[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2010 01:44 am Title: Chapter 9:"Heartless"
i really love this story! i hope michael tells her how he feels about her & that he loves her when she goes to him....
Date: Dec 28, 2010 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 7:"A New Light"
It's a shame that she had to quit her job. Michael's a jerk. How can he go on with his life like nothing between he and Rose happened. He just hops from women to women. What a man whore.
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2010 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 6:"We're through..."
I knew it! Michael has lost his damn mind. I kew he was gonna turn on Rose once he had sex with her. That's all he wanted. Poor Rose. I wonder if she's gonna show up for work.
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2010 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 6:"We're through..."
I knew it! Michael has lost his damn mind. I kew he was gonna turn on Rose once he had sex with her. That's all he wanted. Poor Rose. I wonder if she's gonna show up for work.
Date: Dec 28, 2010 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 5:"Well kept secrets"
Okay, so now she's in trouble. She can't even decide who she wants to be with. She's in a real love triangle. I hope she can figure things out. Intresting how she imagined Michael when she was having sex with Bobby. LOL.
Loved this chapter.
Author's Response:
Well hello there :3 thank you so much for reading and reviewing :3 always appreciate new readers
Hahaha right, we'll just have to wait and see. Who knows, she might end up losing both :(
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2010 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: "Possible Mistake"
Oh, man Rose! What was she thinking? She doesn't seem to really love Michael, maybe as a friend, but nothing more. I wouldn't be surprised if he told Bobby they had sex just to piss Bobby off and get Rose for himself. After all he does love her.
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2010 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 3: "Give me a chance."
New reader alert- - Wow, Michael sure depends on Peaches. He wants to be friends with benefits I guess. He needs to understand that Peaches is with Bobby. Even if Peaches wasn't with Bobby, Peaches shouldn't fall for Michael. He acts like a womanizer and a loner.
Date: Dec 27, 2010 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Something's up
Wonderful story! PLZ continue! Update, update, update! lol Seriously I love this. The drama, the love, everything.
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2010 12:44 am Title: Chapter 8: "Fatal Attraction"
WOW With all the respect, WHat a fucking JErk!! I never thought that Michael would do something like that to her, o__O i really never saw this coming at all!!
DAMN that move, this was fcuking worse than anything that he was ever done to her, and he has done many thing to her but this just went out the there!!
BTW GREAT CHAPTER, not offended at all!
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2010 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8: "Fatal Attraction"
What. The. Hell??
I'm in shock. I can't believe he did that to her... to the woman that he loves.
I mean, I know that he's mad about everything. Her not weanting to leave her husband and her quitting but damn. That's taking it too far! How very ruthless of him. Ugh. She shouldn't have had sex with him. It's quite unfortunate how things between them went down the drain so quick. =(
Great updates! And may you have a Merry Christmas!
Author's Response:
I know! It was really hard writing this chapter, but something big and dramatic needed to happen. The only reason she did was because he had told her all of these things and made her feel more appreciated than Bobby did since he was soo busy with work. That one mistkake she'll regret for the rest of her life :/, but ya never know :D
Thank you! And Merry Christmas to you too!
Date: Dec 24, 2010 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: "Fatal Attraction"
I'm sorry but to hell with Michael! He needs his ass beat. I hope that slut he's with takes him for every fuckin dime he has!!!! How dare he treat Rose that way.. I hope he realizes what he's done and he'll need her again then I hope she turns her back on him. He's scum. I'm glad she's staying with Bobby.
Author's Response:
Right, I totally agree with you; and of course karma is a bitch. So we'll just see how Michael's luck changes ;p
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2010 07:28 am Title: Chapter 8: "Fatal Attraction"
So, I've been reading this story and let me start out by saying I'm addicted to it! Haha I loveee it and omg this chapter like broke my heart :(( What happen to him!?!? I was convinced that he wanted to be a better guy and acutally treat her right. Once I read the part that he pulled her to a secluded room and locked the door, I knew from right then what was going to happen. This is such a AMAZING story! This was shocking good! I really want to know whats going to happen after if like bobbys going to like come up to michael and be like "Have you seen my wife anywere by any chance" then michael will say "Yeah, I believe she was by the bathroom or something"
To purposly point him in the wrong direcrion.
I hope that rose is okay, because something like that can set people on an emotional rollercoaster.
Anywayz please update soon :)
This story is getting better and better by the second.
P.s. I believe theres another girl on this site doing a story like this to "shocking" (sarcasm)
Yours is way better! xD
Author's Response:
Awww thank you! That means a lot :3 of course i'll be updating as frequently as I can :D
The more fans I have the longer it'll get.
Yeah, tell me about it......I can't believe she actually took my ideas. I mean who does that?! Right after I posted the 4th chapter and used her title as my main characters nickname.
But oh well, let her be a theif ;3
Date: Dec 24, 2010 02:33 am Title: Chapter 8: "Fatal Attraction"
Damn Mike thats fucked up. Smgdh the things people do when their in love.
Date: Dec 23, 2010 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 6:"We're through..."
OMJ I'm shocked!!! He's like a stoplight has different sides! lol But she deserves it! This is really good :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2010 09:57 am Title: Chapter 6:"We're through..."
wtf??? I would say screw him that's what he deserves!!! Really Peaches should leave his ass alone to do all the work by himself and think about what he's doing to her. She should show him how does it feel to play with someone else's feelings. Why is he being such a jerk? If he loves her, he has a creepy weird disturbing way to show it! He's doing nothing to prove her she was right to trust him and give him a chance! Gawd I feel so bad for her... be strong girl!! Great story btw ;)