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Reviewer: MAR7012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 04:55 am Title: Lost For Words

wow, i kinda like this but she kinda sounds like she gunna act a slut  or something-_- smhh, and i dont like her sister lol talk about bad advice o.O

Reviewer: MikeyJLove4EVER Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 12:58 am Title: Reflections

OMG dat story was beyond fucked up and so... likely. i wonder if sumfin like dat really happend to mike...? this chapter was so well written, as are all ur chapters, but i just loved this!!! the feeling of closure is magical nd omg poor michael!! this story, i feel like ive read it before in a past life or sumfin. idk, but its just so, sureal and magical how u write and articulate and express the emotions of the characters especially michaels and aimies! PLzZ update soon! i NEED the nxt part! and i love the lesson of the day, its so wise and insightful, like ur story... god im so impressed, and excited and damn! how do u write like this?!! where did this come frum? did u bump ur head and have a fucking epiphany?! Just genius simply BRILLIANT!!! i must know wut happens next!!!! :::::DDDDDDDDDDD

 

AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! XXXXDDDD



Author's Response:

Girl, you just made my day! What an awsome review to my story!
You should know how nervous and insecure I get before updating each individual chapter,
always crossing my fingers, hoping that you guys will like it..
Unfortunately this story's almost finished and I don't think making a sequel would work with the whole theme of it, y'know?
Hopefully you'll enjoy these final few chapters just as much ;D
Thank you so much!

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2011 03:49 pm Title: Reflections

please don't ever stop writing! man, i totally adore this story, so there's a good chance that he really does feel something for her? i knew there had to be more than just a mutual attraction, they're so hot together, they should defo be a couple, hope aimee can get outta the grips of jermaine and be with michael once and for all!

Reviewer: RhythmChild Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2011 11:57 am Title: Reflections

Oh. My. God.

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2011 04:37 am Title: Reflections

Oh Damn!! a lot going on in this chapter!
I really wonder about this Adona girl.. apparently she'shad a real big impact on Mr Jackson..
Hopefully Jermaine & Karen are being honest though..
And I hope their won't be anymore drama as far as Tatiana's concerned!
oh GOD I wonder what's gonna happen from here, pls update soon??

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2011 04:22 am Title: Reflections

Uh oh................ PLZZ UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Smelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2011 05:16 pm Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

I loove this chapter ! No seriously, I love your story girl !

I was a bit suprised to see Tatiana, I was not expecting it at all. But i love it, it adds some spice ;)

I don't know why but I think Jermaine will be important for the next part, hehe... I'm so impatient to read the suite already !

 

Thx for thoses wonderful writings :)

 

Reviewer: captaineo73 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2011 02:49 pm Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

everytime i get to the end of one of your chapters, i shout, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! lol i never want it to end, i love the story so much! i love the chemistry between them, you can tell he's in awe of her and vice versa, man, will they ever get together? i can't wait to read more, you got me on the edge of my seat as always! great writing! :) xx

Reviewer: Alina Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2011 06:40 am Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

Great job! please continue ! your story = Amazing

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2011 05:34 am Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

Mr Smacko x'D
André's right though.. he's acting like a total ass and Aimee should stand up to him for once and all!
What he did with Tatiana Thinsen (lmao) was Harsh!
Aimee should make him jealous too! I do wonder what the deal with Jermaine is though..Iget the feelin that he's gonna come shake things up a bit xD
And so will André! That woman can make me roll on the Floor laughing xD
Keep it up and please give us the next update Soooon xx

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2011 10:23 pm Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

Aww i love it! & thats messed that michael is Messing with her. Like honestly, i wonder where things are gunna go from here! Cnt wait for the next part :)

Reviewer: MikeyJLove4EVER Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2011 10:13 pm Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

LMAO!!! I LOVE Andre! xD

Lmao! "Twig in motion..." xD

LOVE THIS!!! But how come you didnt write out the sex scene??? Is she gonna have a flashback or sumfin bout it then i get to know what went down??? I wanted some action! Tell what happened that night in the next chapter, PLEASE!!! :O



Author's Response:

Actually they didn't go further than what I wrote in chapter 15.
But soon enough, they just might ;D
Thanks for reading

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2011 10:00 pm Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

PLEASE HAVE MERCY ON US READERS!, BY UPDATING FOR US!!!!!  ASAP!!!LOL!!!

Reviewer: Alina Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2011 03:23 pm Title: When 'Earth' meets 'Water'

Please continue your story,it's AMAZING! I just LOVE IT !Good Luck !

Reviewer: enchantress17 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2011 08:19 pm Title: Big Surprise!

When can we expect the next chapter?  Can't wait to see what happens. :)

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