[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2014 04:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
Hey you updated! *Sigh* I feel so bad for the both of them :( they both have their issues but no couple is perfect! I didn't like how MJ did that whole Karen thing without speaking to Nita about it first..... He should have taken her into consideration since it was all obviously going to be out for the PUBLIC. I understand he wanted to get rid of the "gay rumors" but if he keeps on doing faking sham relationships if and when he and Nita decide to come out as a couple I'm sure it won't be pretty. The paparazzi will have a field day calling her a fake gf or some bs like that. The life of michael Jackson isn't easy :/ I agree with michaelj23 we need more Omer!! LOL
Author's Response:
HEY girl :) Ikr? :/ But then we have Michael who's hell-bent on perfection! :P He really does have to start accepting things as they are! Yes, I agree with you! Haha, that is if Michael allows their relationship to come OUT! And I don't think the world most privacy-obsessed man would do that! Not soon at least ;) Haha Omer had become everyone's favorite! Yes we really should have more Omer :) Oh girl, its so happy to see you back! I'm so lucky to have my old readers after all I have put you guys through lol! :D I'll update asap! Thank you so much for your honest review luv! You know how much it means to me!! XD Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2014 04:57 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
Dear Jesus! You never fail to amaze me. Let me start by saying that I almost choked on the air that I was breathing when I saw that you updated. You always do that to me!
I was losing my damn mind since January, trying to figure out if that child belonged to michael, completely forgetting that he had unfaithful brothers . It never struck my mind.
That argument. It took out a lot of emotion. I felt both Nita's and Mike's pain. But when he started to dig in her pocket and found papers, I thought it was something about her being pregnant. I almost died, realizing that it was so far from that brought me back to life !
But i don't want them to be apart. They're complete opposites that make the perfect pair! Hopefully michael knows what the hell he is talking about before he makes a permanent decision based off of temporary feelings. And hopefully Nita can understand where he is coming from...
great update, as always girlie!
Author's Response:
Hey Miya :) LOL! I do that to you everytime? :P Wow!
Haha sorry hun, for leaving you there for pretty much... a year? :P
Yeah, it really was a bitter argument wasn't it? The kind that couple never want to have but somehow they will lol! Pregnant?! Well I think I have done a good job in scarring the hell out of you guys so far! Sorry for another cliffhanger btw ;) I will update asap.
Ikr? Their imperfections makes them perfect! But having Trust issues in a relationship is no small problem. It would just get bigger and bigger every day and eventually destroy the relationship right? I mean even with friends, once a friend betrays you, you will never trust them wholly again :/ You are right, one of them has to come to their senses! Yes, Nita has to understand not just his lifestyle but also his heart :)
Oh, luv, its SOOO damn good to see you and speak with you here again! :D I missed your funny, honest reviews that both make up my day and make me think ;) Thank you so damn much! You never know how much I appreciate your reviews :D You made my day!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2014 05:55 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
Ok wait....wait! *Takes deep breath* Ok, so when I saw you updated I was like, "Screw studying Spanish and adv. bio, I am reading this!" Lol! When I reread the ending to get a feel for this chapter I screaming at my laptop screen going "You BASTARD!" haha! Then when I read it was Jermaine's (never liked him anyway,) I was majorly relieved.
Very seldom do I read a story that has me crying along with the characters as yours does to me. When I read about the vasectomy, I was going "No, No!" As well. I just.....your story is, and I mean this, the best story on here. You should have chose the writing profession instead of being Miss Doctor and all. ;) Everything that Michael was saying about trust and relationships is so on the mark. I actually took to heart some kernels of wisdom myself, because I can see Nita's point as well - partly because I am the same way about being trustless with the ones I love. But in her defense he is surrounded by people all day, including attractive females. I don't know, I am playing Switzerland on this, because they both have good points. But the ending.....my heart is completely sunken, if I was Nita I would, run down the hall where he's going, grab him, pin him to the ground to show him how dedicated I am to him. ;) lol
You have seriously brightened up my day after being very down in the dumps and this made me laugh - first time all day. I need to pull a misery thing here and find where you live, hobble you, and make you write me more chapters! LOL! Joking of course. ;D
Oh my gosh, I feel like I just got a B12 shot, I am so happy now! This story is just AMAZING!!!! Nothing short of perfection, on Christmas break I need to spend time rereading it again.
