[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2012 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Maria's Mascarade
Wooo that was hawt... I thought he was gonna ware her out well it looked like he did. lolz
That was nice & steamy I can't wait to see what happens on there vacation ;)
Date: Oct 15, 2012 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Let's 'Slow' Down... A Night on the Town
Wow I can't believe she finally is letting her guard down
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2012 08:50 am Title: Chapter 17 - Hotel hide away Day 3 - Speaking in Tongues Part 2
that was so sweet!! I truly appreciate that you update daily.
Author's Response:
I update daily because I'm 15 chapters ahead of where your reading so I'm two weeks head of posting and to be truthful I think I have only 7 chapters left to write maybe 8 and Trust Shit is about to get HEAVY after this vacation is over you don't wanna miss a chapter
Date: Oct 13, 2012 07:04 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
Could u read my story "My professor, Mr Jackson please. Tell me if i should delete it
Date: Oct 13, 2012 01:40 pm Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
I couldnt imagine!!!! But darling, I am a loyal reader and when I love a story I will be sure to let you know!!! so love from now on I will review every single chapter to show you how much i love this story!!
Author's Response:
I need a atory promototer someon to help me not only reach out to my current commenters but one to get me new reers as well if your up to the job it's yours
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 11:05 am Title: Chapter 16 -Paris Day 2- Speaking in Tongues Part 1
hmmmm if i were natalia, i would be going insane!!! I swear, you jave me logging on every day!!!!
Author's Response:
aww it reviews like yours that keep me postng this story on the daily... it saddens me though when I have like ten readers and only two are keeping up with the story at a time
especially when I put hard work into putting the pictures into the story, and ys Natlia is going insane that is the point he's killing her with the taste of how he could really do her that he won't let him. he's screwing with her head
I thought it was important and a cool way to have them interact of him not saying many words to her at all all of his thoughts were told through expression touches and caress through his eyes. can you image being isolated in a room with him and him NOT talking to you and the only way he gets his thought acrossed is through his eyes
but you can still read his every thought through his eyes
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2012 10:32 am Title: Chapter 16 -Paris Day 2- Speaking in Tongues Part 1
She in and out of love she just needs to relax and chill
Author's Response:
you have to understand... she wants to love him but in a three way relationship which isn't a realtionship but a contractual obligation how do you let yourself free fall for someone that is only there with ou ecause he paid MILLIONS of dollars to be with you when ever he chooses and could just as easily drop you today and go to the other chick
it's a complicated scenerio and shes been hurt Badly mentally and physically, so she can't afford to let her heart go to anyone no matter how charming there being at the time she has to think about her emotions and then on top of that her childrens emotions
I just waned to create a drastic difference between the two woman, Maria is pretty easy treat hr nice she's gonna love you... but hes young, shes never felt real heart brak before... Natalia has, because she feels it every day with Marvin so shes guarded but give it time don't count Natlia out yet
Date: Oct 12, 2012 09:10 am Title: Chapter 15 - Now why You Wanna Go and Do That
i cant wait to see what happens next!!!!
Date: Oct 10, 2012 09:42 am Title: Chapter 13 - Day 4 - Bittersweet Illusions
oh wow, how intense!
Date: Oct 09, 2012 11:53 am Title: Chapter 12 - Day 3 - Sweet Sighs
So good chapters girl!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2012 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Day 3 - Sweet Sighs
i love how mj and maria are connecting!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2012 02:17 am Title: Chapter 8 - Motivtion
love this one too! It was hawtt!
And that's my song to. XD
Date: Oct 06, 2012 02:36 am Title: Chapter 9 - Maria's Mascarade
Really HOT chapter!! Michael knows what he likes...!
Can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response:
hey just writting ll my readers reminding them Please read and keep up with the story
I've started the vacation chapters and I put A LOT of work into those chapters espically adding the pictures so please read and COMMENT that motivates me to keep posting updates Daily
so kep up he reading and I'll keep up the posting
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2012 02:18 am Title: Prologue - Marie Renee Marquez
New reader and I love it already!
I will read every chapter.
Author's Response:
Welcome new reader hope to see more of you soon try and keep up with the story it's about to get hot to handle so don't miss a beat
Date: Oct 04, 2012 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Motivtion
love the chapter sooooooooooo much!!!!!
please continue