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Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2011 02:31 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

really hot chapter! thanks for the update, i really love this story! i kept hoping for them to become a couple and less of him being the boss, but hey, i guess some folks like that, lol! this is one of the best stories on here, you were always keeping us on our toes, although i hope they do end up together! great writing.

Reviewer: MikeyJLove4EVER Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2011 11:35 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

OMG I NEED THE NEXT PART!!! >:::OOO

Lol, but seriously like NOW! sorry lolzz, im very impatient when it comees to genius... :)

Reviewer: MikeyJLove4EVER Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2011 09:58 am Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

His secret is his hugee dick... ;P

He dont want to hurt her... or maybe he does... ;)

The lesson has just begun... ;D

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2011 08:12 am Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

Jesus Chist!!!!! Girl you just caused me a good couple of massive heart attacks in arow!!
Mr Jackson in his suave, wicked ways..Oh God! I can't even begin to describe how fast my heart was beating the entire time!! and still is .lol
I need me a cold shower now, thank you very much ;P
I do wonder what his secret is, though... he seems very private and protective of it.. hmmmm..
Ugh, again, you're such an incredible writer! You got me thinking too hard xDD
Hope you're gonna update soon and please, never stop!!!??
I NEVER want thisstory to end!!!!! xxx

Reviewer: MikeyJLove4EVER Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2011 04:42 am Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! XXXDDDD

NEXT PART PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!! :OOOOOOOO

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2011 11:59 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

PLZZ UPDATE NOW!!!!

Reviewer: Smelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2011 08:54 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

Amazing chapter as always !

But the "lesson of the day" OMG... I don't know what to think of Michael. Ok he's a sexual beast. But why so wicked and dirty with her ? He don't want her to touch him... Damn I want to know his secret ! And also know why the title of your story is "Underneath his clothes" !

 

Keep writing, your story is simply the best ! ;)

Reviewer: CapnG Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2011 08:51 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

...OMG that was so hot! *fans self*

I'm sad that the story's coming to an end. You're an awesome writer!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2011 07:50 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

I love your story. And this chapter was hot. It was about time :P :). I laughed when she spilled the drink in him and started wiping off his crotch xD I can't believe the story is already almost over :) I love reading this story. 

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2011 04:48 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

Aww man i dont want the story to end :((( but gosh this was amazing! I re read so many parts because they were just soooooo hot! Omg i love this cnt wait for the next part!!

Reviewer: CapnG Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2011 07:18 pm Title: Big Surprise!

Please post an update soon! I'm so anxious to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: Smelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2011 04:37 pm Title: Masquerade

I'm gonna cry if I don't see an update in the next 24 hours ! T.T xD

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2011 11:59 am Title: Masquerade

PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE!!!!

Tell me that you're gonna update soon!!!

 

Reviewer: Smelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2011 05:44 pm Title: Masquerade

Hey girl, don't give up this story huh... It's too amazing !

Reviewer: Smelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2011 07:03 pm Title: Masquerade

I hope you post the next part soon...

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