respect for him and will NEVER wanna be with him. 



Author's Response:

Heeeeeey! LMAO I see that when you doesn't like someone is passionately ;)  Can't wait for him to man up too, it's getting tiring. SHe knows what she wants now and it's to be alone and take care of herself. Usher and Lily were so cute together! You're so right girl! Be back with a new chapter soon ;)

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2013 07:32 am Title: Chapter 27

So I read this again, and this seemed fitting to write down:

"These are my confessions!

Just when I thoguht I said all I could say

My chick on the side

Said she got one of the way

These are my confessions

Man I'm throwed and I don't know what to do

Guess I gotta give ou part two of my CONFESSIONS!"

 

LMFAO



Author's Response:

LMFAOOOOOOOOOO! This is so R-E-L-E-V-A-N-T!!! OMG, I love it! Gotta use it!

Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2013 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

mike become a damn man that it i have no hope for mike no more as for lily keep doing yo thang girl



Author's Response:

Yeah poor Lily. Whenever she is trying to give a chance to Michael, he ruin his chance!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2013 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 27

Ohhhy shit.. Damn Mike just messes everything up.. did ye really go out and had a baby on the side now that's just wrong wayy wrong!!!

Author's Response:

I knooow!, Michael is almost begging Lily everyday to love him when he isn't able to fix the mess he already made! Thank for the review ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2013 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 27

Omg dude.. I can't. I simply don't have the energy anymore. Like seriously. I'm starting to think Michael is fucking retarded and suffering from an illness. This shit is just stupid now. Why the hell would you think just because you cheated 9 months ago, she's just supposed to forgive and forget and fall into your arms? He has fucked up REPEATEDLY time after fucking time! This is annoying now! Damn! He has no right to be frustrated because Lily is not opening up to him or showing any affection to him because he ain't shit! Literally, he is nothing to her. She doesn't owe him a DAMN THING!!!!!! Whatever friendships, relationships whatever is NONE of his fucking concern. He's so jealous and worried about Usher he can't he even get his own shit together. I have much more respect for usher than I have for Michael at this point. I have nothing for Michael. Then to add the icing on the cake, he impregnated Debbie's big matronly ugly ass?! Yeah man I'm done. I just can't. He has to be mentally retarded at this point. Why the fuck would Lily be happy about that when one minute your punk ass is crying over her talkin about how much you want her, then the next you do some off the wall shit like this??! I really wish he would leave Lily the fuck alone. And she needs to stop being so damn simple and stay firm with him. The only relationship they need to have at this point is concerning Giselle. That's it. I've had it. Michael needs to take his retarded ass on somewhere. 



Author's Response:

Hey! I think this is the final straw for Lily too! Michael is so foolsh if he thinks that she is forgiving him now that he knock Debbie up! LMAO! Yes, he is stupid. He has no right to be upset about Lily behavior, he doesn't deserve to be forgiven. DEAD @ Debbie's big matronly ugly ass! I'm done with Michael too, I think it's time for both of them to move on!

Try to update soon ;)

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2013 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 27

I was all sad and serious reading the chapter and now i'm busting my ass laughing at that picture.



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOOO! This chapter was too dramatic, needed something funny

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2013 10:44 pm Title: PRESS ARTICLE

Ohhh damn that is just messed up. Wow this is gonna change their life for sure!

Author's Response:

Yes, too bad Zooey is backstabbers! Lily should whooped her ass

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2013 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1

  • YAY, IM YOUR 100TH REVIEWER LOL. I know I already reviewed but I iust love being people's 100th. Congratulations girl.



Author's Response: THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WOW already 100 review. Fells so proud of Myself! And already 4000 view too. My next goal is more and more review LOL. Thank you love :)) <3

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2013 07:33 am Title: Chapter 26

Two wrongs dont make a right lilly remember that. She is getting on my last nerve. She dont want no girl around michael but she can freely make out with usher? Ugh girl get it together.  Either you want the man, or not.forgive him or let him move on. One day he is gonna give up chasing her, then what? I think thats what she likes...for him to chase her. How much longer is she gonna make him suffer? I get that he hurt her big time but she is going about it the wrong way. These games have got to stop. 



Author's Response: Lily wanted her little revenge, she just had the feeling that as long as they aren't even she won't be able to take him back. She wanted to make him feel her pain. LOL, the girls is crazy! wants Michael for herself but doesn't want to get commited to him. Oh wow , I like the idea of him stopping chasing her to see how she reacts. Let's just hope she stops before it gets worst :S Thank for the lovely review babe :))

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2013 12:20 am Title: Chapter 26

Aww nothing ever goes good for them :( But damn thats was messed up of lily fooling around with Usher knowing that Michael always stops by at that time. I did not like her play there. I get Michael cheated on her but she needs to forgive if she wants to be with him. Lily is now taking it over the top. Its hard but woman don't be fooling around llike that.

I really feel bad for Michael. Damn. I hope her dad isn't playing them and that he is really helping them out, I hope he truly cares for her and G.

