[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2013 12:59 am Title: Chapter 24
Seemes Like Mike and Lily can't seem to get along anymore, what so ever. Gesh not gonna lie, I thought they wuz gon' have a moment when he.was.massaging her feet with his MAGIC fingers lmao!!
wow.mama kate let her have it in a good way But idk about Mike.
Author's Response:
HEY! Unfortunately yes, whenever they "friends" something come in their way and they hate each other once again :( Oh yeah, that was their little moment until Naomi ruined it again LOL
Thanks for the review and the rate :)) New chapter online ;)
Date: Jan 30, 2013 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 24
Drama and more drama. Smh. They have officially drained me. I'm so sick of micHael and this HO I just don't have the energy to talk about them anymore. And Katherine is tryna be matchmaker talking to Lily but she needs to talk to her trifling ass son. I hope Naomi cheats on Michael so he can see how it feels. I'm still angry at him cheating on Lily. All the crying and bs he did to get her and that's what he did? No. I hope Naomi hurts him in the worst way.
Author's Response:
Told ya! More drama in the other chapter too! Which is online BTW. LMAO! Naomi is tiring as hell she needs to leave ASAP before Lily goes off on her. Katherine is talking t the wrong person ut yeah Michael is a mama's boy she porbably think he is less guilty than he is. You're so right, let's hope Michael will feel her pain one day! Thank for the review babe ;)
Date: Jan 30, 2013 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes girl yes ready for it
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Date: Jan 30, 2013 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 24
ohh you got me crying damn I knew it all this time
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOO! Let's see how she react in the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2013 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 23
one word damn but if you got time on your hand then can you please check out she drive me wild please all authors ar reviewers but I still think mj and still in love with lily and lily just hiding every thing from him and for usher man go back to chilli and I know this is not necessary but Naomi get the fuck out woo I dont feel bad for her either and I thinkthis tour will help llily and mj like real talk www.I dont like or never will like Naomi .com victory is mine
Author's Response:
I left a review on your story :)
LOL, of course it's necessary that Naomi leave! She is annoying and bother everybody! Don't worry Usher is trying to get at Chilli, he just wants Lily's friendship :) YES they need to talk! Thanks for the review and the rate :)
Date: Jan 30, 2013 09:45 am Title: Chapter 23
Naomi is a childish, spoiled brat. I have no sympathy for her or Michael's tired ass. Lily needs to be honest and just tell Naomi's ass to leave. Clearly they are NOT compatible. All they do is argue and Naomi is just fakin it around Giselle. Please. All this arguing and bs is unnecessary. The bitch aint his wife so there's no reason for all the drama. She's not worth it or important enough for it. I'm glad Lily and Usher are still friends and I do hope he comes to visit Lily while she's on tour. Him and baby hair won't work anyway. I'm so sick of the idiocy though. Something has to give. Michael annoys the hell outta me and so does Naomi. Lily needs to stop being Dr. Phil and fix everybody's problems and be REAL. Tell Naomi to LEAVE. This affects her and her child too. Tell her to get her bald headed ass on.
Author's Response:
HELLO! Thank you for the review babe!
You're so true about Naomi, the girl wants everything and can't bear criticism. As long as Michael will be weak, he will not get Lily and Naomi will keep on being a bitch with him. Lily just doesn't want to do what Michael should do. He act like he is afraid of dumping Naomi. But she won't be missing! Yes, Usher and Lily friendship is the best thing she have riht now. Between Michael and Naomi's drama and her tiring tour, she needs someone to talk to and let's hope Usher will be the shoulder she needs. LMAO @ baby hair. We need Lily make Naomi leave, once again Michael can't take care of his business!
New chapter BTW :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2013 09:23 am Title: Chapter 23
damn next chapter please but still have hope yhat mj and lily get bak together maybe performing will.help michael and lily relationship and you know lily is still going to have those feelings so yea and mike know his butt still love lily but you know what they. say walk before you run and hou know if you fall I will catch and I will be waiting time after time
Author's Response:
LOL, the next chapter is already online! You're right, she can say whatever she wants she will still have feelings for Michael and Michael can date all the girls he will still be in love with Lily. Aww, you're last line is cute :)
Thanks for the review and the rating :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2013 08:21 am Title: Chapter 23
Im pretty much done with lilly. To me, she play to many games. Either she wants michael or she doesn't. Same with michael, either he wants lilly or the bug face bitch Naomi. They love each other but are to stubborn to admit it. They keep draggin people along like usher and drag queen Naomi. They need to really talk to each other and settle this. Michael wants lilly but knows she won't take him back, and lilly wants michael but her ego won't let her even try to forgive him. They are adults, so why can't they act like it? Plus they have their child to think about. How many guy is she gonna witness her mom with? How many arguments is she gonna witness between michael and bug face? This is not good for her. She is gonna run away one day because of this drama. They need to get it together.
Author's Response:
Hey you! Thank you for the review :) No don't give up on Lily just yet LOL! She obviously wants Michael but she is lying to herself and she still hates him for cheating on her with Diana and now he misses Gisele's brithday for Naomi's crazy ass. It's hard to forgive someone who keep on making mistakes :S And YEAH, she doesn't know what she wants LOL. Michael too, all he has to do is MAN UP and he will have Lily AND Gisele? Isn't it what he really wants at the end of the day? Drag Queen Naomi LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOO§ Loved it! It's true, they shouldn't drag people along but don't worry her and Usher is just friendship. You are obsolutely right about Lily's ego and they need to talk about it. YEAH! They should act like adults, for Gisele! YOU ARE SO ABSOLUTELY right! Great analysis babe!
New chapter online :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2013 07:54 am Title: Chapter 23
For once I am speechless, All I can say is I love it & please update soon
Author's Response:
Aww THANK YOUUUU!
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2013 07:24 am Title: Chapter 22
I wish both Lily & Michael can both realize what parenting is all about but I wish Usher would Leave for good especially Naomi.
please update soon :)
Author's Response:
LOL, we all hope they will but with Lily's resentment and Michael's immatureness it's almost impossible. Poor Gisele in the middle of all. Oh girl don't worry Usher, is trying to get his mack on with Chilli and he smply wants to be friend with Lily ;) And Naomi... SHE NEEDS TO GO! But obviously Michael's shy self isn't ready to let her go just now.
New chapter online BTW
Date: Jan 30, 2013 03:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Shit, I love this so much. Damn, I just need a weekly dose, if not daily. I can't tell you how much emotions I get, while reading this. I mean, during the time Tatiana was there, I wanted to slap the living daylight out of her, because of blackmailing mike and lily.
And Miguel, even though he was in the place where Michael should have been, I really like his character. He saw that between Lily&Mike, there was true love, and he wanted Mike to be in that place.
Gisele is a such a cutie, damn. Though, at the moment I think Michael DOES deserve to get some hate. I mean, he coulda postponed the damn shoot and went to her party.
Usher? I don't like him for the what he was doing. The fact that he was marrying Lily only because someone told him too. That just makes me angry.
Now, as for Lily... She's kinda dumb, but I can understand her. It must be hard, for her to be around Michael and Naomi, cause Naomi does seem like a slutty bitch, no offense, excuse me for my language.
Michael's dumb, too. Dumping his dirty work on Lily? He's gotta be kidding me. That's stupid. Come on, the guy knows he wants Lily, why the fuck is Naomi in the picture? That pisses me off. He could be a smart guy, and go to lily, the one I just know will take him back.
Anyway, enough of my ranting. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Do you have a kik, or IG?
Oh, and...I wanna co-write something with you xD.
What do you think?
Anyway, thanks for writing an Amazing story.
Love,
Shiniee xxx
Author's Response:
Oh hey new reader! Always to pleasure to have new here :) I hope you like my story! Aww :$ Thank you! I like my readers to love then nate and after pity my characters, it's not always mushy and happy and I'm glad you like it. It's tue about Miguel, he was dying but still thought about Lily's happiness. Gisele is my favorite! She went through a lot but always find a way forget them all. Usher, poor Usher, he loves Lily but he is IN love with Chilli :S. Lily went through a lot too and now she had to put up with Naomi and Michael drama. Michael is weak and immature, he needs to man up if he stil wants Lily because she sure doesn't need to a dude like that for her and Gisele. I loved your review and makes me want to continue :) The next chapter is already online BTW
KIK, IG? No... I don't even know what is it LOL. Is it some Applle, IPhone stuff?
Aww I'm flattered. I have 2 others story and it's quite hard not to give up and I don't think I will be able to keep up with another one... I'm very sorry. Maybe when Kiss of Life or Love Will Never Do will be over we could think about it!
Much LOVE to you Shiniee :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2013 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm really proud of Lily she finally thought things through and pushed Michael to follow what he should be following Naomi.
But I Cant believe that he even DARED to Miss G's birthday party how dare he even THINK of misssing her party than actually doing it. He missed 8 yrs of her life. WTFFFFF I could he actually do that and Just because of a damn short film.. I am SOOO Pist off At Michael.
Finally Michael stood up and dummped Naomi, i didnt mind her but her coming in between Michael and G is a no no!!
G should give him Hell for missing her bday. Good thing she mentioned Usher when she read the note! That must of hurt michael like hell.GOOD!!!
Uhhhh NO! Usher can come back and just be making out with Lily just like that unless it was planned. Don't tell me usher it trying to get it in with lily now that he is with chilly.
CLIFF HANGER GRRRRRRR
Author's Response:
Hey hey hey :) Thank you so much for the review and the rating! Yeah! Lily is done with Michael's childishness. If he thinks Lily is going to get rid of Naomi for him he is wrong! She is growing! Michael is a fool! Everything because he can't shut Naomi's mouth! He needs to show Naomi that HE is the man and that he will not accept her talking to him like that! G needs her revenge, yeah! LMAO! Usher is a player!
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2013 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 21
I was screaming when I saw this chapter girl, I didn't comment right away but I did read it right away!!! OH MY DAMNNNNNN this has to be my fave chapter it was great. And the end I was not expecting that. You go girl!
I saw the shout out
Author's Response:
HAHAHAH! Love it§ Thank you for your review and rating! I'm glad you like it! I'll continue ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2013 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm loving this a lot always continue!
#GO GO GO
Author's Response:
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! Much love :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2013 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 22
o shit forreal man I starting to not like lily got damn yhank god mike woke up and dump that let chill bitch victory dance and usher is a damn player and that that shit I dont like I yhink usher dont love her ass damn you got me fucked up and then I wonder what mike gonna do but other then that I think mj will confront her and g is probably going to be happy but still mad but at the same damn time need to get her shit togeter and she said michael weak huh swerve lily yo ass is backward she always talking about how she going forward and I hope chilli catch his ass to and then lily going to be like michael I need you and g should kind of be asamed of herself because she said usher like damn respect michael but at the same damn time I know michael learn today but liky us making me hate her ass real talk one yo ass suppose to be taken care of g and yo career not usher with a damn boner but still Lily got me fucked up shit I just hope mike stand up and take care of g by himself then lily can fuck usher all she want and be a whore sorry just mad as fuck right now at lily but proud at mj
Author's Response:
Hello you! Thank you for the review and the rating! How love how different your comments is from the previous comment LOL. Indeed, it's great that Michael finally stood up! Naomi is whack and he finally realized it! You're right! Lily says she doesn't want a man but she ran in Usher's arms! And Gisele was hurt too! She didn't know Michael was listening though. LMAOOO you so bad!