Date: Jan 29, 2013 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 22
Get the fuck outta here Michael. Whatever and whoever Lily is doing is not any of your fuckin business. Your punk ass can't even handle your damn business and tell that raggedy bitch you're with that your daughter is priority. But shit, how he acts she's not. Poor Giselle. Michael is such a damn coward and I dislike him more and more with each chapter. At the end of the day, Usher was at Giselle's party because Michael is a sorry bastard who can't be a stand up man and father. Fuck Naomi's bald headed ass and Michael's soft cowardly ass too. This is beyond ridiculous damn! The fact that Michael would even entertain a woman who would be so negative about his daughter or children period just makes me lose respect for him. Is he that damn desperate for a woman that he'd be with someone like that? Unacceptable and I cannot. I simply can't.
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I LOVE YOU SO MUCH KAT HAT IT HURTS
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I'm so done with Michael asting like a pussy too, he needs to man up and real quick because that's not how he is going to have Lily back! Hell, even if he acts like the man and father he should have been he won't have her back! Seems like Usher isn't gone after all... You made me want to write another chapter right now! I'll come back ASAP. <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2013 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this a lot!
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Thank you MJFiction's official cheerleader
Date: Jan 28, 2013 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 21
Aw hell. It's time for Naomi's long, no edges havin ass to go. Sounds like she's a high maintenance bitch and rude as hell on top of that. Not cool. And since Giselle doesn't care for her like that, all the more reason for her to bounce. Michael is only keeping her around cuz he can't have Lily and that's wack! Serve Naomi her damn walking papers please. Since he was such a damn punk and lily had to do his dirty work the first time in getting rid of Tatiana's bony desperate ass, lets see if he's able to break up with Naomi. I'm sick of her, she has to go. And this tour is goin to be a mess.
Author's Response:
FIOU
I thought you were really done with my crazy dramatic story LOL! Glad to see you ;) Oh yeah Naomi has to go! But If Michael is waiting for Lily to do the dirty work again he is wrong again! He needs to man up and figure out what he really wants too. Actually writing the next chapter! Much love!
Date: Jan 28, 2013 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
lol
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[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2013 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 21
one word craving
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[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2013 10:08 am Title: Chapter 21
Well, First of all...Naomi should not os reacted the way she did...she knew Lily is Gisele mother & Michael is here father too. I do wish Michael would dump Naomi but only if Lily would come to her senses on what she wants in life instead of acting a little childish...does she want Michael for him or only as a friend
Please update soon, Excellent chapter..keep them coming...always looking forward to reading more :))
Author's Response: Hello Robin! I see I am in your favorites! Thank youuuuuuuuu. Means a looot! Thanks for the review and the rating Well we can understand how awkward is it to catch your boyfriend and his baby mama hugging in bed! But yeah, Gislee was here so it's not like they were sleeping together! Yeah, you're right Lily should tell Michael what she really wants instead of making him beleive there must be a way between them. Thank you again. I'll try to update soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2013 03:42 am Title: Chapter 21
Man why did naomi's old crusty feet, weave wearin ass had to go and ruin the moment. I love that they are able to be friends, I hope lilly stays this way towards him for the sake of Gisele. I can tell she just loves seeing her mom and dad together, she might even make a plan to get them together, she is very smart lol. Please update soon, and thanks for the shoutout hun.
Author's Response:
Hello you! You're welcome for the shoutout It's thanks to my reviewers tha i'm still here :))
OMG! LMAO I just died at your comments about Naomi!!! Loved it hahaha! Naomi is super jealous and we can't blame her, we all know Michael is still in love with our Lily!! Yes, Lily should be friend with Michael for their daughter! Ouh! I like the idea of Gisele trying to kooh her parents u! I'm taking note ;)) I'll try to update soon !
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2013 01:32 am Title: Chapter 20
woah plot twist, this chapter had all kind of emotions running around. It was good to see that Usher didn't cheat on Lily but that it was her who parted ways with him.
Author's Response:
HEYYY you! First of all thank you for your review and the rating. Means a lot! I reached 3000 views and I'm so excited and i'm mainly thanks to my constant reviewers like you that I'm still writng! Much love <3
I'm glad you went through a lot of emotion reading my story LOL! It's all about that! I never wanted to do an happy and calm love story and even though I kno a lot of you are rooting for Lily and Michael, gotta take time to make it happen right! Yes, Usher is a good man and he truly loved Lily. Guess it wasn't enough to compete with the love he stil had for Chilli. Lily made the right choice. We all hope to see her happy again!
