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Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2013 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 19

girl you got me rolling i love when mike is angry update soon please my fav story girl gosh i hate clifhangers lol review to you soon



Author's Response:

Hello you! Thank for the review and the rating. LOL! It's kind of unsual seeing Michael angry ;)) Aww, your favorite :$ *wiping tears*. Haha Cliffhangers are everything, you wouldn't be biting your nails without it ;)) Next chapter on line !

Reviewer: mjfan1978 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2013 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 18

!!!!! NEW READER ALERT !!!!!

 

I absolutley love this story, please do not stop here now.  I am curious to find out if Lily does Marry Usher or not just to please Gisele or not.  I hope Michael does not marry Naomi too cause in reality, Lily & Michael belongs together :). 

 

Please update soon...Please :)) <3



Author's Response:

HEEEEEEEEEY! Yay, i'm always so excited to have new reader of this story! This story is my new baby LOL! I usually know how I want to story to end but with this one I go with the flow and mainly listen to what my readers want! So if you have anny suggestion don't hesitate and tell me: Like what do you think will happen in the next chapter ?

They are both commited in relationship it's going to be hard to go back together. And yeah, it's very important to please Gisele but she can't forget about her happiness too!

I am actually writting the next chapter. It's probably going to take time since I like to update with long chapters; See you in a few Robin ;))

 

Thank you so much for the rating and the lovely review. Hope to see you soon !

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2013 12:13 am Title: Chapter 18

I'm glad to see them working things out for the better of each other. Being friends might help them grow more. Michael for sure needs to mature up. He isn't ready at all for a real relationship with lily.

Author's Response:

Hey xMOONWALKERx!

Yes, it's cool they can work it out for Gisele! Poor girl, in the middle of all! Yeah, Michael isn't ready for Lily yet ;) Let's see what happen next :)

Thank for the review and rating!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2013 12:05 am Title: Chapter 18

Why would Michael's ass tell her not to marry Usher? That's some hatin type shit! He's not in any position to tell her what to do. And now all of a sudden she wants to listen to Giselle? Girl bye. Giselle is a child. She should set a good example for her but at the same time she needs to do what makes HER happy. She had no problem marrying Miguel and acting like he was her father while shunning Michael. So I see no reason why my poor Usher should get the short end of the stick. Especially since he proposed marriage. Smh. Damn shame. And if Lily breaks up with Usher or doesn't marry him, I swear Naomi's no edges having ass and Michael better break up too. And I'm not joking. This is just craziness. Smh. 



Author's Response:

You know Michael! Even if he is dating Naomi he still want to believe Lily is still available! LMAO! Gisele's opinion is important for her she ain't marrying Usher is Gisele isn't ok with it. Well, I have to disagree on this one; it's not Gisele could have say something about her marrying Miguel after all. HAHAH, girl, this is your Usher now! Hahah, see why you are on his side. He did nothing wrong and all he wants is marry Lily!

"And if Lily breaks up with Usher or doesn't marry him, I swear Naomi's no edges having ass and Michael better break up too. And I'm not joking" <-- I am going to assume you want Michael and Lily back LOL

 

Thank for the review!!

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2013 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

- Congrats -


Happy 60th Review!



Author's Response:

YAY! Thank you hun :)

CHAMPAGNE NOW lol

Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2013 05:08 am Title: Chapter 17

damn you i know they was going to do something i know that they was but anyways i feel like michael is trying to get her back but the problem is usher - ring and that model girl



Author's Response:

Hey you! Oh yeah, they are attracted and Usher and Naomi not being here everytime isn't helping! No one know what Michael really wants! Let's wait the n ext chapter ;)) Thank you for the review and the rating!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2013 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 17

omgggg girl this chapter is O_O woooow love it the end was fantastic!! Them going on tour together is risky for their partners. Because they still love each other so sooner or later they are going to give in on that love.

I can't wait for next chapter!!!!

Author's Response:

Hey! Thank you for the review and the rating! Aww thank you, I wanted to end with something romantic ;$. Yes going on tour together will be bad for their partners, they are attracted and being so close everyday for an entire year is super risky. Let's see if they give in to that love ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2013 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh please. Lily is being a dumb ass again. She's gettin on my nerves again. Michael is a liar and cheater and I'm sure that hasn't changed. Ain't he with Naomi's crazy no edges havin ass? Please. That's a joke too. If lily is engaged to usher, she better do him right! Don't cheat on him with Michael's ass! Michael has not proved he is matured or worthy enough. He is a weak and spoiled and jealous ass man. Not to mention immature. There is nothing cute about a man who bounces from woman to woman. That's not sexy at all. Lily needs to wake up!!!!! They need to stop throwing the L word around because none of them know what the hell it really means. All this cheating, childish shit and immaturity has really gotten on my damn nerves. Neither of them are setting a good example for Giselle. She's gonna grow up to be a hot mess. And if Lily had any sense, she would not go on tour with Michael. 



Author's Response:

LMAOO! I never said Lily will give in to Michael again huh ;) Michael is still immature and Lily better find it out before she throw herself in his arms again! "Naomi's crazy no edges" HAHAHAHA. You made my day looool.Oh yeah, Lily shouldn't cheat on Usher at all and certzinly not with immature Michael. Indeed, he literlly throw himself at the first girl who showed interest in him. Let's all hold hand and ask Lily to wake up before it's too late. Oh yea, I did 't even think about Gisele, Gotta fix it!

