[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2012 10:13 am Title: Chapter 44 The Reception "....Let's Dance"
Diamonds and pearls is one of my favorite Prince songs :)
P.s. sorry for not making my review complicated :/
Author's Response:
get your play list ready the New chapter is on the way mommentarily check here in about a half an hour for the new update
Date: Nov 10, 2012 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 43 - That's why I wanna Fight/ The Wedding
Such a beautiful wedding! And I love the whole Prince and MJ dynamic because I love them both :) awesome chapter
Date: Nov 10, 2012 09:50 am Title: Chapter 43 - That's why I wanna Fight/ The Wedding
lol he's flip floppy. LMAo but for real tjat was beautiful lol. Michael is being such a freaking tease. this chapter made me laugh and cry! good job
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2012 05:22 am Title: Chapter 42 part 1 - I Adorn you
Pardon me for not reviewing the latest chapters ... I've been very tired because of my work. I was not able to comment on many other stories ... I'm too tired! But over the weekend I can do it!
The last chapters were really awesome! Michael finally overcame to the fear and admitted his love for Natalia. The birth of the babies was beautiful! I was very moved by this part of the story.
I think you're the first author who decides to make last chapters the most happiest and funny. Readers suffer throughout the story and it is fair having some chapters with happy moments. I always beg to authors for having scenes with Michael dealing with the teenage years. It's something Michael could not live and would be great to to make Michael live this period even in a fanfiction.
I'd like to see Michael acting jealous of his daughters because theirs boyfriends ... how Michael would talk to Prince about girls and everything else ... if you can write it .. I would be very happy!Maybe on another story?|o|
Congratulations!!It's a wonderful and well written story!I love it!
THANK U!
Dri
Author's Response:
Thanks dri but if you really want a story about Michael dealing with teenage years you HAVE too read my series called MOMENTs in time
you get Paris datting and Michael not likeing it spying and all the stuff you would supsect michael to do Princes Blankets teen years and two other kids of his he has during the course of that stories teen years Must read if that what you wann see
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2012 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 42 part 1 - I Adorn you
That was my favorite modeling parts of that show girl I was jealous but I got curves I can't be that jealous and finalllllllllllllyyyyyy!!!!!!! LMFAO M is trippin they look the same she might have te accent but they both still look beautiful
Date: Nov 08, 2012 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 34 - The Trial Begins
Oh girl I have to catch up. Lolz &thanks 4 the shotout.
Date: Nov 07, 2012 06:25 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
lol i am constantly getting them mixed up. But maria makes a good point, ehy should she stay of nothing is official? i am glad Michael said those beautiful words to her!
Date: Nov 07, 2012 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 41 - Does He Know?
she said yes!!!!! i am sohappy for them. Now natalia is due any second, this so beautiful
Author's Response:
natalia already had the babies last chapter and Maria had hers before Michael purposed where were you at and sory for the mix up when I was writtng my than yous I wrote Mama2012 instead of Spearl I fixed it I gt you nam and missmjs2012 mashed tohether by mistake
but let me know what you think aboutthe argumen and confession
Date: Nov 06, 2012 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Baby Talk... Mayli moment
OOOooooooooooooooooooooooooh girl!!! Nice great update, here!!!!! A boy and ...... a girl!!!! He's really the king!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2012 10:09 am Title: Chapter 40 - Baby Talk... Mayli moment
awwwww babies!!!!!And I'm glad that creep Marvin is getting locked up!! Now him and Maria have an agreememt!! this chapter was too much awesome!! lol
Date: Nov 05, 2012 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Michael's Testimony part 2 - The Face Off
lol, i was kinda said you didnt mention me lol. BUT anyways, I swear Sneddon is such a douche, natalia was hurt and no matter what the circumstances are with her and Michael, it still nappened
Date: Nov 05, 2012 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Michael's Testimony part 2 - The Face Off
Wow, I read all the new chapters today and I'm speechless!!!! You're amazing girl! I can't wait to read the next one!
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2012 09:23 am Title: Chapter 19 - My city of Paris day 1
Hi :)
im sooo sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I've fallen behind on some stories recently thinkin I'd get back to them and then I realised I was like 20 chapters behind on this one! Which is sad cos I really do love this story! Then I saw you mention me in your summary and thought ok now is the time to get back on this story!! Hahaha :)
ANYWAY! Loved this chapter as usual, went through the others to refresh my memory and this chapter was new to me :)
thanks for updating this story so regularly and I promise I will keep up on this cos reading this reminded me how much I love this fic! I'll review all the other chapters as I go along too haha
<3
Date: Nov 05, 2012 09:13 am Title: Chapter 39 - Michael's Testimony part 2 - The Face Off
Aw that poor little girl is going to have to testify :( hopefully it can help the case! Can't wait to read more!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 03, 2012 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Trials and Tribulations
Aaaaaaahhh hes going to tell her he knows!