[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2012 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh geez i can tell that marilyn is going to be trouble! he pulled a knife on michael!! noooo! bad marilyn! play nice now... and whoa, he killed a lot of people. i'd be terrified if he were my roommate! omg he freaks me out already and it's only the second chapter! hell, he freaked me out on the first chapter! his eye is scary too...
Author's Response:
Haha! He will be trouble, I can promise you that!
Lol! I'd be horrified if my roommate said that to me! Haha! Yeah, he freaks my sister out too (like, in real life, my sister hasn't read the story)
Omj his eye IS weird. I don't even know what that is. When I first saw it I thought it was a glass eye but that would mean that he'd have to take his actual eye out right? Why would he do that? And I think he has two normal eyes now, so that can't be it. I'm pretty sure it's just a contact lense or something... I'll hafta look that up :)
Date: Dec 02, 2012 11:28 am Title: Chapter 2
wow this Marilyn is crazy lol...I just like the part where Marilyn explained why he was there...I just couldn't help imagining Michael looking at him and trying to act like it was good lol...Smirking and stuff whereas he was scared to death lol.
I think I will love this story very much!
Author's Response:
Lol! That was the goal ;)
Haha! Oh my Gosh... imagine how awkward it would be just standing there when someone is telling all about the murders and other crimes they've commited and then you realising that that guy is your roommate! Oh geez...
:D Yay!
I just read your new slash story, OMG I love it! It's so good! And Jake is actually really sexy... lmao! Can't lie.
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2012 10:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Damn, Marilyn is creepy as fuck, but cool. lmao!
Author's Response:
lmao! He'll get worse... trust me... ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2012 09:48 am Title: Chapter 2
What the actual f*ck?! Marilyn, you bastard! Don't you ever put a knife to Mikey's throat!
Well, in real life, Marilyn is a nice dude. But here... (not that you're a mean author. I'm pretty mean too, I let a ginger rape poor Mike in my story...)
Anyway, this was an awesome chapter again! ;)
Keep going! <3
PS: oh, and the 'I fell', doesn't matter. Pretty funny now you mentioned it. ;)
Author's Response:
lmao! I loved that reaction!
Yeah, I'm a fan of Marilyn, so I do like to think that he was a pretty nice guy, and he has an awesome sense of humour! I love Marilyn <3 lol! In this story though, I'm making his personality more like his stage persona (insane and creepy).
Lmao! A ginger... oh geez... the souless ginger... haha! That made me laugh! Was that story Sensitive Secrets?
Thank you!
Lol... I didn't think it was a big deal, but I didn't want to just leave it and have you sit there wondering what kind of drug I was on! lol! Yeah, I laughed a bit too when I noticed it XD
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2012 09:04 am Title: Chapter 2
I adore this, girl!! Marilyn is scary as heck, if I must say. Feeling so bad for Michael lol but okay. I look forward to seeing what else is gonna happen to him. You're a great writer, and you prove this point more with each chapter you upload. Much love <3
Author's Response:
XD He's only gunna get scarier from here. Not only s it the beginning for Michael, but it's the beginning for you guys too ;)
Aww thank you so much! I really appreciate that, that's such a nice thing to say! <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2012 03:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Wooowie! Poor Mike, and then to know he's gonna change...
Now, Marilyn, be nice to our Michael or else I'll come in the story and beat your ass! ;)
But I wonder what crime Marilyn commited...
Please continue, I like the concept! <3
Author's Response:
lmao! I might as well just add in the summary, Eltoie Makes A Cameo!!!
Haha, trust me, you're gunna want to beat his ass more than a few times :P
Hehe... you'll see soon enough >:D
Thank you! I fell! :D
Date: Dec 01, 2012 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the plot of this new story! It's very intriguing...You're always have good ideas...
I like this first chapter very much...But one thing surprised me was to see that Michael's family thought he was guilty...He was the perfect student and stuff, no real clues to arrest him and they seem to believe he killed his neighbour...It's strange...
If I were roommate with Marylin Manson, I would be scared to death lol...I'm not really a fan of him but I guess this story will be really good!
Keep going!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy to hear that! I was actually worried that people wouldn't want to read it because the girl doesn't make her appearance until a few more chapters, and I know how much people love their romance ;D
The thing with his family was that since he was accused, it seemed like society and everyone around them were telling them that Michael was guilty; so it sort of came across as peer pressure. When everyone is telling you one thing, they found it hard to not believe it, and with the "evidence" that the cops had found, it got increasingly harder. But yeah, I just made them not say goodbye to him to kinda make Michael's situation a lot rougher ;/
lol! Me too! But because I'm a fan I'd probaby hug him XD
Will do! :D
Date: Nov 30, 2012 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I'm working on it, x)
Promise :)
Author's Response:
Yay! :DD
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2012 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Marilyn is so scary (/.)
Poor Michael, I woulda been like "Oh hell no! Y'all kno that Michael did not do that Mm no!" Etc all over the court room xD
Continue!
You should really read my story, The Raven.
Author's Response:
lol! He is, not gunna lie there.
Lmao! Too bad I don't have a character like you in my story; Michael would probably appreciate it :)
I must admit, the fact that you mention Edgar Allen Poe in that story intrigues me... I just might have to ;)
But you have to update the story Ours! I liked that one!
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2012 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this!! Poor Michael /: I hope everything turns out ok. Much love <3
Author's Response:
:D Yay! I'm glad! Haha, chances are it won't turn out okay for awhile to come yet ;D
<3 Much love to you too! :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2012 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great so far! continue :)
Author's Response:
Glad you think so! Thank you! I will! I'll try and get another chapter up this weekend because I kinda wanna get this one off the ground :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2012 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow this is sooo different! Carry on girl!
Author's Response:
XD Haha thank you! I will! <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2012 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
:( Aww! I feel so bad for Michael! How could they accuse him of murder, rape, and vandalism!!?? Michael would never do that. -_- And the judge is... URRRGGGGG! She annoyed me. And Seacrest School sounds scary! I would never want to be in Michael's situation! Marilyn is scary already, I can just tell that he's going to be trouble! Don't let him corrupt ourr Mikeeyyy!
great first chapter! Can't wait for the 2nd one!!! :3
Author's Response:
Haha OF COURSE he'd never do that! But, if I didn't make the people idiots I wouldn't have a story lol! XD
Haha, I designed her to be annoying :P
Oh yeah, who would? It would be AWFUL to be accused and charged for something you didn't do, have to live life with a bunch of juvenile delinquents, and have your family not even care!
lol! Marilyn is supposed to me scary. I'm sure that was portrayed by the picture in the banner! Lmao! It freaks me out a bit actually..
Thank you! I'll try and get another one up this weekend! :)