[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 02:54 am Title: Chapter 4 - First Meeting
Love the update and I agree that was just his public image when ya think about. I saw a special on netflix called the real Michael Jackson and they said a lot of unknown things about him that no know's about. People that knew him personally and hung around him. So I definitly get what ya mean that's what mean and sister always would talk about. He was just a normal red blooded man that had needs like every other man. We all knew he loved kids and loved to be a kid and help people. But there was still always another part of him people never knew about because he shelded his image so well and he was so private about things. I most definitly like his other side to lolz
And continue!
Author's Response:
Story has been Updated
you may wann get caught up because it's about to get hot under the collar
the first real sex chapter is going up tomarrow so you may wanna get caught up and the last up chaptr 7 is going up today so get caught up because the sex starts n chapter 8 and keeps on going till chapter 22 yeah count it over 14 chapters
yes you'll be sore after that much sex so get caught up see you on the other side
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First Meeting
OMG!!! i cang wait to see the next chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First Meeting
wow loved this cant wait for more :)
Author's Response:
stay tuned... it's about to get scandlous
Date: Sep 27, 2012 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 4 - First Meeting
oooooooooooooooooooh, go on girl!!!
I'm so exciting !!!! I can't wait to read what is gonna happened between them!!!!
Author's Response:
well get ready because it's about to get HOT... I have written all the way up and through the next 8 parts of the story and let me tell you YOU AINT SEEN NOTHING YET
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 03:02 am Title: Chapter 3 The Dance
Haha! I like that song
I wonder who he chose?
I can't wait 4 more.
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 02:58 am Title: Chapter 2 -The Client
Wow he definitely hide under his image I see. Lost his V went skinny dipping almost got someone preggo I see.
It's ya think like wow maybe he really was like this growing up. We all think we knw the real mj but in reality we don't. He could of messed around a lot and we'd never know.
Love the chapter!
Author's Response:
a lot of that actually came from people that knew michael that shall remain nameless that stated those things in articles and so forth so alot of what was mentioned was true but you'll never find it unless you know where to look and let me tell you there are more little truths I'll spill in there as well... yes the story is fiction but it's based on some facts.
I'm sorry but people really need to stop thinking this man was the saint of men... he got down like every other guy the only differnce is he knew how to cover his tracts that what "Confidentiallity agrements" are for take it or leave it belive it or don't but please take the man off that unrealistic pedistal because that is what it is "unrealistic" he drank, cursed would give you the finger and had sex people need to get over the hype and get real michael was a MAN full blooded and he got down like one so if you stay tuned i'll spills some more little juicy tidbits you may not have known
again I say you can take it or leave it but it happened maybe not how i discribed it because this is a fictious story but it based on some facts belive what you wish but you decide
[Report This]Date: Sep 26, 2012 01:33 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
Ooh can't wait for his decision :) I love that song gotta getcha ;)
L.O.V.E <3
Author's Response:
well you'll seee his decision... and I thought getcha fit the scenrio don't you think they are trying to GET him to pick them am I not right
Date: Sep 25, 2012 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 2 -The Client
ooooooo! i like this bold and forward "client" hmmm
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2012 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Natalia Larane Andrews
I definitely see where this story is going now. I really like it! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
chapter 2 is now up were you get a feel for our client wink wink... where do you think that I'm going with this i'm intrige to know Michael doen't make his grand entrance till the end of chapter 4... I now I'm mean... but I have allthe way up through chapter 5 writen and 5 is so long i'm spliting it up into 3 pats just to tease you all keep an eye out
IF MY REVIEWS STOP I"LL STOP POSTING'
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2012 07:42 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
I think this I'd going to be really good :)
L.O.V.E <3
Author's Response:
chapter 2 is now up were you get a feel for our client wink wink... where do you think that I'm going with this i'm intrige to know Michael doen't make his grand entrance till the end of chapter 4... I now I'm mean... but I have allthe way up through chapter 5 writen and 5 is so long i'm spliting it up into 3 pats just to tease you all keep an eye out
IF MY REVIEWS STOP I"LL STOP POSTING'
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2012 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Natalia Larane Andrews
Keep going :)
Author's Response:
hey just writting all my readers reminding them Please read and keep up with the story
I've started the vacation chapters and I put A LOT of work into those chapters espically adding the pictures so please read and COMMENT that motivates me to keep posting updates Daily
so kep up he reading and I'll keep up the posting
Date: Sep 24, 2012 04:20 am Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
hmmm, i am intrigued
Author's Response:
chapter 2 is now up where you get a feel for our client wink wink
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 11:58 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
Wow this is interesting I can't wait 2 read more.