Date: Sep 14, 2014 07:13 am Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
On what MJ boards did you hear about this?
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2014 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 54 Trailer to Seqeul
Wow it's been so long!
Author's Response:
HEY my Lovely... how you been did you ever check out the sequeal I might be adding more chapters to the second one Here but it actually is 3 stories and the begins of a fourth... let me know I'lll add the new chapter tomorrow or later today PEACE
Date: Aug 02, 2013 07:00 am Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
please keep writing-)
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2013 05:47 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
You have some good stories under your belt i must confess.
But this one i shall say wasn't all that great.
It didn't in my opinion add up to it's exspectations you sumed it up to be.
I liked a few scene's in this but not entirly everything.
Yes your have lots of reviews for this but it still doesn't make a story a master peace like you think it should be.
I do like your latest stories there great i been enjoying them with every fiber in my bone.
But this one i guess it's fair in middledy
Not your best it mainted.
You tried though and that's all that matters.
Good day
Author's Response:
Well Thank you for reading and I'm glad you did I pushed the story up for those who wished to read it or read it again who hand't seen it first go round. this story was nothing more then theroy for me and I wrote it as a venting after a break up with my boyfriend of 7 years getting all my emotions out in these characters that is why they may seem dis jointed to you
and I just summerizied the characters and there interation nothing major, I know it's not perfect i have grammer spelling errors but people still loved it, thanks for the likes on the latest works, I never expected what i got on this let alone the others but this was the first I got high rattings for
this one pas pushed my the reviews or else i would have stopped writing it but I made it a series do go check out Part to let me know of what you think of what i have so far that comes from a different dynamic, okay I' m done
Thanks for the Critisum any way
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2013 02:51 am Title: Chapter 54 Trailer to Seqeul
I remember this story it was really good and i liked how Michael ended up married with his own babies for a change something that Lisa never gave him.
This was highly dramatic and intense OMG so much has went the ending was so great with dancing and stuff it was cool. I also like how Michael helped them both with there careers.
Excellent story with so many moments. I may read it over again. Oh and i must check out the sequel also.
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful and eventful story with us. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2013 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 54 Trailer to Seqeul
I'm such a huge big fan of your work!!! I read this whole story along with your others. Sorry I never reviewed before cause i didn't have an account those times but trust me your work is great. Can you please read my story please it's just a funny story nothing serious so please no offsense to it. thank you
Date: Jan 26, 2013 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2 -The Client
LOVE IT
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2012 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 54 Trailer to Seqeul
Woooww 0.0 I can't wait 4 the sequel!!!! & the Alicia Keys song sure fits. This is all types of emotional rollercoasters going on here. Damn! I'm eager 2 read this soon!
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2012 07:14 pm Title: Epilogue - Dance for you
Awww I'm glad they finally had there honeymoon. Lolz & dang that was steamy right there with her giving Michael a special dance just 4 him. Haha & dang he knocked her up again 0.0 she pregs that's gonna be like there 3rd child together. Welp congrat 2 them! Lolz I enjoyed the whole story with full of emotions, & steamy scene's haha. But yeah thanks 4 sharing this with us!
Date: Dec 05, 2012 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 47 Paint this House - Part 2 Natalia comes into her own
Haha great show the lovebirds did together! & that's great things are picking up in Natalia's career aswell & cool she doing a jewlry line? She's dofo gonna do good. & she deserves 2 have a man like Michael 2 love her like that & make her happy. Btw Teddy&Rodney cray 4 wanting 2 see Mikes wify when they already married -_- xD good chap!
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2012 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 46 - Paint this House Part 1... adjusting to Married Life
This was great! & dang Mike&Natlia sure gets it on 24/7 xD haha! But yeah I'm glad Maria's acting career is doing well now & she got Ricardo 2. & wooww cool ass video, only if it was 4real :P but I could picture it all in my head. Lolz loved it & this chapt was crazy good! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2012 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 45 - The Wedding Night
Yeah I see this is surreal 4 the both of them. They both can't believe they actually is married now. It will sponge in 4 them. XD
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2012 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 44 The Reception "....Let's Dance"
Wonderful reception with the greatest singers!! :D u picked that right ppl girl! & that wedding cake looked so good lolz I went 2 a wedding last month how ironic loolz.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2012 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 43 - That's why I wanna Fight/ The Wedding
Wooww awesome wedding!! & they are finally hubby & wifeyyy! ^_^ congrats to them & I loved her dress & it was cool that prince was there 2 sing & they really wasn't beefing with eachother. Great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2012 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Part 2 - Let's have a Little fun at Michael's Expense
Nice drama free chapter!! Loolz poor mike trying to take care of his babies, I thought that was cute that he call Natlia 4 some advise & btw I like the dresses & the cakes. Haha