Date: Jun 12, 2014 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol you're welcome. And whoop whoop okay can't wait to see them up here tweaked lol. Also is Street business 2 up there? Its kinda tough to navigate through stories up there since its all together in posts... Like for example I found your story Strictly Business up there I believe (the other one with Ebony...it's perhaps sped up a few years?) and after leaving and trying to come back to it...It like evaporated...I'm not sure how to search for things up there. I'm just a bit confused. Lol I'm trying to figure out how to navigate through this site.
Oh and Id love to read the story your describing lol..when you remember the name please lemme know.
Author's Response:
Her name is Heaven Sent! Street Dreams is there, and the sequel should be there too...as for Strictly Business that's ANOTHER story that I wrote, but I kind of painted myself into a corner and never finished it because...I had nowhere for it to go...or no ending.
I haven't been to MJEOL in like 5 years so...I have no idea how it works or what it was looking like. Can you use the Search Function on the forum? I know it's hard to read because it's not in chapters but that's because it's just a forum and not specifically a site for Fan Fiction, hence why it's not as organized as this one...
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2014 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
17?! Oh my goodness. Well let me just say my how you've evolved! The story is still written fabulously but now your a BEAST at writing. And I agree it would be sweet if you considered reworking that as well! Lol speaking of In Between Friends...I found that last night up there once finding Street Dreams and I read the follow up chapters and was flippin out! Those few next chapters are bomb! oh my goodness..I have no words. I wanna talk about it but I don't wanna ruin it for others lol. Im excited to see more of that! Whew!
Yes, it looks like this site has some pretty good stuff up here. Im like a fat kid at a candy shop right now.
Author's Response:
LOL yes! I was 17 when I wrote that story, and I cringe now when I think of how much it sucks, but thank you. I should definitely consider it. As for Between Friends...hahaha, I'm going to post those few chapters but I want to change some things because it's kind of jarring and doesn't flow the way I want it to. So, when I post the chapters here, they may be tweaked just a little. I'm trying not to give anything away.
There's a story on there about Mike and a character named Charisse. LISTEN. That sister is a WRITER. I love, love, love it and I can't remember her username or the story but maaaaaan...I miss her.
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2014 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Woaaaah really? I Was Made To Love Her follows that far? Yes! That is so awesome. I can't wait to see their long journey.
Wow yessss you've been around for awhike writing! Since you said that your older stories are floating online somewhere I took the liberty of googling Street Dreams and BOOM it came up on Mjeol. You have to be a member to read the stories I believe soooo I made an account lol. I'm currently reading Street Dreams. Which is wonderful by the way! Im excited to read the rest you've listed but I want to be surprised for Family Values since you are reworking that piece, so I shall wait patiently to read that. Btw Michael is wonderful as a bad guy...I love seeing him in that light.
You should know I'm an eager beaver to read practically anything you've written simply because you are just that wonderful :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Thanks so much! I re-read that story last night and it's TERRIBLE. Totally shows my naive 17 year old way of thinking. Street Dreams may deserve a reworking too. While you're on MJEOL, you may want to check out 'Between Friends' which is the other name of 'I Was Made To Love Her'. It has more chapters (hint hint) lol. There are some REALLY good stories on there.
Date: Jun 12, 2014 03:52 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
I'm gonna come out and say it... yeah I'm attached to Ki! I love everything that she stands for and I just love the dynamics between her and Mike. I adore Rocked Worlds and how they met btw!
I really want you to finish "I was Made to Love Her" however, if you feel getting "Family Values" (I haven't read yet but I am curious) out of the way first, then I'm ok with that as well. As long as you continue to write then I'm good with it! Lmao And goodness, I'm amazed at the longevity of Rocked Worlds. Makes me wish that I could've searched up MJ fanfics way before '09... I can only imagine how the stories were like then.
Also, it's funny because this whole time, I kept picturing Sofia Vergara with he feisty self as Roxy but atually Shakira works too. Lmao
Anyways, whatever direction you decide to take I'll follow because well, your stories are too damn good!
Author's Response:
Awww Hazel! Thanks so much! LOL. No, you wouldn't have wanted to read Rocked Worlds. The original is...AWFUL. LOL. What can I say, I was in the 10th grade! hahaha.
Anyway, I'm glad people have this attachment to Ki like I do. I might change her a little for Family Values...I'm toying with the possibilities. Especially since she will be significantly younger than Mike (hint hint).
Man, thinking about Family Values makes me want to start on it now! But...I must finish Rocked Worlds...which is about to get crazier from here. Roxy is a curvier and chubbier Shakira with red hair.
Thanks again for the feedback!
Date: Jun 12, 2014 01:11 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
I love the Keisha character and would not mind another Michae and Keisha story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad people like Ki!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2014 04:02 am Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
I love your stories, PERIOD! So whatever you decide to do, im fine with it... But... I would love it if you finished I Was Made To Love Her. I gotta know how Michael and Kiesha are dealing with the pregnancy.
Author's Response:
Thanks1 I will probably post a couple of follow up chapters and try to work on that story while I'm working on Family Values.
Date: Jun 12, 2014 12:31 am Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
as much as i love keisha, I would really (as u put it) like MJ to move on to someone else lol! family values does sound interesting. I personally love your work and yep I will b eagerly waiting for family values! <3 <3 <3
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the feedback! I might just move on to someone else. I don't know...this is hard!
