




Date: Oct 05, 2012 11:11 am Title: Escape - Chapter 22
More reviews more chapters?! I should write 100 reviews lol. I have the feeling Collin or Brooke are going to do something suspicious while Collin is "getting smoothies" lol. I'm not used to Abusive Michael stories but i love this one! Haha I'm looking forward to the next chapter and oooooo im itching to hear from G. Ooo i can't stand her!
Date: Oct 05, 2012 10:28 am Title: Escape - Chapter 22
I want her to run into Michael a that smoothie shop!
keep updating plz :) love that story





Date: Oct 05, 2012 10:27 am Title: Escape - Chapter 22
If I were in her shoes I would change my attitude ... Peaches is being a victim of pain and anger of Michael. There's something that torments his mind ... There's no reason for him to be violent with her.
Peaches is not wrong and this could give more guts for her to have more attitude toward Michael. He cheated on her with her best friend and he didnt give a shit!
It would be interesting to see Peaches punishing Michael the way he does ...Plus: Michael begging for forgiveness and for her love...
Then... a rough make up sex that no one has ever seen!|o|
I wont deny that I love to see Michael acting with violence and dominance. But Peaches must show some pride and love for herself ...
Thank u so much!I loved the update and cant wait next chapter!
Date: Oct 05, 2012 10:08 am Title: Escape - Chapter 22
idk wad to say . itd seem like everybody went crazy lol (except Michael who was already crazy )
Date: Oct 05, 2012 08:09 am Title: Escape - Chapter 22
OMG noooo! Michael has to find her he can't let her go! Please post more lol. I love this story so much!
Date: Oct 04, 2012 03:54 pm Title: Now What? Chapter 1
Please update soon? I miss this story!
Author's Response:
I update every thursday!





Date: Sep 29, 2012 11:59 am Title: Vulnerable - Chapter 21
Damn I would have did something else I would have beaten his ass and ran away got a new name and erthing.
Date: Sep 29, 2012 11:35 am Title: Vulnerable - Chapter 21
GAAAAAH I don't even know how to feel!!!! lol G didn't know theyy had a "thing" but she did suspect something. So she's wrong but not wrong. dang. I can't wait to see what G has to do. I wonder if Michael forced the kiss on G, him and is abusive ways, speaking of Michael, i expected what he said to Peaches. Buuuuuuut when she caught him i sensed a bit of remorse, the way he went after her. I think Michael was mad he got caught. Well i hope you update soon!! btw I'm sorry i didnt review last chapter! >_<
Date: Sep 29, 2012 10:04 am Title: Vulnerable - Chapter 21
Oh my gosh I can't believe he did that actually yes I can. I'm starting to get used to Michael's crazy ways. That disturbs me haha. Can't wait for more!
Date: Sep 29, 2012 07:12 am Title: Vulnerable - Chapter 21
Oh waw, i never thought something like this was going to happen!
Even though i think she should leave. I dont think Michael doesnt care about her anymore, he as just angry that she doesnt told him that she was in love with him too. I think she should run away to see if Michael would run after her.
Your story is so original et i love cold Michael! And G! My God. How could she! She is alone now :(
Kises from France
Date: Sep 29, 2012 06:49 am Title: Vulnerable - Chapter 21
D*MNNNN I DID NOT SEE THAT COMIN.....MIKEY COLD ON SOOO MANY LEVELS, SMDH!





Date: Sep 29, 2012 04:41 am Title: Vulnerable - Chapter 21
OMFG!!!
What the hell is this??
Michael kissing another girl and worse...its Peaches's best friend!
What does he want with all this shit!?Does he love her?Fuck...NO!!!
I'm shocked!Michael is an asshole!G is ...aaaaaahhh!I dont know what to think!
PLEASE PLEASE update asap!
Thank u!





Date: Sep 29, 2012 04:33 am Title: Now What? Chapter 1
Omg that was a emotional chapter :(....update asap!





Date: Sep 28, 2012 11:22 pm Title: Vulnerable - Chapter 21
come on girl don't do this to yourself. yeah you ain't got nowhere to run to but anything is better than with him. get some money and get a hotel, call your ex boyfriend up at a local payphone or something. i hate seeing her go through this. and the way michael talked to her just angered me. how dare he be so cruel. grat chapter hun. this story is really bringing out my emotions.





Date: Sep 28, 2012 05:30 am Title: Melt Away - Chapter 20
This story is awesome :) continue real soon please
Author's Response:
Just put up a new chapter (: