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Reviewer: martovska Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2011 02:43 am Title: Zorro Unmasked

I know I haven’t commented on previous chapters, just once. But that’s because I was annoyed with Michael character, and his doings to poor Amy. So sorry for that!


You got me hooked though from the first chapter. I thought I would not live to the moment he will try to open up to her LOL. And I must say you are doing just awesome from the start, it just I hated Mike being so cruel LOL. This chapter was one of my favorite. Beautifully written!!!


I read one of your comments that this story is coming to an end, and that you don’t want to do the sequel. But please don’t stop writing, because you are GREAT writer!!!! I wish I left more reviews and high ratings before, because you truly deserve them!!!! Honestly, I can’t wait for your next chapter!!! :) <3! Oksana


 

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2011 02:23 am Title: Zorro Unmasked

Oh my God, girl! Can I just say THANK YOU SO MUCH for still updating..even though you're busy!
I really missed this story and this chapter def didn't let me down! GOSH!
So much going on in so little time! I'm so glad that Aimee finally gave him a piece of her mind!
But his reaction, wow, I did Not see that coming! It was HOT though!
Daaamn!
Why did Frank have to come along? And why didn't Mr Jackson tell her that he loved her too??
God, I cannot WAIT for that special chapter girl!
Please please please hurry xD I love this so much!

Reviewer: CapnG Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2011 01:45 am Title: Zorro Unmasked

What a great chapter! It's too bad that they were interrupted. Hopefully they both get what they want in the next chapter!

Reviewer: mjsgirl13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 08:39 pm Title: Zorro Unmasked

Don't apologize for a long chapter. In fact it would be awesome if they were even longer! I love this story so much! Keep writing!! :)

Reviewer: sweetkeke011 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 08:35 pm Title: Zorro Unmasked

This was a good chapter...hope you continue:)!!!!

Reviewer: michaelhavemercyjackson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 06:46 pm Title: Zorro Unmasked

finally getting somewhere....i sure hope he stays a strong michael and not start crying every chapter...bring back the heat!

Reviewer: musiclover Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 06:45 pm Title: Zorro Unmasked

Awwww such a deep and moving chapter!!! Loved it!!!! Please update!!!! Asap!!

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 06:33 pm Title: Zorro Unmasked

Great update

Reviewer: vixxijaxen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2011 05:32 pm Title: Zorro Unmasked

i missed you. this is one of my favourite stories on the site. love the sexual tension. and hope things progress well for them :)

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2011 07:22 pm Title: Reflections

This story is really good!

Reviewer: MAR7012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2011 04:42 pm Title: Reflections

wow, i guess things arent always they seem, im loving this unmasking story rite now :)

Reviewer: MAR7012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2011 03:13 pm Title: Mr Right Place at the Right Time

wow, if i were her, id probably play his game by ignoring him and being kind of flirty around other men, NOT take it far and wear mini skirts >:/ it gives the wrong image ;S This is getting kind of good

Reviewer: Smelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 05:47 pm Title: Reflections

What a beautiful chapter... I dont how many times I tell you that ! lol

You're such a writer !

The secret... Finally ! Finally ! But I remain suspicious of Karen. The story about Adona let me perplexed...

Maybe I'm just paranoid xD

 

Reviewer: MAR7012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 02:37 pm Title: Revival

i bet this girl looks anxious and gutless in MJ's eyes -_- i feel like slapping her everytime she stutters lol! and if heels really r tiring for her then y does she still wear 'em -.- shoot, i wud of stood up for myself..she shud listen to here sis kuz Aimee did say she didnt want to end up like Miss Faye!!! oh well, i like this story though, its like a soap opera :D lol

Reviewer: MAR7012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2011 06:11 am Title: A Night To Remember

wow i like this moral :P this is getting quite goood !!

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