Date: May 01, 2013 02:16 am Title: Chapter 11
Woaw! Beautiful intime chapter!
I miss this story, your stories so much!!
Please girl, continue! You're such a tlented writer!
Date: Apr 30, 2013 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad they got this time away. It was so needed. But it seems like they may need to talk more too.. The convo about kids didnt sit so well with me. And they've never talked about their firsts with each other until now? Interesting.. Michael is so sweet though. He really and truly loves him some Keisha. I think what's important here is that they don't lose that intimacy. Not even about the sex per say, but that closeness to one another. That's part of what makes them so great. They have the ability to open up to one another and talk about everything. Just being in each others presence.. They need to schedule these away trips more often. In addition to love making more often too. All of those are important elements.
Date: Apr 30, 2013 09:35 am Title: Chapter 10
Excellent chapter girl! I'm soo happy that you're back!
Date: Apr 30, 2013 09:12 am Title: Chapter 10
**Smile** Glad u decided to continue this one.
Date: Apr 30, 2013 05:01 am Title: Chapter 10
Awww this was sweet and sexy. It's great to see them as one once more. I feel for Ki. I know she wished she had waited instead of giving herself to that jerk Marseilles. But the past is the past.
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2013 02:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Whaaaaaa???? You're back!! OMG, yayyyy! I'm super late to the party, but better late than never. I was wondering when this story would take off. So happy to have you back in the MJ fan fiction realm because you are a fantastic writer, girl.
And I can't wait for these two to use that passion for something other than fiery arguments and frustrations, because it is longgg overdue!
Author's Response:
Hi Deena...yes I'm back. For awhile I had no inspiration to write...and then I'd have a chapter, and it would horrible and I erase it and start all over...I happy to see you here <3
Date: Jan 12, 2013 02:01 am Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
please, girl, come back!!! I would love to read the next part, girrrrrrrrrrrrrrl!!!! where are you ? Don't let us wiat tooooo long!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2012 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
Love, love, love, love, love itttttt!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2012 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
Damn you really know how to tease your readers haha another great sexy chapter:) cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm re-writing the next chapter because it's not flowing like it should y'all. chapters concerning sex are ALWAYS notoriously difficult because u try not to go overboard, while keeping in tasteful at the same time LOL
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2012 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
Must be nice to be able to have Michael Jackson hooked like that. Lucky bitch lol
Date: Dec 17, 2012 09:18 am Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
Dammit I'm speechless.. Keisha is so damn lucky. That is a man who is in pure love and complete adoration of a woman. His woman, his wife. Keisha was more than ready to get her guts beat up against that bookshelf but Michael brought it back down to reality. I love this. Their sex life has always been bomb but the love that's behind it makes it so much better.
Date: Dec 17, 2012 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael is sooooooooo sincere. :) made me drop a tear. :) I absolutely love the way you put it up. <3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2012 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
Damn you Michael and your sensitive side... I thought he was going to crack and just fuck her against the bookshelf but he wants to savor it. Ugh. So incredibly frustrating but too freaking romantic at the same time.
It's ok Mike, you've got all the time in the world in that cabin! You can let that animalistic side of you come out and let her have it, y'know! LMAO don't mind me, I'm in a silly mood it seems.
Can't wait for the next part!
Date: Dec 16, 2012 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
Aww! I just love Michael in this story! He's just so sweet! Can I have him? Lol!
Date: Dec 16, 2012 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 8--Part 2: The Foreplay
Beautiful update girl, so intense!
Mike is awsome here, wanted to savorate his wife! That's so gooooooooood!!!
Can't wait do the next part!