Date: Dec 26, 2012 07:37 am Title: Press article
Maybe he'll see some woman who is nice to him. Lily isn't worthy of his admiration or anything else. She doesn't deserve him cuz her attitude is too effed up. I hope she walks in to Miguel in bed with a man. I'm telling you he's gay. Lmao smh.
Author's Response:
Yeah you're right, Michael needs someone special for him. Not Lily's triffling ass.
LMAO@ I burst out laughing on the bus and everybody think i'm crazy now hahaha. That would be hilarious!
Date: Dec 26, 2012 07:35 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad Carmen told her ass! Lily is a selfish and may I add childish bitch and I cannot stand her or her gay ass husband. What kinda man tells somebody to stop someone from bonding with THEIR child? Are you kidding me? That's some punk shit if I must say. Miguel is obviously threatened by Michael because Gisele is HIS child and Michael will be an awesome father to her. And Lily needs to gone somewhere with this weak ass attitude. The man didn't know, so there is no reason for her to still be shitty with him and she needs to tell Gisele that Michael is her father. I wish Carmen woulda slapped the shit outta lily's ass! I can't stand her. Whoo girl you must update soon, I am loving this. She is the wackest bitch on earth, I swear I can't stand Lily. And you know somethin else, I bet if Michael stops showing interest in her, that's when her ass will want him. He needs to treat her like he doesn't like her and only interested in his daughter. Two can play that game. Michael needs to treat her like she's nothing, literally. Watch her attitude change then. He can do better than her anyway.
Author's Response:
Hey you! I'm glad you liked the end it was especially for you y'know! You don't know how much I love your review LOL! I knew Lily wasn't going to be the girl everybody loves but dan! And Miguel, let's not talk about his attitude. He wanted Lily for so long that he is not ready to let go and Gisele is his daughter and certainly not Michael's for him. But yeah he can't help genetics! Michael is already a good father for Gisele and it scares the shit outta Miguel.
Oh yes they are going to tell Gisele about Michael, but not now! Trust me it will happen soon ;) I have a lot more planned before that. Lily is the mature one, she knows a slap isn't going to shake some sense into her. Lily is stupid for thinking her problems will be solved like this. I mean c'mon gurl? How old are you ? 12?
GUUURL, I am taking notes of everything! You will defo see that in following chapter! What's your real name? I need you to include a characters with your name on it. Girl, you're the truth
MUCH LOVE AND THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING!! :) <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 09:29 am Title: Chapter 4
Ooooooooh Joseph feena get it lol. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Joseph is going to regret it big time! Thanks for the review love :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 02:22 am Title: Chapter 4
Ohhh snap this is where it gets good!!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA Absolutely, sorry for the cliffhanger! But I'll be back soon because it's the holidays YAY!
Thank you for rating and reviewing ;))
Date: Dec 21, 2012 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yeah I still hate Lily. Lol I understand the situation but I still can't stand her ass. SHE should've tried to get in touch with Michael when she was pregnant, not have Carmen or whoever do it. I still feel like she's being too harsh. The man honestly didn't know she was pregnant. Why can't she understand that? Michael is not some cold hearted dude or bum. She knows damn well he would've been there. And Miguel is effing gay, ugh. Get your drama king ass outta here. Michael is Gisele's father NOT you. Let his ass leave. Whatever. Lily needs to get her shit together because she's really pissing me off. And something tells me Joseph is about to get it! I am not surprised to hear that his ass interfered. Smh
Author's Response:
Hhahaha! I just love your reviews!! I knew people would hate Lily for being such a cold bitch but I never thought it goes hat far haha! But the most important is that you understnad the situation. I didn't think about that, she should have try to contact Michael. And she should definitely try to understand Michael, he always come back for her ass after all.
LMAO @ your comments on Miguel! We can't blame him, he is the father since she was in Lily's belly and he doesn't want another man to replace it. So he is her Father as much as Michael is. But I respect yourn opinion and it's always good to have reviewer who defend their opinion.
