[Report This]Date: Mar 01, 2014 10:59 pm Title: Storms
It's about time you updated. :p Her daddy was wrong for what he did. What kind of person chooses an employee over his own child? That's some bull. Good thing Melody quit so that she could protect Trinity because had Melody not been there then Triniy might've been dead. And I can't believe Trinity had the nerve to be stubborn with Maestro when he had her in his house on his couch taking care of her for two days without complaining. Ain't this some mess. I wonder what this talk between them is gonna be about. Don't wait too long to update!
Author's Response:
Lol my updates will be more frequent I promise! Her dad is a hot MESS that's what he is! And melody is a very good friend for trinity to have! Even when everyone else might leave her, melody will be there! (Maestro too lol). And loooool poor girl was salty but she knows she LOVES her some maestro! She's head-over-heels in LOVE; nothing can change that lol. But yeah, things will start to get more and more interesting! Thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Feb 21, 2014 08:54 pm Title: Astoria
GURL?!?! You need to be more consistent with updating this story because it is the BOMB!!! You are an absolutely phenomenal writer!!!
...AND I AM IN LOVE WITH MAESTRO!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I know, I'm terrible at updating :( but I will soon! I just have so much going on! And who doesn't love maestro??? He's my love! Thanks for reading!
Date: Feb 03, 2014 05:10 pm Title: A New Ally
Crap in a hat clara is back i need an update hopefully Trinity and maestro talk again next chapter i want more this is awesome
Author's Response:
Ikr :-/ her ass needs to leave lol. I would've been super angry to know she got her job back >__< Thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Feb 01, 2014 09:09 am Title: A New Ally
motHERFUCKER CLARAS BACK AGAIN CHRIST i wanna punch that bitch so bad omg u dont even knowwwwww im so sucked in to this fic its like insane XD
Author's Response:
Ikr, that betch >__< nothing good can come from her return. Thanks for reading! And lol I'm glad you're hooked! ^__^
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2014 11:35 pm Title: A New Ally
Hmmm, I think that Clara is more than meets the eye. I think she's involved in all these things somehow...
Author's Response:
Ooooooh nice guess. We shall see though ;) Thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Jan 31, 2014 10:37 pm Title: A New Ally
I'm sorry but I don't feel bad for Trinity right now. A hard head makes a soft ass, and in her case some horrible ass luck. The audacity to not listen to Maestro when he's dealt with this life far longer than she has and actually knows the doppelgänger and what he's capable of.. To blatantly go against his wishes AND kiss him too? I can't. She's just dumb. There's not that much curiosity in the world. Especially the one they are dealing with. She should've trusted her man's judgment. Now she wants to bitch, cry, and moan that he doesn't wanna talk to her dumb ass. I don't blame him. This will teach her ass a lesson. And I knew Clara would be back. That's probably the stem of all the bad luck too. Amongst other things.
Author's Response:
Lmfao awww well, I can definitely see your side of things. She's so stubborn and hard-headed, you'd think she fully realize the consequences of Maestro not talking to her >__> she can be a bit of a brat and you're right, that's a little too much curiosity. But she'll learn. But all this is new to her and she doesn't know how to deal with everything. Take into account that she's still young and a little naive too lol. Obviously Maestro had every right to be appalled that she would pull some junk like that, especially since he warned her enough for her to listen lol. Yeah there ain't nothin good about Clara's return. Anyway thanks for reading! ^__^
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2014 07:01 pm Title: A New Ally
Lol, I totes called that Clara bear would make an appearance again, esp after Daniel started talking about a bad luck demon.
and I can't express how much I love the concept of the two different worlds, and how the children were transported there. Much like superman, but the first media that came to my mind was supernatural.
anyways, great chapter; can't wait for the next update (and if Clara doesnt get her ass kicked in the next chapter I'm gonna do it myself @-@)
Author's Response:
Yeah!! It's a lot like superman actually LOL! Well tbh, this story has elements from several other fantasy/supernatural stories/shows/comics ;D and lawd Clara is ridiculous but there was a reason she came back ;D thanks for reading! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2014 06:59 pm Title: A New Ally
Uh...oh... ITS FREAKING CLARA!
Author's Response:
Right? Smh yeah she's back unfortunately. Thanks for reading! ^__^
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2014 12:38 am Title: A Stroke of Bad Luck
smh. That's all I can say right now besides the fact that Trinity wouldn't have to go through some of these things if she would just listen to instruction. I don't blame Maestro for not wanting to talk to her after she had been messing up from the get go. As far as the thing with Sid, the phone works both ways. If she really wanted to keep in touch with Trinity then she shouldn't have waited so long to get in touch with her. She was always too busy wth Rex anyway. Who wants to be around that? She must've forgotten that just like her, Trinity has her own issues to deal with too. Now this thing with Daniel, could he be a part of the supernatural world too? hmmmm.
Author's Response:
All very good points my friend but also, this whole thing that's causing bad luck could be having some type of effect on everyone else around her in her life too ;O and yeah homegirl should learn to listen for a bit. She can't put a thorn in her and Maestro's relationship by doing small, pointless and idiotic things like not listening to him lol. But in some ways, she still has the temperament of a child so *shrugs*. She'll get better at it though. And yeah, Daniel will become some type of fixture in her life. Yup, Sid will be aiight in the end though looooool. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2014 12:09 am Title: Unexpected Assistance
smh Trinity is slippin'. You know you messed up when he kicked you out of his home. She better get it together. It was cool of the doppelgänger to help Trinity master her skills and all but I do feel like it's a front. Maestro knew him longer than Trinity did and since Doppelgänger is a part of Maestro then I'm pretty sure that Maestro would've been aware if Doppelgänger had changed or not. And Doppelgänger just might be a part of this bad energy that he told Trinity about. And with Maestro and Trinity having that disconnection...it could probably trigger whatever it is even more.
Author's Response:
Look at you, giving an in-depth review lol. Yeah *sigh* unfortunately trinity is too caught up in the fact that he looks like maestro to use common sense lol. Plus I think we've already established that she's stubborn as hell. That girl has a hard time listening! Lol but she'll definitely learn and grow from her mistakes. Everything is gonna be a learning process for our girl. And lol you'd think she'd listen to maestro, seeing as how he's lived much longer than her and has had a lot more experience with everything. But like I said, she'll leaaaaarn. A Doppleganger of anyone is never really "good". But we shall see how things develop ;) thanks for reading, twin! ^__^
Date: Jan 29, 2014 04:01 pm Title: A Stroke of Bad Luck
I feel so terrible for Trinity right now. The poor thing has some very bad luck.
Author's Response:
Awwwww :( things will hopefully look up for her :) Thanks for reading! ^_^
Date: Jan 29, 2014 03:59 pm Title: Unexpected Assistance
Ouch! That was cold.
Author's Response:
Welllllllp, Trinity's got to learn. And poor maestro felt hurt :(
thanks for reading ^_^
Date: Jan 26, 2014 09:36 am Title: A Stroke of Bad Luck
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
And I'll be sure to update soon :3 Thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Jan 26, 2014 12:35 am Title: A Stroke of Bad Luck
Dafuq???? Things start getting weirder and weirder...
Author's Response:
And they'll continue to get weirder and weirder and so on and so forth lol. Thanks for reading! ^__^
Date: Jan 25, 2014 11:35 pm Title: A Stroke of Bad Luck
Hmm interesting ending. I think this story is going really well and take your time when you are writing, there's no need to rush, I'm not saying it's rushed.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I try lol, I know there's nothing worse than a rushed chapter :( Thanks for reading! ^_^