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Reviewer: MJmyh3ro Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 03:12 am Title: Chapter 7

oooh please add more! I rather like the idea of Michael being kinky and dominant! x

Reviewer: Michaels_Rose Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2012 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 7

O_O.....l have one word....DAMN!!!



Author's Response:

XD Hehe I'll take that as you liked it?

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 7

''This isn't part of the plan"


...


Smh what plan ?!


Haha.


Love it

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

I think I'm gonna have a good dream tonight.


Thank you !


(^-^)/

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

Master Michael..


*wink*


Sexy as hell.

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

Spanking time !


 

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

''Youre next,"


That sent chills up and down my body!


This is sort of like a.. BDSM type of thing.


Love it.

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is killing me!


just imagining his..hot chocolate body pressed against mine, his big soft lips kissing mine...his sweet..touch. Oh shit.


You are murdering me !

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2012 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

XXX Rated, says the members of xThrillerErax Productions.


Michael said let there be sex..and there was sex.


Juicy .

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2012 10:24 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh it's over :-(...I loved Roxie and Michael's little adventure lol.

I really loved when Roxie asked him if it was a one night stand and he said"no". I was all smiling because I feel that love could be in the air.

Michael was caught to his own game and it was interesting.

Thanks for sharing this really well written sex scene sweety ;)



Author's Response:

Yay! Glad you liked it! :D

Hehe but did you get the last sentence of the chapter? I'm not ure if everyone understood, but he forgets everything in the morning and it turns out to be a one night stand :/ (Poor Roxie)

Thanks for reading it! :DD :*

Reviewer: Evening Star Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 04, 2012 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow I loved the story hope to see more awsome stories from u :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Haha I'll try and make my other stories as awesome as this one ;)

Thanks for reading it :*

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2012 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow this is the end? I looooved this story 😃 thank u for posting it and u should do more like this o_O hehehe

L.O.V.E <3



Author's Response:

Hehe yeah xD Too abrupt? I tried dragging this out for as long as I could! This is like, an 8000-ish word sex scene! lmao! So glad you enjoyed it <3 I'm planning on doing more like this actually. It's fun to just do these haha! :P Omj I feel so dirty right now...

Reviewer: mamaspearl Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 03, 2012 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 7

this was sooo fun!!! i enjoy so many of your stories



Author's Response:

:D Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Omj! Thank you! That means so much! I ope you continue to enjoy them and I hope that you like some future ones! :)

Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2012 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 6

...........you should really continue this story, seriously. I think it could be a great plot..plleeeeasseee. I'll help!



Author's Response:

Mmmm.... I don't know. I don't think so. This was only meant to be a pure sex scene, nothing more. It wasn't my intention to start another story; it was my intention to write a sex scene. I think it could be a great plot too... but for someone else :)

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2012 09:02 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh yes, he's about to realease the chains! lol.

She will ba excited to touch him even if she's exhausted. I bet it will be wild sex in the room lol

Waiting for the last chapters sweety :-)



Author's Response:

>:) Mmmhmm, it's about to get reeeeal interesting for Michael...

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