[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2012 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Motivtion
Lol since I am one of the freaks you refer to, I enjoyed that...a lot. Hmmmm Natalia has some issues but I know that Michael got this
Author's Response:
hey just writting ll my readers reminding them Please read and keep up with the story
I've started the vacation chapters and I put A LOT of work into those chapters espically adding the pictures so please read and COMMENT that motivates me to keep posting updates Daily
so kep up he reading and I'll keep up the posting
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2012 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Part 3 - Let's Talk About... SEX
Just catching up and wow that was steam right there & I like that song from Luda perfect for the chapter. Lolz
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2012 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Motivtion
Aaaaawwwweeee shiiiiiooot she gon get it when she get to his crib......
Author's Response:
hey just writting ll my readers reminding them Please read and keep up with the story
I've started the vacation chapters and I put A LOT of work into those chapters espically adding the pictures so please read and COMMENT that motivates me to keep posting updates Daily
so kep up he reading and I'll keep up the posting
Date: Oct 03, 2012 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Part 2 - Dirty Little Secret
damn, hmmmm damn, thas all i have to say
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2012 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Part 2 - Dirty Little Secret
Hottyttttttttttt and UPDATE!!!!!!!!! -takes a shower- I'm still hott!!!!
Author's Response:
girl it hasn't even begun to get hot
Date: Oct 01, 2012 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Afterglow
Thank you for this update!!!!
Hope she's gonna find the strength to leave that bastard and live in Neverland...
Would love to read hot sex scene between them...:)
Author's Response:
Oh believe me things are coming down the pipe line to tell you exatly what gonna happen with that but I'm not telling on that note
and sex beteen them hum I can say for certain there are gonna be getting it in one scene is comming shortly and from chapter 15 to 22 there are at least 18 to 19 scene between them so you will get your action. and they will be HOTTT! with a Captial H
Date: Sep 30, 2012 09:15 am Title: Chapter 5 - Part 3 - Let's Talk About... SEX
that was incredible, hmmmm maybe some more details of their intimacy? like Michael's POV of watching them together? but such a good chapter.
Author's Response:
Hold your horses it's coming it's coming good things "cum" to those who wait (see what i did there...Play on words) god you ladies are freaky wanting to see all the freaky stuff
I'll make a deal with you I might go back during the sexually dry part of the story and show the missing scenes from that night as each of them think abut what happened
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2012 07:31 am Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
Awesome I love the song sex room :)
L.O.V.E <3
Date: Sep 30, 2012 04:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - Part 2 - A Night With The King
Love it!!!!!!!please, continue, i'm dying here!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2012 02:04 am Title: Chapter 2 -The Client
Great chapter :)
Date: Sep 29, 2012 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Part 2 - A Night With The King
i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: Sep 29, 2012 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Part 2 - A Night With The King
Damn I'm loving this story already
Author's Response:
hey just writting all my readers reminding them Please read and keep up with the story
I've started the vacation chapters and I put A LOT of work into those chapters espically adding the pictures so please read and COMMENT that motivates me to keep posting updates Daily
so kep up he reading and I'll keep up the posting
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 5 – The Morning After, The Night Before
Update soon!!!!! I am officially hooked
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2012 07:29 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
This is my first time reading this story and I truly love it already :)
Author's Response:
hey just writting ll my readers reminding them Please read and keep up with the story
I've started the vacation chapters and I put A LOT of work into those chapters espically adding the pictures so please read and COMMENT that motivates me to keep posting updates Daily
so kep up he reading and I'll keep up the posting
Date: Sep 28, 2012 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 5 – The Morning After, The Night Before
Awsome!!! MOOOORE please!!!!!