[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 01:33 am Title: Chapter 42 part 1 - I Adorn you
Nice chapter I had 2 comment one more time before leaving lolzz I love Adorn by Miguel!!! Great chapter & I will more tormow!
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 01:29 am Title: Chapter 41 - Does He Know?
Wow this was so good to haha ^_^ & congrats 2 maria having mikes child to. Wow he knocked them both up in a way when ya think about it xD but yea I like that babie's name to. & I'm glad michael finally confessed his love 2 her damn man about time & yay he poped the question 2 I can't wait 4 the wedding & there lives r better now even tho they'll have there ups & downs but hey that's a part of life anyway. So yeah great chap! Gonna read some more sometimes tormrow!
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 01:13 am Title: Chapter 40 - Baby Talk... Mayli moment
YaY!!!!! Great chapter girl! I love the kids rooms there so pretty mike really hooked them up & I'm glad he loves Natalia now the way he do. & congrats on the babies there so cute & I love there names nice picks & I'm also glad michael worked something out with maria 2 that was good & woooo Marvin is guilty hahahaha that's what he gets 4 putting his hands on women maybe he will learn his lesson after he gets get put away. I'm so happy & I really loved this chapter finally some happiness here 4 them all. Glad 2 see everyone patched things up. That' what's up!
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 12:52 am Title: Chapter 39 - Michael's Testimony part 2 - The Face Off
Dang mike told it like it is...I'm glad he did so ppl wouldn't think he's a pedo either that's just proof right there that he does love womem. Thanks 2 Natalia & Maria 4 being in his life. Things maybe messed up right now but I know they could get through this & as 4 him being black belt that's cool I do knw his father was into boxing to & he taught his son's about boxing 2. Pretty cool haha anyway great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 12:31 am Title: Chapter 38 - Michael's Testimony Part 1
Wow this some deep shit right here. Poor michael I knew it hurt him seeing Natalia's daughter see everything & the way he choked up I could picture that to. I think michael is handling hiself well & he's telling everything the best way he can.
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2012 12:22 am Title: Chapter 37 - Trials and Tribulations
Wow well I'm glad he had that talk with his mother & she knocked a lot of sense into him now. I just hope for the better for Michael & Natlia. #Team Michael &Natlia. XD
Date: Dec 02, 2012 06:01 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
I'm gonna start catching up! ^_^
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2012 09:19 pm Title: Epilogue - Dance for you
Bravo bravo bravOoooooooo
O_o Mk that o did not come out right
Date: Nov 27, 2012 07:52 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
oh yeah and the Prince amd MJ thing had me laughing forever. Hes flip'floppy LMBO
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2012 07:50 pm Title: Epilogue - Dance for you
that was beautiful darling. ive been a bit MIA so im sorry but i am caught up and loved how she danced for him privately!! i am looking forward to the sequel ans to see now their family dynamic works out!!
Date: Nov 24, 2012 04:49 am Title: Epilogue - Dance for you
Brilliant chapter, like all of your wonderful story!!!! I read all the chapters again, and again, and.... again!
Please girl, don't stop ! I'm waiting patiently for the sequel! You're amazing talented writer.
Thanks a lot for sharing with us this beautiful story!!!!
Date: Nov 20, 2012 09:07 am Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
Hey I'm sorry that I haven't posted a review but I have college to deal with and I haven't had time to catch up on some stories i've been reading as well as wrtitng my own. It can be a pain in the ass but I'm hanging on
Your story is like a god damn movie you know from lifetime lol. Hell I could totally see this in a lifetime movie.
It would be an honor to write a story with you (if you want to)
Pass by my story called "the myth of the king". Read it and let me know if you like it. and if it's slow and confusing then that's good cuz that how it's suppose to be.
Otherwise good job with this story. good action, good romance and good music.
My type of shit right there lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2012 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Natalia Larane Andrews
Hey, this is really good :) but remember to correct your grammar and stuff and use more names instead of 'he' 'she' etc
Date: Nov 15, 2012 12:51 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
Your story is truly good! You have me caught on every time:) Your wonderful:)
Date: Nov 14, 2012 08:03 am Title: Chapter 45 - The Wedding Night
Perfect wedding night :) loving this story it's amazing!!