I just could go on talking about this chapter but now I REALLY need to study Spanish now, I am just so AHHHHHH!!!!!! You're brilliant, the story is brilliant, and I need MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
A billion million hugs and kisses to you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxo
Your #1 fan!
(another misery quote - lol sorry, just had too ;)
Author's Response:
OMG GIRL!! :) LOL I never liked Jermaine too! I think he often tried to mimick Michael, in ALL aspects!!
Aw, girl, you are a darling! THANK YOU SO DAMN MUCH! Lol don't worry I don't think I will be a good Miss Doctor, so I'll never leave writing :P Yes, its very easy to have those problems between couples. And I think especially our generation is so spoiled and we often have high expectations for our partner. We often feel insecure in our relationship, mostly because who we think as 'our' guy casually flirts with another woman right before our eyes! Yeah, jealousy is a bitch! And it didn't spare Nita! Yes, he's going to surrounded by attractive females, supermodels, 24/7 and if Nita's going to get insecure everytime he's like that, what're they gonna do? I think that's what Michael thought. AH I would LOVE to meet you, even if it's to hobble me! :P LOL! Oh I'm sorry luv, for eventually making you sad :( But they have to face facts don't you think? obviously relationship with Michael isn't going to be anywhere near the word 'normal'. Haha, we think alike ;) That's what I would have done if I were Nita! :P
WOW Thanks again, my god, girl, my thanks aren't enough for you! You're making me blush! I was SO damn tired, felt like life sucked out of me! And the moment I read your review, I felt like jumping and dancing! :D You are wonderful! That's what make me so happy, that I was able to make you smile :)
Yeah, you REALLY should study Spanish now! Good luck for whatever hell you're facing, exam or..? Haha I will definitely give you more and so much MORE! Don't worry the story's not going anywhere and I suggest you now to study, lol, before you put yourselt in an awful misery :P
A billion million hugs and kisses back and another billion more ;) (Guess, we'll die before completing LMAO)
I LOVE YOU! My one and most favorite fan! My favorite reveiewer :) Have a nice day! LOADS of love your way <3 xx
Date: Dec 09, 2014 01:12 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
Wow wasn't expecting that. Michael was a bit harsh, I know his past relationship wasn't great but he needs to understand that Nita is not Diana. He should give Nita something for telling him the truth instead of keeping it to herself but oh well. I hope their relationship or whatever they are now doesn't affect Omer. Omg we need more Omer, Michael is right about one thing. Nita needs time to herself and maybe just focus on her and Omer. I hope Michael does tell Nita his secret but I can't help but sense more drama to come..... I'm so excited for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Hi Faustina :) Lol I bet you weren't :P Yeah I know, but I think he's scared of repeating his mistakes and getting hurt again. Right, I think he will come to his senses once he calms down, we'll see ;) Omer! Now he's the only one who can help them. Right, but I don't want to reveal anymore imao we'll see ;) Thank you so much hun for your honest review! I appreciate it a great deal! I'll update asap. :D Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2014 03:48 am Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
OH MY FREGGINN GOD YOU ARE BACK!!!!
hey how r u? my god i cant believe this!!! i missed this story and you this is the only story i read this website imao and u were not updating i was broke!! i was so excited seeing its updated i wanted to review hehehe now i gotta read the chapter damn!