But that lil scene in the room when he woke her up...that was sexy. I hope that Lily forgives Michael and see that he was trying to help her. They are soo cute in the plane hehehe

Author's Response: Hello!! Yeah, this is life, not everytime pink and mushy, there is some drama too :( Well, Lily sin't fooling around this she isn't officialy dating Michael. Everything is so messy anyway! And he isn't better because he thinks she is dating Usher but keep on come on her! Lily doesn't even know what she wants LOL. The girl is confused! Let's hope her daddy truly wants to make it right! YAY! That scene was my pleasure LOL Just for my nasty fans haha

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2013 12:04 am Title: Chapter 26

So glad Usher made an appearance. I really love him and Lily's relationship. They just get each other. They may call it incestuous but I think differently. They definitely have a strong sexual attraction to one another yet can still be friendly at the same time. I can only imagine them kissing and Michael walking in.. Priceless! That's what his ass gets. Smh. I so think that in a weak moment of Lily and Usher, maybe even a drunken moment, they're gonna have sex again. Anyway, Michael is a mess as usual. He needs to not be so forward with kissing and touching Lily. He needs to earn that back. He's still weak. And Lily is gettin soft too cuz she shoulda whooped Zooey's unloyal trifling ass! The fact that she came on to Michael AND tryna expose her baby to the world? That bitch needs a BEATING from here to the stars. Until Michael proves he is worthy, Lily needs to pay him dust. She can be nice to him but he has not proved he is worthy of being with her. Lily Jackson my ass. She needed to be Lily Raymond. Lol. 



Author's Response:

YAY! Usher brought his sexy self back! Lily and Usher are so cute together; they don't even have to talk to to each other to be comfortable.  LMAO @ Michael catching them! So true, they have a great relationship and they could do the nasty at anytime. But I don't think Michael will let it happen ;). Michael couldn't wait to kiss her again, he couldn't hold it back lol. But you're right, he needs to earn her trust back before. HAHA, we all know Lily is a wild child nd it's a miracle she didn't beat Zooey's ass! Mouhaha Lily Raymond sounds good though!

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2013 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Lmao, finally, naomi outta the picture. And IG= Instagram and Kik, yes they are iPhone apps, as well as others. That's okay though. 

I'm loving your story, and li think all that mushy love stuff is not what stories should be all about. The heartbreak, the pain, etc, I love how some certain writers can make you feel what a character is feeling. Either sadness, heartbreak, love, ecstasy. Anything.

Its magic. It makes you feel like you are in a complete different world with writing. Writing and reading are my best points, actually. Others, here in Pakistan, are waay to lazy. They can't lift a finger to write, or open an eye to read. It's either playing games, being a couch potato, watching tv. 

I wish it wasn't like that.

Anyway, Much Love To You, Annie.

Shiniee xx



Author's Response:

Yeah! Naomi's drama are finally over! Ok! I didn't know what KIK is because I don't own an iPhone LOL. Thank you! Well if you like this story I bet you will like my new one The Velvet Rope, it wouldn't be the same but like this story it would not be happy all the time. You're in Pakistani?? That's cool :). I'm in France and I don't know about all the french people but people from my city are too lazy too. They don't like to read or write and they listen to is commercial sh*t. Guess people are the same everywhere ;)

Thank you for the ovely review :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2013 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 25

I still feel like Michael is weak. I am proud of Lily for being real with herself, but she shouldn't be fighting for him! He's the one who lied and cheated. Not her. Yeah she's been a bitch but she's never cheated on him. Ever. That's just the ultimate no no for me. I'm sorry. I feel like at this point the only way Lily could ever be with him again.. Is if she cheats on him too. I know that sounds crazy but thats the only way Michael will truly know what it feels like to be hurt like that. Naomi cheated yes, but he didn't catch her in the act. Lily saw his ass with Diana's old hoish ass and that traumatized her. More than she'd probably care to admit. And he's still not fully comprehending that. And he didn't love Naomi the way he loves Lily so it didn't hurt as badly as it would coming from her. That would be the only way to really even the score. And why the fuck did he even allow Diana to come with him to Lily's performance? I just don't understand. Lily will never be comfortable with him being around other women because he's WEAK. He doesn't have a backbone. Shit look at what she said "I got rid of Tatiana and Naomi". That is WRONG! Michael should've been a fuckin man and did those things!!! Smh. I'm just gonna say it: if Lily gets back with him, she better cheat on him too. Otherwise this shit never work. Sometimes it just has to be an even score. It's messed up but it is what it is. I hope Usher is coming to visit soon! 



Author's Response:

Hello Kat! Thank you for the review! Lily is finally admitting her feelings for Michael and you're right she doesn't have to make effort to have him back. He is wrong and he is the one you have to gain her trust again. LMAO ! I think even though Lily hate Michael for cheating on her, she wouldn't be able to do that to him. She isn't like him, she is classier ;). Naomi cheating on him was just an easy way to break up with her, at least he had a reason and yes you're right, if he loves Naomi as much as he loved Lily it would have been different. His ego was just hurt while when Lily broke up with him his heart broke. Oh, Diana! Always there to bring some dramaaaas! Lily will have to be very brave if she takes Michael's back, because he is always surrounded by women. HAHAHAH! I see you want her too! Let's see what happen next :)

Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2013 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 25

OH SHIT YEA THEY GETTING BACK TOGETHER BUT DAMN MIKE SCARED BUT I HOPE HE TELL LILY HIS PLAN OF WHY HE DID IT AND HOPEFULLY LILY WILL NOT GET MAD BUT HAPPY



Author's Response:

YAY! Yeah, it was so perfect until her father ruined the moment LOL

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