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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 20, 2012 07:03 am Title: Chapter 4

This is good.. I like that you keep the momentum going but it's not too fast. Keep going! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you like it and I'm happy that you think it isn't going too slow nor too fast! Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2012 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

Michael is killing Roxie slowly, very, very slowly! She will be addicted to him! This is sooo sexy! I can't wait to read more. Like the previous reviewer, I constantly check for updates and jumped up and down, when I found one this morning! Wohooo! :-D

Author's Response:

Haha that's all part of Michael's plan >:) Thank you! Sexy is what I'm going for! XD Haha! Well just a heads up for you there will probably be another upadte on Saturday night. :)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2012 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 4

You've done it again, this is amazing! And yes I do think taking it slow is working to your advantage lol cos I for one am constantly checking for new chapters, and re-reading it... I think I have to much time on my hands :P ur so inspiring, creating all these amazing stories, i have alota respect for u :) I do wana write my own cos I have ideas but Im not sure if I'd be good at them anyway. Thanks for updating! :) L.O.V.E <3



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you think so! Haha dude, trust me, I have too much time on my hands too! haha! Have you seen my bio? I made a collage of the Top 5 Hottest Guys in my opinion lmao! I'm such a creeper... :P and my bio is like, insanely long and filled with the stupidest crap haha!

OMJ! Thank you! I can't believe you just said that, that feels so amazing to read that! I'm happy! <3 You should write some of your own! If you ever want to brainstorm ideas just let me know and we can brainstorm together if you like! :) I don't mind at all! Just let me know!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2012 11:41 am Title: Chapter 3

And I'm like Roxie, I'm waiting for the moment to happen lol.

You really write this story in an incredible way.I'm just stick to every sentences, trying to imagine the scene.And I can clearly see it in my mind.

Good job and your Michael is great :-)



Author's Response:

XD hehe, thank you! Glad it's keeping you intrigued!

Reviewer: sassy-chick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2012 07:02 am Title: Chapter 3

that was so good i love how you made the sex scene slow i love that

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it slow, because there won't be much of a choice haha! XD I like them slow too, but I find that in my longer length stories I rush through them, so I decided to do a story that's just strictly sex to see how slow I could go.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2012 01:57 am Title: Chapter 3

such a good story i cant wait for more o_O o_O o_O

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you think so! I'll try for another update either tonight or tomorrow XD

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2012 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Woooh! Shes gonna geeeet iiiiit! Lol can't wait to see what Michael is gonna do to her ;) L.O.V.E <3



Author's Response:

Haha she's gunna be getting a bit moer than she expected ;) Thanks for the review! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 11:15 am Title: Chapter 2

You're writing this story and this sex scene so greatly.

You're right to take it slowly.It's really better and it makes the reader to crave for more. Please keep on your great writing ;-)

By the way, thank you about your nice answer to my previous review.I'm happy you like my stories. Except "Forbidden Love", did you read other ones?



Author's Response: Thank you! And yes! I read the YANA girl one (couldn't help it) and I loved it! I haven't read 'When Memories Are Gone' but it has lots of reads and reviews so I assumed that it was great! :D

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahhhh! Why are u doing this to us?! You're such a tease lol :p great chapter x L.O.V.E <3



Author's Response: :P Haha it keeps you engages though right? Haha! :D

Reviewer: armcjackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 09:12 am Title: Chapter 2

I love this!



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you! I'm so glad you do! :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 08:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh nice so far, continue!



Author's Response:

Aha thank you! I was actually just about to post up the next chapter! :) Thanks for the review! I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1

I have a feeling this will get freaky aha. good story :D



Author's Response:

Hehehe oh yes, it's definitely gunna get freaky. Hopefully people will find it sexy though! Haha! Thank you for reviewing! Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 04:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Woow I can just tell this is going to be awesome, like all your stories :) keep it up girl L.O.V.E <3



Author's Response:

Thank you! OMJ really? Wow! That's amazing, I'm glad you're enjoying them! It feels so good to know that people enjoy what I'm putting out! Thank you so much for taking the time to review and to tell me that! I appreciate it a lot! :)

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow I love it!! The plot is good and this chapter was really great.It was so sexy.

Michael being totally in control is really sexy.

I put this story in my favorites and I'm waiting for the next updates :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Sexy is what I'm going for ;)

I'm so glad that you like it! You have no idea how amazing it feels to know that you like my stories, especially since you're the author of some really great ones yourself! :D Thank you so much!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2012 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1

whoa im ready 4 this one loolz darn it girl! update soon!



Author's Response:

Yay! Haha, brace yourself, I seriously think this'll be the hottest sex scene I've ever written... we'll see... ;) I think I'll probably update tomorrow! :)

Thanks for taking the time to review! :D

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