Author's Response:
Hi girl :) How are ya? Haha! I'm sane, I hope. Wow! I missed you too hun! I hope you are doing well! I'm so terribly sorry for not updateing for so damn long. Haha well, thanks so much for your review! :D Let me know what you think of the update! :P Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2014 02:38 am Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
This update made my day turn from crappy to awesome :) after being disappointed in the outcome of my turbinate reduction surgery, reading this boosted my spirits lol
I am 50% on Nita's side and 50% on Michael's. I mean what else would Nita think since Michael's strange behavior took a toll on her? He also did her wrong by making that vasectomy appointment after promising her he wouldn't. Even if he didn't go to it, he still thought about it. Which means he actually broke that promise. I feel like he kind of turned into a bit of a hypocrite talking about trust and honesty but he never told her about the test results or vasectomy until she pretty much squeezed it out of him. Now to Michael's side. I get where he is coming from, because it is true... Relationships are built on trust. I back him up all the way of being careful with his heart. Even though humans fall in love and give their all to that person, our guards are put down many times and the outcome is never good. This obviously happened to him in the past with Diana, I just didn't like how he was so harsh with Nita :( Okay maybe I am 60% on Nita's side and 40% on Michael's lol As for him pretty much breaking up with her... That's sad :( I know Omer is gonna miss his 'Dada' Not another cliffhanger nooooooo! Why must u torture us?! :( lol
Author's Response:
Hi girl :) Wow! Now, that's something!! The very thought of me able to lighten up your mood is more than anything else to me. :D Oh poor babe! I hope you are feeling alright now :)
LOL You are right! Michael IS a hypocrite, that's for sure but he isn't a cheater, is he? He doesn't deserve to be judged that way by the woman he loves and trust the most! But I do see your point, because obviously he kept holding back from her. And that's not fair when you're in a relationship. And yes, you are right, he have already broken her promise by arranging the appointment! *sighs* They really are a couple of complex characters arent they? :P Yeah, he have been there, done that and only got hurt. So now he wants to be careful and its obvious Nita's mistrust on him put him off, make him to have second thoughts about his relationship, and made him think whether he had rushed into it. Haha, you are on Nita's side! :P God, everybody choose to be on Nita's side. I don't know what I have done to make you all 'MJ fans' to choose Nita over HIM. LOL. I love your honesty :) Oh yeah, Omer. I'm guessing Michael's gonna miss him much more than Omer will ;) We'll see! Haha I'm SO sorry for leaving ya'll in another cliffhanger! But I promise you that this time I won't take a year to update again hehe!! Oh, just bear with me honey! I will update asap! Thank you for your wonderful review!!! :D Just as I made your day you made mine! Take care of yourself, love. Lots of love your way <3 xx
Date: Dec 09, 2014 02:37 am Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
God you are a hell of a writer! Love it. It is sad but so good !
Author's Response:
Hi Michelle :) Lol, since I updated I think you won't be needing to find me and make me finish this story :P You are a darling!!! THANK YOU!! Aw, I know its so sad *sighs* but I guess they need to face reality. They had to have the problems that common couple have. Thanks again hun! :D Loads of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2014 05:48 am Title: ♥ Chapter 6: Sympathy For The Devil ♥
Hey again! *hugs you back*
Man, Nita certainly sounded like she was PMSing..if I were Michael I would have left long before she was forced to physically try to keep him from being near her..and he also went about trying to find out what he did wrong in a way that would cause more trouble..
Author's Response:
HEY Christy! :D
LOL! Haha you're right :P Although I'm quite not sure which chapter you're talking about... Though I'm pretty sure Michael would deserve it :P Its great to see you again Christy :) *Big bear hug* Thanks so much for your review! I really appreciate it hun!! Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2014 05:06 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! There you are!!!! I have missed you hun! Gosh, you have made my Sunday night fantastic now! I am so sorry for all your troubles, life really sucks sometimes. But to your question, a hundred thousand billion times YES!!!!! Cannot wait to see it!!!!! Smooches!!! xoxo
Author's Response:
OH MY GOD GIRL!!!! :D :D How are you!!! I MISSED YOU! I couldn't even been able to reply to your last mail, I'm ssoooo sorry!!! Lol at least happy to make ya glad! :P Ah, it's okay now, I guess, though life still sucks haha! ;) Gosh Thanks luv, oh I gotta finish this story!! I know I have to and the update's 'almost' ready, and hopefully up tomorrow :P *Hugs and kisses*!!! I hope at least your life is going well, or at least may be less-sucking lol! As always, your review made my day, luv!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2014 10:08 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Girl I love this story. I read all 29 chapters in 2 days. I swear I read it and laugh without reason because of the things that Nita and Michael go through. Please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Hi there, Paula :) Welcome!! Wow! Gosh, I think that itself is a huge honor to me :P Haha wow, I feel wonderful for being able to make you laugh girl! After all that's my goal! To lighten you guys mood, because we are all out there, working hard, doing our best, getting hurt and upset by assholes and bitches and I think a little lightening up now and then will do :) Thank you love!! I will update asap! Lots of love your way <3 xx
Date: Nov 26, 2014 08:39 am Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
If you're not gonna continue with this, I AM GONNA FIND YOU AND MAKE YOU DO IT!! Seriously this story is a drug. I just finishe reading all 29 chapters in 3 days :) It's amaying!
Author's Response:
Hi there Michelle :) Lol girl I'm not sure you are not serious :P Although I would love to meet you in person :P I will update definitely for you if nothing else!! I'm so damn lucky to have you guys!! I love you! Aw, hun, thanks so much, although you sound a little mad because of putting up with me :D Thanks again!!! You review made me laugh and blush!!! Nice meeting you! XD Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2014 07:43 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
Girl! I have been dying for you to update! I missed you and this story!
Author's Response:
HEY, Miya! :) Girl how are you!!!! Oh, luv, I missed you and your wonderful reviews! I'm so sorry hun! :D But I'll be updating now don't worry! Lots of love your way <3 xx
[Report This]Date: Nov 25, 2014 05:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 30: Loved And Lost ♥
Yesssssssssss!!!! I'm rereading this as we speak!! I remember it from MJJU!! I hope you do continue. I love your writing!!
Author's Response:
Lol! Girl I'm sorry :P Wow you were in MJJU? I will definitely continue chicka, dont worry about it! Thank you sooo much!!! That means so much to me, trust me! Lots of love your way <3 xx
Date: Nov 25, 2014 11:22 am Title: ♥ Chapter 2: Shadows Of Twilight ♥
Great to meet you too and you're more than welcome about the reviews. You've done a very good job considering this is your first work. :) Feel free to read and review my work when you get a minute as well.
Now onto the review..
Gee I wonder what that waiter was thinking when he looked at Juanita funny for ordering coke instead of something alcoholic..like maybe he thought she was a baby or something? And I could see Michael and Juanita warming up to each other..actually sort of like the fact that Nita is somewhat no-nonsense.just hope she doesn't overdo it.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Hi again Christy :) Haha girl thank you so damn much!!! Of course I would love to!!
LOL! Oh they are the most different people in the world! With nothing in common! :P Nita is always 'No-nonsense' type. May be Michael could alter her attitude. Thanks love, again! You are wonderful!! *Hugs* :D Lots of love your way!! <3 xx
Date: Nov 25, 2014 06:24 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
First of all welcome back..I hope you can be on here more often..
must say I really like this so far..had to concentrate a bit harder than usual as I'm not used to reading the fine print on here but otherwise good job..I look forward to seeing if there will be any relationship between Michael and Juanita. <3
Author's Response:
Hi there Christy :) Aw, Thank YOU!!! Haha I really do try to, trust me :P LMAO you think its fine print ?! :P
Gosh, thanks girl, I really appreciate it!!! To know that TRD received this much attention is beyond belief to me lol! Given the fact that this is my first story, and I'm being a lazy bum and all! I hope to see 'you' more often here too girl, on my reviews ;) haha! Lots of love to you!!! <3 xx
Nice meeting you btw xD