You're on time for the next chapter BTW ! much love :)
Date: Jan 27, 2013 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
Awe.. I actually feel a lil bad. I wanted her and usher to work but he's too close to Chilli and that damn baby hair. Smh. I hope Lily finds happiness with someone. I really do. This story has worn me out. Lol smh. I can't anymore. I just can't. Lily won't ever win. She just won't.
Author's Response:
Hello KAT! Thank you for the review! LMAO you lways make me laugh! It's way too late in France and my father is probably thinking I'm going crazy laughing in front of my computer! Oh no please! Don't leave us now, this is just the beggining LOL! with someone? You don't even want to think about a Lily and Michael ? Let's see what happened! Maybe she needs to stop chasing man and have time to find herself! If her relationship are so chaotic it's probably because something is wrong with her. She can't win... NOW! Hope to see you at the next chapter :)
Date: Jan 27, 2013 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 20
lily is learning now what we need is michael to learn not suffer and i got a feeling that michael is gonna wake up i think he need to take care of g that my nick named for her they daughter and then earn lily trust back and naomi just need to get the fuck out with her i dont want no baby ass point simple blank end of convo
Author's Response:
Hey! Thank you for the review! Aww you have a nickname for Gisele, how cute :)) I love the fact that my readers are become attached to the characters! It will be hard to earn Lily's trust. She still despise him for cheating on her with Diana and it happen 2 years ago! She needs time for her too ;) LMAOOO! Nobody likes Naomi and I tried my best to make her look friendly! HAHAH. love it! Next chapter soon
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2013 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait 2 reading more of this soon.
I like it! Keep up the good work! ^_^
Author's Response:
YAY! You read my story ;) I love the fact that you always suppot me! This story is like my new baby and I love the reaction on this one! Thank you so much for the rating and the review, means a lot! Next chapter already online but i'll let you catch up before LOL! much love
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2013 11:41 am Title: Chapter 19
OMG....I did not realize on how pissed off Michael can be with Lily's performance. Please update soon...I love it :)
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Thank you for the review and the rating! Yeah, Michael is ragging mad at her! Next chapter already online ;)
Date: Jan 27, 2013 10:05 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh hell. GTFOH. Lily needs to stop with this shit AGAIN. If she really wants to marry Usher, then she needs to be honest with herself. This back n forth shit is annoying me all over again. Clearly she loves Usher. So why is she purposely stifling her happiness? Hell she's done much worse so Giselle will get over it, shit she's a kid. And as far as her singing to Michael's ass. Oh well. That's what she doesn't need in her life. A cheating lying ass man. And idk why he's mad. He should be happy she even paid his ass some attention. Cuz if it was me, I wouldn't deal with him at all if it wasn't for Giselle. She needs to see what's really goin on with Usher, cuz I don't want them to break up. I'm sure he wants to get married at some point. Just not right now. But she can't keep doin this wishy washy shit. It's annoying as hell. You tell the man you don't wanna get married then get salty when he agrees? Girl bye.
Author's Response:
HEY KAT! I thought i make you loved Lily but I guess I failed again LOL! Indeed, she needs to think about her sometimes and Usher is here so why not fly off to Vegas, get married and get over with it! LMAO! She didn't even do it on purpose and here he is being mad at her! "He should be happy she even paid his ass some attention" LMAOO! You're right! She shouldn't be wasting her precious time with his immature ass. You are really rooting for Lily and Usher I see! ;) Let's see what happen on the next chapter which is already online by the way! Thank you again for your always so funny review!!!
Date: Jan 27, 2013 12:31 am Title: Chapter 19
OMG! I need to know what happens next!!!
Author's Response:
Well the next chapter is already online ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2013 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 19
Noooo come on, I need the next chapter like right nowwww. ugh its so good I can't wait!
Lily Preggo? Well I hope its not ushers. Thats for sure if she is. I don't think they are ready for a baby.
I hope that she explains to Mike that when she sang the song that it wasnt for him. That she used him as part of the choreo.
Author's Response:
Heyyy! Oh wow all my reviewers are eager to read what happen next LOL! Well If Lily is pregnant it's defintely Usher's since she is dating him for a year now LOL! You're right they are not ready for a baby! Well if you want to know, the next chapter is already online ;) ! Thanks for the review and the rating