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Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2014 10:10 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Ayoo I'm Sorry That I Aint Been Reviewing I Just Been Really Busy && Ain't Had Time To Read Your Story. Buuuuuuutttt I Got You Though Lmao Next Week. = )



Author's Response:

Hey Sky! :) That's alright, I understand, I really do :P Haha, can't wait for you to read!!! Just let me know what you're thinking on your way, alright? ;) Thanks for the review hun... :D Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Thradluvr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2014 02:42 am Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

as always enjoyed your update but the ending had me terrified and u put us on a cliffhanger please update soon i dont want this for nita she's a nice girl and michael deserves her......



Author's Response:

Hi there :) THANK YOU!! Hmm... just wait and watch! ;) Currently I'm working on the update! I agree with you hun, but... we'll see ;) Thank you for dropping your review! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Mittu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2014 02:37 am Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

OH NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Please NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!! You keep giving us heartattacks!



Author's Response:

HEY Mittu!!! LMAO!!! You just have to wait... update will be soon!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: skipper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2014 09:39 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Poor Nita :(

Author's Response:

HI Ida :) Ikr? :/ *Sighs* but you will see ;) Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2014 05:52 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Oh and happy new year to you and your family too!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you!!! <3

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2014 05:51 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Amazing update! Loved it all. LMAO at little Annie part! Michael is so funny! And naughty! :PP but lord, what was it at the end? please please dont Michael have an affair or something... please!! i love this couple too much they are my tonic!!! And OOh Michael has chest hair! I didnt know that! HE'S SEXY!!! Plzzz update soon!!!



Author's Response:

HEY Nancy!!! Thank you so much girl!! HAHA IKR? :P Hmm... you will have to wait and watch for that ;) Yeah, he looks so hot with chest hair, been wondering why he hated it! :/ Oh yeah, he is, I completely agree! Once again, Thank you so much hun! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Hassiba Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2014 03:57 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Wow your writing is amazing, so detailed. I love michael and nita's relationship, how it started with him being so dominant which he still is and i find soooo sexy but he has opened up alot since then. Forgetting a big part about him having a child, pleas let It be one of his brothers! Um but i love how you gave us a story that comes with each character. And Lets not Forget the steamy scenes ow my god i dont know what to say hunny you leave me speeches . Thank you for your hard work!!



Author's Response:

Hi Hassiba :) Cute name, btw!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :D Haha dominating Michael is pretty hot, isn't he? :P Hmm... ok, you're gonna wait till next chapter and watch the drama :P Wow, Thanks again Hassiba, I'm flattered!! :D Oh luv, your review made my day!!! Thank you once again hun, seriously, your words were very soothing and encouraging!!! Hope you had a wonderful new year!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2014 01:36 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Wow! First off! You made my new year! I was having a really bad day, but you cheered me up! Thanks for that! 

 

Secondly, I love Michael's & Nita's relationship. It reminds me of a high school couple! It's so adorable! And going trick-or-treating with Michael seems like the greatest experience ever!

But you stumped me up on the last part. Everything that he had told her before is starting to make sense... I would always wonder why he would doubt himself with their relationship. 

My heart literally jumped out of my stomach. I hope it's a misunderstanding and if not, I hope Michael & Nita can work things out, especially for the sake of Omer, and I hope Michael can be a father to this new baby... 

 

Please update soon! With a cliffhanger like this, I can't wait much longer!



Author's Response:

HI Miya!! :) Gosh, THANK YOU! I'm REALLY glad I cheered you up because I know how having a bad day feels like :P 

 

Lol yeah they're pretty silly, and immature sometimes, arent they? :D But that's the kind of characters I wanted, you know, I just wanted them to be a coupld we see every day. Like a normal couple. :) 

Yep, Mike's in deep hole right now. LOL you only have to wait for the next chapter and find out! :P 

I'm working on the update luv, I'll update as soon as possible, I promise! :) Thank you so much, hun for this wonderful review, I'm smiling big right now! :D Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2014 11:56 am Title: ♥ Chapter 29: Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas ♥

Wow did Michael really father a child behind Nita's back and kept it from her this whole time? Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Hi Fatima :) Hey nice name btw!!! LOL You might have to wait and watch :P Thank you so much hun, for droppin your review, it means a lot to me!! I'm working on the update and it'll be up soon! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2013 02:47 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥

Aw... cutest couple ever!!!! I can't wait for them take the next step..:) loved this update!

