Reviewer: MichaelJ23 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2014 12:59 am Title: ♥ Chapter 31: One Life To Live... ♥

Oh no, wasn't expecting that ! Noooo ! Not only does Michael need but baby boy Omer needs her. Poor Nita, saving the man that she loves. Romantic but sad. I can't wait for the next update, I always get excited every time this story is updated. Aw Michael, this is a heartbreaking chapter.

Author's Response:

HEY Faustina :) Girl I'm so sorry but I had to do it!! You are right! Omer needs his mommy! Ikr? I don't like tragedies either, they leave me broken  :/ LOL I love that excitement! I will update ASAP :) I'm sorry again! But thank you so much hun for your review :D Lots of love your way <3 xx 

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2014 04:30 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 31: One Life To Live... ♥

Happy you updated again! 

 

I was so glad when bill came by. Bill Bray always saves the day- I love him :) .

 

i didn't think michael and Nita splitting would have such a harsh effect on him . Even though his life was at risk from all the drinking, at least he still loved her.

 

now my heart is broken because of everything happening. They argued and she ends up getting hit by a truck . I really hope she's okay. Omer can't lose his mother a second time . I really do hope this all turns around... Besides I'm still waiting for Nita to give michael a few babies

 

great as always hun! Love you and have a happy holidays!

Author's Response:

HEY Miya :) I'm glad!

Lol you are right, I love him too! :)

Ikr? They are most unlikely and likely pairs :P Poor, poor Omer! He needs his momma, I agree!  HAHA!!! Lol you're still on that! :D And everytime you catch me off guard and make me laugh, I love you! But i won't blame you though, I mean 'me' myself is always dreaming about Michael and Nita's babies! Wow how wonderful would that be?! ;)

Aw, Thanks so much luv! As always you have made me smile :) Love you more!! Happy Holdays to you too! I hope you enjoy them a great deal! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Michael_Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2014 06:40 am Title: ♥ Chapter 31: One Life To Live... ♥

Omg you updated!!!!'n

Author's Response:

HI Aimee! :) Lol, I sure did! Let me know what you think ;) Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2014 05:55 am Title: ♥ Chapter 31: One Life To Live... ♥

Omg. NO you can't do this to us. She can't die, bring her back Please. 

Girl you are an awesome writer. I'm so addicted to this story. Please update A.S.A.P. Even if it's a short chapter

Please 🙏

Author's Response:

Hi Paula :) Oh god, I'm so sory girl, I had to do it.

My god, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I'll try to hun, I promise! :D Lots of love your way <3 xx

 

Reviewer: halesjackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2014 01:07 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

hey I love your story but there is a huge problem, the chapters after 27 does not  show up 28 never opens only the gif comes and the chapter is empty.

urgh  I want to read those chapters so bad but I can't :'(

 

Author's Response:

Hi haley :) Gosh, thanks so much! I'm so sorry it took me this long to reply. I'm thinking may be problems with your internet connections before or due to browsers? I have exprienced it once too! Why don't try it in a different browser? If your problem still isn't solved, let me know the chapters you want to read with your email, I will mail the chapters to you :) Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: TenderLovingCare Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 11:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 31: One Life To Live... ♥

Omer is growing up into such a bright and intelligent little boy! His moments on this chapter were truly adorable. He is becoming so accustomed with his dada and momma. It is unbelievably cute!! 

"Michael shes no more. Your Nita is no more!" That reminded me of the time he was dreaming about Yatza (I believe that's how you spell it, I forgot) and they told her she was dead. Is this a sign about Nita's fate? I know in the last chapter I said Omer was going to miss his dada, but now I fear he will miss his momma FOREVER! 

And God, michael will be far even worse. I honestly thought that the meeting in the park was going to be fine, obviously with some bumps here and there. But I didn't expect the bump to be that BIG! I hope that Nita ends up being okay. And if she really did die I hope that they bring her back to life.. 

Great Update once again :) you are like the michael Jackson of fanfiction!!! 

Author's Response:

HEY GIRL :) Oh Omer :) I comepletely agree with you! Thank you so much hun! :D Of course he is, and I hope to add more of Omer from now on. I get the feeling that he's often overshadowed by all the dramas between his momma and dada! :P

Yes, you spelled it right and I'm surprised you remember her! :) Hmm we'll see ;)

LOL you are definitely right about that! Haha I knew none of you guys would be expecting that! And that was the reason why I did it ;)

Thank you so damn much luv!! You always light up my day! :) WHAT? 'Michael jackson of fan fiction?' Wow! *Blushing!* Now, that's gotta be the best review I ever got!!! Love you girl!!! :D Lots of love your way <3 xx

 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2014 09:48 am Title: ♥ Chapter 7: Her Feverous Metamorphose ♥

If Dr. Hoefflin knew Nita had lied he would blow a gasket...I can just imagine..

The exchange between Nita and Karen was such a fun read..I can't believe Michael told Karen all that stuff about Nita..and the way she objected over the dress was hilarious

Thank you for the shoutout in the fic summary..also wanted to let you know that a member who joined recently named tianbe spammed a few of the threads..

say, is there anyway you can be contacted off the site? I would love to chat with you..

Author's Response:

Hey girl :) LOL I bet he would!

Haha that's just Michael isnt it? Always doing what's unexpected of him :P 

Oh girl, you don't have to thank me! The very act of giving you guys shout out is because I want to thank you all! Because without you, this story just isn't possible!!! So I thank YOU!! :D Oh ok, I will check into it, if he/she is a spammer their account will be deleted immediately! Thanks for letting me know hun!

AWWW, I would LOVE to chat with you too! Facebook and Twitter wore me out so I've deleted my accounts there a long time ago, but you can always mail me cassiecassidy@rocketmail.com And we can talk a LOT! :) Thanks again PYT for your review! XD You made my day! Lots of love your way <3 xx