Date: Mar 21, 2014 11:11 am Title: Chapter 50
I MISSED THIS!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Author's Response:
Yeah I'm sorry. I'll try to. The ideas are written down for the next chapter, I just have to write it :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2014 03:16 am Title: Chapter 49
broken heart......i want jake n mikey being together in love............. nice chapter L.O.V.E
Author's Response:
We'll see what will happen for them. They are still both in love with each other so let's see what the time will bring. Thanks.
Date: Feb 19, 2014 11:27 am Title: Chapter 49
So she isn't pregnant. What a new low! Something tells me though, as much as Jake wants to move on, he still loves Michael. Oh well, I'll see what happens next.
Author's Response:
No she lied about her pregnancy. I think it's one of the worst thing you can do to someone. You're right, Jake wants to move on because Michael hurt him very much but he's still very in love with him. His love was very strong and even if Michael left him heartbroken, he didn't forget him and his feelings are still here.
Stay tuned for the next chapter :)
Date: Feb 19, 2014 10:44 am Title: Chapter 49
Explosive chapter!!!! Wow. I knew something was fishy bout that damn Elvis Marie. I can't believe she lied about something like that. Smh that's beyond trifling and I honestly have no words. Karma is gonna whoop her ass good and I hope it does, and I hope you will let us see it!!! Michael is getting his karma right now for how he did Jake, but that's really messed up what that ugly big chinned ho did to him. That's a below the belt hit considering how much Michael loves kids and wants one of his own. Wow. And it's so funny how the one person he basically shitted on is the first person he calls.. Jake. And honestly, I'm glad Jake is moving on with his life right now. He has someone, even if it's not serious. I'm glad that he isn't sitting around moping over Michael. Michael dropped his ass with the quickness, so I don't blame Jake at all for saying "hey I feel bad for you and I'm sorry, but I am still moving on with my life". Good for him.
Author's Response:
I know it's really crazy and so bad to lie about somthing like that, especially when you know how much it's important for a person. For the Karma, I don't know. I didn't plan something about it but we'll see.
No I think you're right. Jake had the good reaction at first. It hurts him to see Michael that bad and he wanted to run after him but he also reminds that this person is the one who broke his heart. He wanted to show to Michael that he can't come like this, crying and make Jake forgives him everything.
Date: Feb 19, 2014 09:25 am Title: Chapter 49
no he don't have to
Author's Response:
He don't have to do what? Who are you talking about,please? :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2014 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 48
Michael what's wrong with you why'd you do that.
Love this story need more now plesae!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for loving my story. New update right now :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2014 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 47
I WANNA KILL MICHAEL RIGHT NOW!!!!! AAAAAHHHHHH!!!! WHY WOULD YOU HURT HIM LIIIIKKKKKEEEE TTHHHHAAAAATTTTTT?!?!?! *tears*
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 05:55 am Title: Chapter 48
Ooooooh quick update! :D
I sense drama. Between Mike and Jake, between Michael and Lisa, between Jake and Pete. Jealousy, heartbreak. Not a nice world for a baby to be born in. ;)
Keep going girl, I loved this chapter. And I really loved the last sentence. It was mooooooving. :')
Author's Response:
Yes I surprised myself with this quick update lol. I had a litte time on my own and the envy to write came back too.
Drama is here and won't stop. You're a faithful reader of my stories and you know how much I love drama lol. Not a nice world I agree.
I'm keeping going thanks to reviewers like you who are always there. I know I love this last sentence lol.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 12:43 am Title: Chapter 48
oh my God...... nooo jake n mike should be together again its very sad they broke up.....:(
Author's Response: It's very sad especially in this way. They should be together but will they? Stay tune :)
Date: Jan 13, 2014 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 48
aaww i hope they will come baack to each other
Author's Response: Maybe / maybe not. Stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2014 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 48
omg!omg!! I missed the previous chapter! Michael broke up with Jake! I can't believe he did that! How could he do this to Jake?I mean...WTH??
Michael needs to take a lesson and learn a few things ... I know ... I know! It's a difficult situation but Mike has already admitted he loves Jake! He took this decision very quickly ... He didnt think Jake's feelings and everything that they lived together. Michael was selfish! I hope Jake and Pete have some fun and Mike get jealous!
I was reading this chapter and by coincidence I was listening "You'll See" (Madonna) ... Fits very well for this situation ...Damn!I almost cried! Poor Jake...
BTW...Jacksonfan I hope you had a wonderful Xmas! May you and your family have a new year full of blessings!
Thank you!!
Author's Response:
I know, I don't know either why I let him do this lol. It's a difficult situation. Michael clearly loves Jake but he wants a child, a normal life and family. He took the decision very quickly maybe too quickly and he will regret it soon. On this point, Michael was very selfish.
I had a wonderful Xmas thanks and I hope you did too. Same for you, I wish to you and your family a very happy new year.
Date: Jan 13, 2014 11:31 am Title: Chapter 48
Poor Jake. I understand where he coming from though.
Author's Response:
Totally. Jake's reaction is very strong but very understandable. He gave everything to Michael.
Date: Jan 13, 2014 10:27 am Title: Characters
anyone who really loves michael would never allow him to choose lisa over jake or jake over lisa. this is something that will always be a frustration for michael unless whomever loves him allows him to see both. to see both as a duo. if you dont allow him to he will never be satisified with one or the other. the only way to satify the duo is to allow them to see both. anyone who has a problem with idea of seeing both jake and lisa doesnt really love michael. for if they did they would know by not allowing him ur causing the duo to be in pain. in emotional pain. why would you want him-them to live frustrated and not satisifed.
Date: Jan 13, 2014 10:25 am Title: Chapter 48
Michael had some nerve showing up to Jake's place. He needs to take his ass home and be with him wife, the person he chose over Jake. I agree with Allison though, he needs to move on. Pete sounds like he's cute and fun, so let's see what happens with them. And it's none of Michael's business who and what Jake is doing. Take your cowardly ass home Michael! And leave Jake alone, they aren't friends and won't be and I don't blame Jake at all.
Author's Response:
Can't agree more on some points, it's really easy to come and hope they can be friends after what Michael did. But maybe Michael has already some regrets. Jake's reaction is really understandable. He was hurt and he's still so he can't forgive to Michael so soon.