"So is this what lied behind the mask. Behind his mask? To her, he had always seemed like someone who hadn’t had anything other than perfect all his life. She knew. She knew now; a thousand tears are hidden behind his smile and thousand screams are hidden behind his silence and thousand worries hidden behind those thoughtful eyes and thousand cries of pain hidden behind his kindest heart. Behind the superstar, was a man who failed in his personal life, behind the shrewd businessman was a man was a deceived lover, behind the multi-millionaire was a man who lost something money can’t buy and behind the normal man was a child, free from fetters of the unkind heart and materialistic mind, with a beautiful soul, invisible to vacant eyes." 

PERFECT!!!



Author's Response:

HEY Nancy!! Haha, I agree :P Me neither lol! Thank you so much, girl, you know how much it means to me!! 

 

GOSH Thanks again Nancy!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: skipper Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2013 09:18 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥

OMG loved it? So happy they are back together. Cant wait to read more :)

Author's Response:

Hi Ida :) Thank you girl! I really appreciate it! Me too :P Cant wait to write more lol! ;) Thanks again luv!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: Mittu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2013 08:57 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥

OMG you UPDATED!!!! And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! As always I loved the update!! Please update soon...

!!!!!!MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!



Author's Response:

HI Mittu! :) Thanks so much hun!! I'm so glad you liked this chapter! I'm working on the update, will be up soon!! :D Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2013 06:34 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥

First off I wanna say Thank You so much for updating ! It was like a Christmas Miracle when I saw that you had done so. 

I really loved this chapter . It feels like the air has been cleared between these two. Every emotion came out within them, which provoked some emotion within me. 


Michael's speeches about his imperfection made my heart flutter and my stomach erupted an entire zoo of "aww..." . It makes me really desire a man much like Michael. 

I can't wait for the next update! It's about damn time Nita said yes to moving in. I can already tell it's gonna get crazy!


P.S. When are some little babies gonna come into the picture? I mean these two fuck like little monkies on crack! Nita need to stop poppin' those pills and start poppin' Michael out some babies! 


P.P.S or P.S.S (which ever one .. ) HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!! xoxo & Merry Christmas ..



Author's Response:

Hi Miya! Love your name btw ;) LOL I'm the one that should be thanking you but You're most welcome!! Haha thanks girly!! 

Really? Wow I'm SO glad it did... :)

Yep, he's the man we're in love with after all, isnt he? :P Haha, yep she finally gave in! But who knows what future holds for them...mmm?! You're damn right its gonna be crazy... just wait ;)

HAHA! You should ask Michael and Nita about that! Haha 'fuck little monkies on crack' like this! :D Well... I'm not gonna open my mouth but you can wait and see...? ;)

 

LMAO!! THANK YOU!!! Merry Christmas to you too!!! Lots of love your way <3 xx

 

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2013 08:23 am Title: ♥ Chapter 28: Behind The Mask ♥

excellent!!!!!!!!! does he gonna propose?... On christmas ?!!!...

Im' exiciting!!!

 

Merry Christmas girl and happy birthday!!!!!



Author's Response:

HI Nellan!! :) Propose?! LOL No! Haha, have I been confusing you hun? Gosh, Thanks SO much luv!!! Really it means a lot to me girl :) Lots of love your way <3 xx

Reviewer: VADYID Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2013 12:35 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥

Patiently waiting for an update I loveeee this story. It was the first one I read on this site & from then on I was hooked lol



Author's Response:

Hi VADYID :) !!  Thanks so much sweetheart, it really means a LOT to me... wow!  Really? That just made my day :D Thanks again pyt, really!! I'll update asap! It's almost finished. Lots of love your way <3 xx

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