Joseph is in deep shit!
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING! I hope you don't mind, but your reviews inspires my chapter :))
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2012 08:42 am Title: Chapter 3
That's true but at the same time Lily shouldn't keep that from her daughter yes it would hurt her that her mom kept that from her but she stills has the right to know.
Author's Response:
I agree with you! And damn, ichael almost had an heart attack worrying about her and Gisele! Things will be clearer in the next chapter
Date: Dec 20, 2012 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
Whoa!!!!!!!!!!! Lily is being way harsh. I understand her being angry due to what happened but she never gave Michael an opportunity to even know he was a father so how the fuck could he be one? He didn't know! Yes he handled it wrong by having sex with her while he was with Tatum but he did break up with her. He really loves Lily. This is so sad that she's treating him like this. He deserves to be a part of his child's life and she's being a cold bitch. And calling him those names really just made her stock drop with me. Lily is acting a damn fool, this bitch has really lost it. That was really bad.
Author's Response:
Hey!! I see you're really into this story! I like it ;)
Indeed, Lily doesn't have time for Michael explanation. Everything is going to be clearer in the next chapter and you will forgive Lily ;). So you think it's real LOVE? Even after 9 years without her? Well let's see!
We can't blame Michael for trying hard to be in Gisele's life but we can't blame Lily for trying to keep her life too! HAHHA, Lily didn't like Michael threaten her!
Date: Dec 17, 2012 09:29 am Title: Chapter 2
So she had the baby and she has a new man. I can't wait til Michael finds out.
Author's Response:
Yes! Since Michael is not here to take care of her and the baby! She found a great babyfather for her little Gisele ;). I can't wait too!
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2012 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I wonder what Joseph did with the note. Great chapter can't wait to see what happens next I love this story. :)
Author's Response:
You'll find out in the next chapter maybe! Great you liked this chapter and i'll try to write the other rapidly ;)
THank you very much for reading, rating and reviewing it!
Date: Dec 15, 2012 06:30 pm Title: Press article
Can't wait to see it!!!
Author's Response:
Great b/c its online ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 15, 2012 04:37 pm Title: Press article
Hope you still continue this story as well. :)
Author's Response:
Yes, I am :) I am writing another chapter right now. Stay stuned :)
Date: Dec 09, 2012 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow... Is there a continuation to this??? Michael has his work cut out for him if he thinks he's gonna win her back.
Author's Response:
Actually this is the end :) I know it's kind of frustating but i had this idea in my head and I don't know if i'll continue. I'll let you know ;)
It's true! Michael really want her back and since they had a daughter together
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2012 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh snap he has an daughter. Thats the end? No getting back together with her? Great story. I wish u made another chapter but it's k. Is that little girl beyonce? She is so cute and adorable.
Author's Response:
Yes, Michael has a daughter!! Yes this is the end :) I'll let you guys imagine the end ;) Thank you for reading and rating! I'll think about another chapter, i'll let you know :). Yes this little girl is Beyonce! Isn't she cute on this picture??
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2012 04:37 am Title: Chapter 1
That's some story Annie!! You know whenever I looked at that picture all I thought was 'What a lucky fan!' In fact she's the one that kissed Michael in public first not Tatiana... but the way you created a story based on it is just amazing!!! Good Job girl :D Lots of love <3
Author's Response:
YAY! I'm so glad you reviewed and rated one of my stories!! It means so much to me! :))). I think the same thing, and contraty to Tatiana, this kiss seemed to be less awkward for Michael! I always find it cute! A lot of people forget about this lucky fan. Thank youuuuuu i'm so glad, you liked the story. I hope you're not too frustated about the end. I really don't think i want to continue it but almost all my reviewers want it. I guess i'll just have to think about it!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2012 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohh :0 continue :)
Author's Response:
Aww it's the end actually :)) I really don't know what to do next. I promise i'll think about it