[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2013 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
hell naw you got me chewing my nail girl thi I like woa michael and start singing she out of my life damn mike mess up in the head he can kiss lily and his daugther goodbye shit its going to take alot of trust for them shoot
Date: Jan 14, 2013 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
hell naw you got me chewing my nail girl thi I like woa michael and start singing she out of my life damn mike mess up in the head he can kiss lily and his daugther goodbye shit its going to take alot of trust for them shoot
Author's Response:
Hello Tamera :))
I know, those cliffhanger are killed you LOL! LMAO! You're right Mike is messing up everything by messing around with Diva Ross! Indeed, I agree! See you soon for the next chapter :))
Date: Jan 14, 2013 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I read every chapter...lol
Author's Response:
Ah ok LOL, my bad!
It's freaking late in France but I'll write another chapter when this afternoon and it will be online around this hour I think. Stay tuned :))
And thank you for reading every chapter girl <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2013 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
Michael is officially on my shit list. How could he do that? And with bug eyed diana ross? Well looks like they are over. And I thought you said things will be better for them.....looks to me like it can't get any worse. Please update soon, im worried cause lilly is takin this to calmly. She might just kill him. Or diana ross...
Author's Response:
Hey you! Thank you very much for reading, rating and reviewing :))) You always review my story it means a lot to me to have your support :) bTW sorry for the typo, I fixed it!
bug eyed diana ross ??? Oh my, you just made my entire day hahahaha. Michael definitely fucked it up big time with Lily. I actually wrote another version of this chapter where it was all lovey-dovey and then I changed it in fact. I'm sorry I shouldn't have said that LOL. Let's see what happen next! Oh I'm sure it can get worse LOL. It's true that Lily is very calm! She threatened to attack phisically Tatiana for blackmailing her but she didn't even say a thing when she caught Michael cheating on her with Diva Ross! She is a quiet storm, she will blow up at anytime!
I'll try to update tomorrow :)) Thank you Love <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2013 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn...I totally dont like Michael at this point. Next part asap..plz
Author's Response:
I'm confused, did you read every chapters? Because your reviews is on the 1st chapter LOL
Anyway, thank you for reading, reviewing and rating :)) I'll try to update tomorrow (it's quite late in France)
xoxo
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2013 11:47 am Title: Chapter 13
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!.....but i freakin hate tatiana. ol good for nothin, thirsty, man stealing, bitch.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Thank you for reviewing and for rating! Means a lot to me :))
*blush* thank you, I love writting it too! Oh God, Tatiana needs to go! Next chapter in an hour :))
Date: Jan 13, 2013 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh come the fuck ON already!!!! These two finally get their shit together but still acting like this bony bitch is running things? Smh I'm done. I can't.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Sorry for the late, I had my exams but now I have a one week break, I will probably updates a couple of chapters this week
HAHAHA, Indeed they are finally admitting their feeling and things are going great with Gisele! Tatiana is still annoying them but I promised things are going to be better in the next chapter!!
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: Jan 06, 2013 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 12
i love this
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review Zendaya :))
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2013 02:20 am Title: Chapter 8
My darling I love all the chapters and probably like the rest of the readers I want to know what's next and' turn the page' as quickly as possible.I'm reading all the chapters at one go.
Author's Response:
Hello new reader! Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing :))
Aww, that's cute thank you ;)) I'm glad you like it ;) Enjoy your reading
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2013 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 12
Good thing she finally admitted her feelings and that Michael told her everything
Wow Michael I'm in shock I can't believe he just said that to lily not that he just told Gi just like that out of no where.
I'm just glad that he told her instead her finding out by herself or worse by thirstiana.
Author's Response:
Hello!! Thank you very much for the review, the rating and reading my story :))
Indeed, now it's on thing in less to do! Now they have to deal with Gisele LOL. It's going to be hard! Michael overreactted i know :( Oh yeah, can you imagine, Gisele finding it out bu Tatiana? Hell!
Date: Jan 05, 2013 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
A damn mess. Lily and Michael are both getting on my damn nerves cuz they're both fucking stupid. They should've been told that damn girl that Michael was her father, BEFORE Miguel died. That way he couldve helped explain it as well. All this shit is a mess. Lily is still a fuckin idiot and her idiocy is rubbing off on Michael. Retarded as hell!!!!!! He acts like he doesn't know what the hell is goin on as far as that Thirstiana shit and Lily has been dumb. She still had done absolutely nothing about her situation. I'm done with both of them at this point.
Author's Response:
Hello youu :))
Yes I agree, a ess! Mouhahaha, it's true Lily's behavior is starting to have an effect on Michael's! Ok, ok, but you have to say; she put Tatiana offside huh. Noooooooooooo, don't go! I promise, i'll try to make everything better in the next chapters :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2013 04:09 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh god, you got my screaming when Michael got a heart attack! Omj :o
I was like "WHHAAAAAAAAT?!"
Author's Response:
Mission accomplished [x] haha. Thank you for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2013 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awes my damn I thought that she was finally gonna admit to Michael her feeling. Ugh I hate thirstiana soo damn much! Hoe needs to BACK OFF, Mike don't want you fool. I really hope that Mike and Lily have their moment, they really need it.
Author's Response:
She was about to admit her feelings!!!! Destiny is making things hard for them :S. We hate her all with her trifling blackmailing! So you think she does all of it because she wants Michael? I'm taking notes. I hope too, it may happen earlier than you think ;))
Date: Jan 03, 2013 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 11
Damn why is everybody acting like they're scared of Thirstiana? Fuck that wack ass bitch! Enough is enough! Her thirstiness is annoying as hell! It's time for her ass to go NOW! This is ridiculous. Lily needs to make up her damn mind and Michael does too. Stop making excuses and all this extra shit. They are both on my damn nerves at this point. All this tit for tat shit is irritating as hell. Tatiana's bony bum ass needs to be gone NOW.
Author's Response:
Hey girl!! :)
I agree Tatiana need to go! But as long as Michael doesn't find a way to get rid of her without affecting his or Lily's career, i'm afraid she is going to stay. LOL, I tried my best to reduce Lily's indiciviness, c'mon she was about to admit her feelings right! And Michael needs to man up before Tatiana takes advantage of it! Ok, ok, ok I get it, they have to stop playing games. I'm taking notes okurrrr *tylercroakleyvoice*
Date: Jan 02, 2013 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aw hell naw! Lily should've snatched that bony bitch bald! To bring up her child?! Please let Lily beat that hos ass! And why is Michael acting basic? Is he forgetting who he is and the resources he has? HE is the boss! He's Michael fuckin Jackson! Don't no bitch threaten or blackmail him! He needs to let Thirstiana's wack ass know that. I know damn well be made her ass sign a confidentiality agreement. If not, he better make her sign one and let her ass know he will personally make sure her ass will NEVER work again! He can sue that bitch blind. Michael better stop actin stupid and get with it and get rid of her bony ass now. That definitely ain't the way to get Lily back. And Lily needs to stop fronting now!
Author's Response:
Hey you :)))
Yessss, she should have bitchslapped her real quick! But hey if Miguel wasn't here, Tatiana would be at the hospital!! Michael too gentle with Tatiana, he needs to shake some sense into her before she does something bad. You're so right, Michael needs to grow some balls and show her who's the boss! I'm taking note of course :)) I didn't think about a confidentiality agreement but i'm taking note too! Tatiana is so screw! If she think she can get away like this after threatening him. Oh and Lily... Let's not talk about her LOL! Thank you very much for the review :))