[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2012 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3 the wrong turn
Dang joe is rough like always. not like michael was having sex with her or something gees.
& that scene was scary lolz
I think the next chapter should be all about the wigi bored and them connecting to the bad ghosts in the house and it should come out and scare them almost killing someone.
And the ghost she definitly aim at tina, michael should act quickly by saving her as much he can.
I hope this helped & I can't wait 4 more!
Author's Response:
IKR:), and thank's you gave me an idea and the next part will be AWESOME ,like alway's
Date: Oct 02, 2012 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 3 the wrong turn
the chapter of this is called chapter 3 wrong turn,it's in the middle of the chapter 2 great grief on number 6. so if you dont think i posted chapter 3 i did.
sorry for the misunderstanding
Author's Response:
i fixed it ,everything's fine now,now it's in the right place
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2012 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1
& btw I love all the pics to :D
Author's Response:
thank you so much for you're responses,and your support:)
keep reading on cause this stories getting goood:)
im so exited
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2012 02:29 am Title: Chapter 2 great grief
Oh I'm just 2 hook 2 this story loolz XD
Please continue when you can & I hope u get more readers 2 u deserve it :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 2 great grief
Wow that was insane and scary geeshI'm glad michael was there to witness this 0__0 geesh. Gonna read next chapter :)
Author's Response:
thank you soo much,i just hope more peopel get a chance to read it to.
Date: Sep 25, 2012 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 2 great grief
sorry dont mind the text end notes,only read one because i accidentilly put it twice
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2012 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is great! Been keeping up with this. I just suggest a few things.
You may have to put your story in story texts so the readers could understand. And could you use "thease marks" for everytime the person speaks it makes it seem less confusion.
But if your having problems with your computer then I understand. Other then that carry on with this wonderful story.
Author's Response:
thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: Sep 25, 2012 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was sweet of michael 2 be there for her and he even helped her to. I hope they stay together to Ooh I can't wait for the next chapter pls update soon!
Author's Response:
im posting chapter 2 now:) you're gunna love it
Date: Sep 25, 2012 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
me to i cant wait:) it's gunna bee good
Author's Response:
the horror begin's on chapter 2
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2012 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why did she run out on Michael for?I don't think he was trying 2 move 2 fast tho maybe it seemed that way I can sure tell he's attracted to her. And uh ohh here comes the fright coming soon. GEESH I can't wait 4 more. Lolz
Date: Sep 24, 2012 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
okay and im staring on it today :) thank you
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2012 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes please update real soon and btw just letting you know that It's better to respond the other way author's response. next to delete just a little tip. :)
Date: Sep 23, 2012 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
thank you soo much for letting me know your outlook on the story and yes deffinatley,ima finish.:) thank you sooo much