Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2013 11:37 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow.. Just wow. Now Michael is mad. Although Sam told the truth, she shouldn't have said that. This is really gonna be a mess now. 

Author's Response:

I know, she was mad too so she spoke without actually thinking. But things will get better between them.

Reviewer: Ammit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2013 03:39 am Title: Chapter 5

I love this story, I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2013 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

Lawd she's gonna be working for Michael's fiancée?! Whoo chile, this is gonna be entirely full of messiness and fuckery, and I am here for it!!! Lmao. Can't wait to see what happens and how Michael will react. Something tells me Michael and her will not be getting married. Especially once Michael gets a taste of Sam's good stuff.

 

Reviewer: Ania WMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2013 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Don't stop writing this story, I love it, and dont worry about the language. It's very good. I know many native speakers who would never write the way you do, so there's nothing to be worried about. The stpory has interesting plot and I like the tension and what has started between these two. Write more please and thank you.

Ania

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: michaelsnightlovingthang Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2013 11:11 am Title: Chapter 4

Aw shit! It got close up there in that closet. ;) Hope you update real soon!!  If you don't mind me asking where are you from? I would never have guessed your not a native english speaker. You write really well. I love this story so please keep it up! :)

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2013 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 4

noooo pleasee this story is amazing i just loved it!!

you should continue this one pleaseeee i beg you :( 

Author's Response:

Thank you, don't worry I will continue the story :)

Reviewer: Annie Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2013 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

Whenever I read Bruce's lines, I think of Marc St James from Ugly Betty, lol! The art when he put nail polish on killed me!
I wonder what's up with Michael and his fiancee. He is a womanizer and I understand the flirting but why would he want to sleep with a girl he barely knows when he has a fiancee? Is this a publicity stunt or something like this?

Wow, almost sex in a cleaning room...

Guess she is Michael's b*tch now lol. I liked Samantha at first because she dcided not to sleep with Michael even though the sexual tension was thick. Hope she will make him work for it!

Please, please, please don't give up on this story. I am very curious about Michael and Deborah's relationship and what will happen between him and Samantha!
I think you writing is great; don't change anything. I am not a native English speaker too so I understand :)!

The only thing I can tell you is, just don't write the typical love story and try to be original. The fact that Michael has a girlfriend during the bad era is already great.

Hope you will update soon :)

Author's Response:

Lol I love Bruce! Maybe I shouldn't say this but Michael is truly interested in her. He's like desperate because Deborah doesn't give him what he wants. Sam is definitely a strong woman, unlike Deborah, who can't live without having a man that will fix everything for her. He saw something in Sam, I guess. Anyways I'm still thinking about that detail, I don't know if they're going too fast but after months of not writing anything I couldn't help writing something dirty, haha. It won't be typical, there will be a lot of drama. I've already thought of the rest of the story and I think it won't disappoint you (I hope so) :)

Thanks for reviewing, girl! I'll try to update asap.