Date: Jun 12, 2014 12:31 am Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
as much as i love keisha, I would really (as u put it) like MJ to move on to someone else lol! family values does sound interesting. I personally love your work and yep I will b eagerly waiting for family values! <3 <3 <3
Date: Jun 11, 2014 11:17 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
So, you've done an amazzzing job with the three stories of yours that I've already read. I think that your characters and your work are beautiful, among the best I've seen of any mj fanfictions.
Obviously, I'm in love with your characters. But I would like to see you expand by writing different characters than these. They're special and I believe that they have their place. What was it that Michael always said? As an artist he lived to become more and to create new things, be innovative. Michael and Keisha will always be, but maybe Keisha isn't the only woman that was perfect for him.
To wrap this up, I vote new story with new characters [However, I would love to see you finish I Was Made to Love Her, too!!!!]
Wow, it always seems funny to me that mjfanfiction has been around for as long as it has. My impression of it has always been post June '09. But I see now that some of you more experienced fans were already well-delved into Mike's fictional world :)
Thank you for these stories, girl. I wish I had a name to respond to other than Geminis_Gift. I feel at this point like we could be close friends, I've followed your stories for so long. :)
Love to see what you throw us next!
Jazz
Author's Response:
Hey Jazz!
Thank you so much for your words! I was toying with the idea of another female heroine, but people seem to love Ki so much, and I have so much fun writing for her that I don't know if another character would be quite as great (lol).
But you're absolutely right, and you've made my decision harder! LOL.
Yes, fan fiction has been around for a LONG LONG time. There are some REALLY old and FABULOUS stories floating around on the net from the old KOP board and there might still be a ton up on MJEOL if that still exists. I used to post fan fiction on those boards and have been posting since 1998 with long breaks here or there. Post June '09 was when a resurgence of sorts happened. But the older fans have always been around, and their stories should still be around on Google.
Btw, you can call me Des!
Date: Jun 11, 2014 10:22 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
Love triangle seems exciting. But i definetly love made to love you so maybe finish that 1st?
Author's Response:
Family Values will be a shorter story, so it may be advantageous to get that one out of the way, but 'I Was Made To Love Her' is an epic Longform story...with parts like Harry Potter lol...and it may take me awhile to finish it, if I should ever finish it.
I may have to bite the bullet and do both. Hmmmm.
Date: Jun 11, 2014 10:09 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
Please finish I was made to love her
Author's Response:
I intend to, but it's a LONG story.
Date: Jun 11, 2014 10:03 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
I love Keisha please keep her
Author's Response:
I will, I think!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2014 09:54 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
Hey yeah, um. I was a reader of 'I Was Made To Love Her'. Love the song. Love the story. And I will NEVER stop waiting for an update. <3 As for me getting tired of Keisha? Please. She and Michael are the air that I breathe.
Author's Response:
This is SO sweet! I'll see if I can add a couple of new chapters to that story that I've finished in like a week or so! I love Mike/Ki together!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2014 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked Zafirs character, he's too cute. I most definitley would love to see Keisha. Aubrey and Roxy are such great characters too they are so ride or die! Id love to see them again as well. Pppppplllleeeease keep Kenny (aka Blair Underwood...who by the way is super fine..I love that you picked Blair to portray Kenny in looks) he is such a strong character.
Ok cool I understand. Ooo yay I Was Made to Love Her is LONG? Yes! Ok then if you prefer to do Family Values first oki doki, I'll take what I can get :)
Are there any other stories you've created that you wouldn't mind sharing with us before you officially retired?
Author's Response:
Zafir a toned down version of Roxy. Less harsh and less ghetto. LOL. Yes, I Was Made To Love Her is my version of an epic. It's history through the years from childhood probably until Michael's death, and their journey through life as they fall in and out of each other's lives.
As for other stories...hmmmm. I've been around since like 1999 or 2000. I'll have to dig through some boxes at my parents' home and see if I can find any early things that I've written, just for good measure. But I'm almost certain they're floating around online somewhere. The OLD old version of Rocked Worlds, Games People Play, Street Dreams 1 and 2, Strictly Business (which I don't think has an ending, but is a really good story, Mike isn't famous in that one--and he's not famous in Street Dreams either, but he's a BAD GUY).
I'll see what I can do on those. I might have to go to some old friends/readers of mine and beg them to send me what they have if I can't find the discs. I still have the original binders that contain the original stories, because I used to handwrite them during classes and type them out.
Give me some time...I'll see what I can do.
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2014 08:13 pm Title: A Note to My Awesome Readers...PLEASE READ AND RESPOND
Keisha, all day everyday!!! Her character is a powerhouse. I would love to continue to see her! Choices, choices, hmmm, I've been feenin for I Was Made to Love Her to make a comeback! That story is so fabulous and i really wanna find out how everything plays out....BUT I'm also anxious to see new work like Family Values though. I would love to see Family Values as a Mike/Keisha story! These two are magic together. Sooo....can you possibly finish I Was Made To Love Her, then do Family Values? Or vice versa. I'm greedy. I want to read both.
This note got me all excited and giddy :D I'm glad there's more to come!
Author's Response:
'I was made to Love Her' was designed to be a LONG story. I wish I could work on 2 things at a time but I've tried it in the past, and at one point a story starts to suffer and lag. Hmmmm...I might just do 'Family Values' first, since I don't think that will be a long story...and then go back to 'I Was Made To Love Her' which will probably be my last fan fic story before retiring (again. LOL I've been doing this a LONG time).
Zafir is in the original Family Values. Would you prefer to see him in this one? Or is everyone okay with Ki/Aubrey/Roxy? Do people like Kenny that much?
What changes would you make if you could?