Thank you for your lovely review as always :))

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2013 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 16

This story just gets better and better. I'm happy for Lily I hope Usher doesn't fuck her over. she deserves to be happy. like Lily I still dont get why dumb ass Michael cheated. I'm a jerk but its good to see him suffer xD

Author's Response: Hello :) Ow, than you hun! I tried to keep it interesting and it's basically thanks to my lovely reviewers that I still have idea to make my story juicy ;)We all hope Lily will get better and lives happily with Usher and I guess I have to make it last longer than I thought LOL. LOOOOOL, I feel you on this one, Michael is DUMB: Cheating on godess Lily with old Diana, Tsk Tsk Tsk Michael. Thank you for the review and the rating !!

Reviewer: mikeylover32 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2013 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

wtf is wrong with lily she know deep down inside she still love michael and michael is just  i dont know but i think he is going to forgive lily if usher do dump her he still have a soft spot and he know it but i still belive that they will get back together and hopefully they have another child

 



Author's Response: It's funny because iam_music seems to be thinking differently! I like how my readers have different opinions, I personally doesn't even know who to choose LOL. I guess they are both wrong! Being in love with Michael isn't enough, he cheated on her and even though it was a mistake, it's not something she can forget and it will hard to forgive him! Aww, you still think of another child? Got to think about it ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2013 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 16

Aw hell naw, lily shoulda slapped the fuck outta him. And then told his ass that he wasn't shit but a fuck piece for Diana's old hoish ass! I hope Usher and Lily make it work. Especially since Michael is a jealous ass hater. That's what the fuck he gets. He pissed me off all up and through this chapter. I feel no sympathy for him at all. And clearly he can't and won't do better than Lily so clearly he's talkin out of his ass because he's hurt and salty. News flash: nobody gives a damn! He brought all this on himself. I hope Usher rubs it in his damn face that he's hittin that every night and Lily is gon be his woman! To hell with Michael! I hope he will continue to be a jealous miserable mess and I hope that Lily will continue to do her thing and be happy and raise her child. Michael stays losing! 



Author's Response: HAHA! I bet Lily was too surprise to even think about slapping him! I take notes of everything you guys say and it gives me inspiration. I am actually writting another chapter! I'm glad Michael pissed your off, I guess my mission was accomplished LOL. Indeed, he acted like an ass and deserves to be treated like one! Poor Michael, hope thing will get better for him. Be back soon with another chapter love <3

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2013 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 15

Whoo yes! For once I have to say go lily! Yessss!!! This chapter gave me life! Lmao. Usher is a sexy beast so I am glad she got a piece of that. The nerve of Michael's ass thinking since they both had sex with other people everything would be ok and she would just fall back into his arms? I don't think so! I hope she and Usher will continue to see each other and I hope it makes Michael's ass sick to his stomach knowing that a young sexy stallion is givin it to Lily every night. That's what his ass gets. Meanwhile Diana's big wig wearin ass is married and just using him. Smh. Go Lily and Usher! I hope Michael ass is sick with it from now on. His loss. Dumb ass. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat!!!

YAY! I finally suceed to make you like Lily behavior! WOW, after 15 chapters LOL! HAHA, I know you waited for it for so long! And Usher ...

Oh yeah, she hit that and I bet she wants more than just a one night stand ;)

"a young sexy stallion is givin it to Lily every night" LMAO! You made my day loool!

Michael is so wrong if he thinks Lily is going to fall back in his arms just like that! HAHA loved your review! See ya soon ;))

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2013 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 15

oh my damn, well girl I am glad that she stood her ground. what Michael did.was beyond fucked up, I still can't believe he would do that to her but, once a cheater...always a cheater. Damn I still can't believe it. smh



Author's Response:

Hey girl! Lily did the right thing! she can't let Michael cheat on her and forgive him like nothing happened! And c'mon, cheat on her with her idol??? So fucked up! Thank you for the review and the rating ;))

Reviewer: skipper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2013 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG...i just read your story and im in love with it.I dont know how i missed without reading it. Love it and cant wait to read more. Great job ;)

Author's Response:

Hello skipper :))

WO, I'm glad you love it! I try to make this story interesting without being too mushy :) Thank you for the review and the rating!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2013 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

Wow.. Michael is a damn fool! How you gon chastise Lily for doing what the fuck your scary, skinny, timid ass should've done months ago which is get rid of Thirstiana's ass then on top of that you fuckin the mattress of Motown behind her back?! I can't! Now this is one time where I will side with Lily and say fuck Michael! As gorgeous and talented as she is, she can be doing the same thing. And I think she should. Revenge is a dish best served cold. And lily needs to serve that shit with ice cubes on top. I hope she starts seeing and fucking somebody else. Somebody young and sexy. Not old and worn out like Diana Ross. We need to bring Usher or somebody in this and let her fuck him. Michael has worn me out for the last time. I am done with him. Lily has a chance to win me over for the first time, so please don't let her mess this up. Michael has cheated on her and I swear she needs to get his ass back 10 times worse! I hope she cusses his ass out too on top of doing somebody else. 



Author's Response:

Hi Kat! First of all, I want to thank you for your support, your hilarious review and you ideas! I'm defo going to take notes of everything!

You are so damn right! Michael was complaining about Tatiana's behavior and Lily had the baklls to fix the mess and get rid of her. And all she got was to be cheated on with Diva Ross! Indeed, she could do the same but will she?

"Revenge is a dish best served cold. And lily needs to serve that shit with ice cubes on top." LMAOOO, i'm DEAD!

Oh yeah, Lily dating someone else is a good idea, and Usher? Well I would love to see that ;) I will do my best not to dissapoint you with Lily :)

Thank you again for the review girl :)

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