[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2012 02:34 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
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[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2012 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Let's Talk about it
Aww he is so good to her & I really hope that child is michael's. I hope it's not marvins.
Date: Oct 27, 2012 11:48 am Title: Chapter 30 - Let's Talk about it
how romantic of Michael to be there for her children!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 29 - "Late"....Who is it, Her Strength
Wow again maria is a good friend to natlia she's even gonna try to move from michael so natlia and michael could be together. Maria's cool & damn natalia told it like it is. I know that baby is michael's to because she slepted with him weeks before she was raped by marvin. Oh gosh this story is getting really deep. I can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Making a show.... Welcome to Hollywood
Threesome relationship I'll add. But I know it would get to natalia some how.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Shattered Moments, Shrill screams & the Dark Truth
Yay I love when michael is the hero in a way like her night & shinning armor.
I'm shocked he didn't beat marvins ass 4 this he took it 2 far 4 beating her like this. & wow her daughter is smart to.
Ughh ohh what's gonna happen during this triangle now maria,michael & natalia? I gotta read more! This chap was great with all kinds of emotions just tugging at ya.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 29 - "Late"....Who is it, Her Strength
o my goodness! they both cant be angry with Michael! I hope he can figure this out.
p.s. thanks for the flashback lol
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 26 - How to Heal a heart mind and body
I knew it I just knew it! He done fell inlove with her. & I hope he daughter will be alright & damn u marrvin 4 messing things up.
On to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Reasurance, Comfort... Screams into the Night
Wow intsense & it's getting real now but I also noticed how maria has been a good friend to natalia to helping her get to the hospital & with her daughters which is big of her to. & dang I can tell michael really can't stand marvin either. But I liked how michael got to spend time with natalia again tho. Can't wait to read the next chapter girl.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 24 - No Explanation Needed
I'm glad michael found out what happened now & wow marvin had the nerve to come to the hospital after beating her??? Ugh I can't stand abusive men like that smh.... michael should beat his ass foreal!
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 23 - The 'Vacation' is OVER - Back to Reality
Wow poor natalia:/ she doesn't deserve to get batterd like that. & she got daughters they could really love there mother behind stupid marvin's ass. I'm glad maria didn't let him take the girls that night.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Goodbye Gay Ol`Pari`
I like how michael got inspired by the girls on creating his song. It actually fits to & dang 6 carat ring? 0__0
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Goodbye Gay Ol`Pari`
Ok now it's really time 4 me to catch up lolz
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2012 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 29 - "Late"....Who is it, Her Strength
Awwwwewe shhhhhhhiiiiiiiit!!!!!
Date: Oct 25, 2012 10:07 am Title: Chapter 28 - Making a show.... Welcome to Hollywood
i hate that she feels this way!
Author's Response:
Who about what
This chapter was ment to show you that Natalia is in love with Michael but doesn't know how to express that with everything that is going on with her. she knows she shouldn't be jealous because Maria i getting the attention but she is because yes she does love him and he does love her
and Maria shes just over it, he did what he ment to do with her show her she can be treat well by a an and now she wants something more for herself and shes sick and tired of feeling like a third wheel she knows he's in love with Natalia she knows she can't have him and she would prefer to not have emotionless se anymore she herself wants real love and she can't think about it until she can get him to admit that he is in love and start pursuing that so she can start pursing her own