Date: Nov 03, 2012 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Trials and Tribulations
All right now, I've just spent my whole Saturday afternoon reading this story. Just coudn't stop...I am sooooo looking forward to seeing what happens with this threesome next - keep up the good work! ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Truth and Consequences part 2
Her daughters are so cute & I'm so glad the babies are michaels though. I know they having problems & all but mayb michael can learn from his mistakes to. I can't wait 4 more!
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Truth and Consequences Part 1
Maria has a point he promised to treat natlia better but he didn't only to just screw her over. Like if he loves her then he really needs 2 start showing it. & dang I gotta see what's happening 2 there babies now.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 34 - The Trial Begins
Shit is getting real foreal & dang michael needs to work this out with Natalia to. & that baby could be his to. She was raped by marvin but I also rememberd she had sex with michael before she was raped so that baby could be his. I hope so tho.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 33 - You've been Served - anybody but him
Wow soo much is going on there & natila is getting second thoughts about michael? He needs to really tell her how he feels & cares 4 her to.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Getting back on track - The Last Straw
Aww damn I feel bad 4 maria's situation & dang michael don't play xD maybe that will teach marvin a lesson hopfully.
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2012 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 31 "Late" Part 2 - Guess who's coming to Dinner
I'm just catching up & Wow maria is preggos to?? 0_0
Date: Nov 02, 2012 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Truth and Consequences part 2
This story is awesome! I'm obsessed! I hope Natalia and Michael can get through this tough time.
Date: Nov 01, 2012 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Truth and Consequences Part 1
p.s. as one of ypur most loyal readers, PUHLEASE keep updating
Date: Nov 01, 2012 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Truth and Consequences Part 1
i can feel how hurt natalia is!! i hope the babies are ok
[Report This]Date: Nov 01, 2012 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Truth and Consequences Part 1
Nononononononononononoooo!!!! Ah dang it!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2012 08:05 am Title: Chapter 34 - The Trial Begins
I'm not going to make this complicated I'm just going to tell you that I like this story
:)
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2012 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Getting back on track - The Last Straw
I still had not made a comment ... I was waiting for the right moment
and the time has come ... WOW! The apex of the story were the last five chapters. You did an excellent job. Natalia - Michael - Maria. You created a great plot and I thank you for update often
Anyway ... I think Natalia's baby is not Michael's.
But Maria's...
If I'm right ... More drama is coming!
Thank you and congrats!This story is really good!
Dri
Author's Response:
thank you
but I love comments lots of comments keep me posting or the right kinds
about the baby not saying who the baby daddy is until chapter 35 which will come up as 39 on here
will there be more drama HELL YEAH you don't wann mess tomarrows chapter a character non of you saw coming is going to pop up keep yor eyrd open because it's about to get Really REALLY REAL
Date: Oct 29, 2012 11:25 am Title: Chapter 32 - Getting back on track - The Last Straw
ok what, huh? now theyre both knocked up? this is insane, and i love it!
Author's Response:
of course they are do you not remember how often michael was GETTING-IT-IN if they both didn't get pregnant then he was doing it wrong lol
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2012 10:53 am Title: Chapter 32 - Getting back on track - The Last Straw
:O. That's my baby damn he a bad bad man I don't like this nope I don't but micheal is the better man with that. OOOH dont get me started
Author's Response:
i rally debated on how I wanted the fight to go down if I wanted michael jst to go in there and go ham on Marvin and leave him a bloody mess and no one would know who did but it was hinted s to who
or have Michael not go after him at all but I found it to be better to have Marvin provolk him and he not really take the bait and leave you with the act that in to hits he had Marvin flatt on his back and him telling him how badly he could mess him up
because that show the maturity in his 41 years that he was not going to b tricked into beating his ass even though that is what he initally went there to do but he realized he wasn't worth it at this point