Date: Sep 27, 2012 11:51 pm Title: Melt Away - Chapter 20
Ooh awesome update! I'm can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder what Michael will do next. Great update! Please post more soon?
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2012 11:15 pm Title: Melt Away - Chapter 20
first of all, your aunt is freakin awesome. none of my family knows about me being an mj fiction author. they will take me to theropy if they find out, they already think im too obsessed with him.....which i am lol second, i love this story. i love it when michael is like this. i wonder why she won't attempt to run away again when he is gone? she shouldn't have to put up with that. can't wait to see what happens next. please update soon.
Date: Sep 27, 2012 02:32 pm Title: So Complicated - Chapter 19
Wen u gonna update?
Author's Response:
tonight :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2012 02:11 pm Title: So Complicated - Chapter 19
Keep goingg! !!!!!
Date: Sep 22, 2012 01:37 pm Title: So Complicated - Chapter 19
I was so into this chapter! I made this just to review to your story! I love it! Maybe if Michael wasn't so abusive she could love him. But then again, there wouldn't be a point to this story. He needs to stop scaring her, its pushing her away, but i can tell they are getting a bit closer! c;
Date: Sep 22, 2012 11:52 am Title: So Complicated - Chapter 19
Ooh I love it thank you for posting! As always I can't wait for more! I want to see this story through to the end. :)
Date: Sep 21, 2012 09:52 am Title: Venting Part 2 - Chapter 18
Please update again soon? I want longer chapters!
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2012 05:35 pm Title: Venting Part 2 - Chapter 18
YEAH!!FINALLY! *.*
It was intense and...HOT...VERY HOT!!WOW!
There's a mix of feelings...Hate and love...Fear and lust...
I dont know about their feelings.Love?No?Yes?
Anyway...I KNOW that I love this story!Cant wait for next chapter!
Thank u!
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2012 11:18 pm Title: Venting Part 2 - Chapter 18
Wow painful and scary loving... can't wait 4 more!
Date: Sep 18, 2012 11:06 pm Title: Venting Part 2 - Chapter 18
Oh god I love it just exactly what I had hoped he would do lol. I know this sounds twisted but I hope Michael never changes his ways I'd be disappointed lol. Great update please post more soon? I am so addicted it's scary!
Date: Sep 18, 2012 08:46 pm Title: Venting Part 1 - Chapter 17
Oh god I swear its anger and lust between those two my favorite combination lol. I know this sounds bad but I think he should force her I know I'm bad lol sorry! I mean he's always so mean to her anyway. Great chapter I can't wait to see what he does to her! Please post again soon! This was way too short!
Date: Sep 18, 2012 07:31 pm Title: Venting Part 1 - Chapter 17
Okay....this getting sad, he need to get hisself together!
Date: Sep 16, 2012 09:49 pm Title: Misunderstood - Chapter 16
Woohoo can't wait!
Date: Sep 16, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Misunderstood - Chapter 16
Eep two chapters tonight I love it don't stop now lol Thank you and please post again soon afterall you gotta make up for lost time haha.
Author's Response: Lol yea I know... Starting wedsnday, if i get my laptop, the chapters will be a LOT longer
Date: Sep 16, 2012 07:23 pm Title: Misunderstood - Chapter 16
Lol, I don't even knw y she tries anymore! More plz!