[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2012 06:37 am Title: Chapter 7
Awww damn. Hes sprung. lol Cuddling, cooking a feast, eating burned batter lmao. She knows shes wrong for surving him that. I mean if you wont eat it yourself... Im happy he put Bri in her place. Right when he won over her friends, he has to look out for her daddy. SMH
Date: Dec 26, 2012 06:20 am Title: Chapter 6
NOO!! Dont stop until she says otherwise lol. That was a very cute date. And he just earned a million extra points for knowing how to cook. I cant cook to save my life either so I feel her pain and embarrassment lol. A storm hit? And he might have to stay the night? Hmmmm =D
PS. Im gonna have to get her a cellphone instruction manual cause she stay embarrassing herself with that phone. lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2012 05:58 am Title: Chapter 5
I appreciate the fact that this story isnt very 'Michael' and im glad you didnt scratch this. This is more like a present day Michael born and im guessing raised a regular dude in the hood of DC.
That date was too adorable. Reminded me of when my friend let me go wild behind the wheel for the first time. So much fun. But Melissa went crazy though lol. Running mofos over and ish. Michael is so take charge, i love it. Knowing when she's bullshitting, asking what she wants, taking action. Little sisters are annoying as fuck. Im glad youve captured this in its true form, cuz I have to deal with one of my own.
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2012 05:38 am Title: Chapter 4
LMAAAAAOOOOO!!!! That was so effin embarrassing!! loool. OMG! Hi-la-rious!! Her friends are so crazy. Atleast he found out up front where they stood lol. And she got a date out of it. Greg needa calm down lol. How dare Michael give my curls away =(. I love the awkwardness between the two at times and the fact that she doesnt quite understand him or his jokes from time to time. Adds to the realism of the story.
[Report This]Date: Dec 26, 2012 05:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Why didnt he just give her back the ID back at the bus stop the next day? Ill tell you why. Because he wanted to see that ass again lol. Melissa's girls need to calm down. Im glad some are standing up for her. Preach on Hilary. She's a grown woman. That lil arguement he had with the flavor of the night was hilarious. lol He so loose if half the girls from his neighborhood had a piece. Ewww. Im glad he quit bullshitting and waved.
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2012 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lmao!! She already got his as waving, digesting butterflies and shit. Caleb that negro though. If it wasn't for his car they probably wouldn't have gotten to know each other. But how you rob somebody after church? Lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2012 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhhh!!!! :D
I'm so giddy right now cuz I'm about to reread this story so I can review. I effin LOVEEEE <<<<3333 this story, you can't even fathom. Merry Xmas to me. Lol
Now we all know Melissa want the D cuz had it been an ugly mofo she would've just left the phone where it lay instead of going to search for him in the hood, especially after he semi cursed her out twice . I mean who is that nice to go out of their way in this day and age? Michael's students are hilarious. Picking his pockets and flirting and all. Lol Love it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks hun you know I love your reviews
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2012 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 36
I just found this story, and I couldn't stop reading it! You are truly a gifted writer :). I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much I'm glad you like it
Date: Dec 22, 2012 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 36
I have been reading you story through from the begin sense about i'll say about a month ago
it's a good story and I'll say I never thought i would like a story where Michael as ghetto, but from what I hear about Michaels real personality he actaully can get ghetto talking when he's realxed and with his friends
so i image if Michael had never made it in the industry he would have been more getto
and when it comes to weed I also heard that he did smoke it modderately so it was like Michael to the extreame
but the best part of this chapter whas MICHAEL asking about toe stands that was SO ironic LOL
this sia good story it really is and it is a better fit I heard about the 200watts dibocal but I have to say this story works alot better esciallly for the african american readers
Michael was ours before he was ever theres and this is a really good story
keep going I'm interested to see how it ends. and check out Dance for you if you get a chance
Author's Response: Why thank you. I was hoping someone would catch the comment about toe pointing. Lol you caught it! And yea I wanted to make him ghetto but realistically ghetto. I'm really glad you like the story and I hope you continue to read the updates!
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 09:33 am Title: Chapter 36
Why u stop there?!! lol please continue, im lovin their relationship :)
Author's Response: I stopped because the chapter was turning into a darn scroll lol it was getting too long
Date: Dec 22, 2012 08:54 am Title: Chapter 36
i hope people are seeing how mean you are to me. (crying) i have been so nice to you...sniff ....sniff.....and you call me names. you....sniff.....are....sniff....so....sniff...EVIL!!! this is a case of dimestic co author abuse....dcaa for short. i hope you are proud of yourself. im gonna call creeper to be my lawyer. lol
Author's Response: DO NOT try to pretend because you alreeeeaaadddyy know! I'm about to go all DC on you real quick. Don't be fakin and shit infront of niggas cause yo ass ain't innocent and you ain't bein abused, lyin ass. Go write for heist how bout you do that instead of frontin on my stories and shit! Lol jk your the best man everybody know this alreayd you are the peanut butter to my fan fiction jelly. Now stop whining and man up!
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 07:56 am Title: Chapter 36
ohh they bout to get it IN! lol does it make me like michael if i told you i dont know what swan lake is? dont judge me but i never liked ducks......is it about a duck? well anyway great chapter i think it was cute. another update will be much aprreciated........just sayin......no pressure......love ya! lol
Author's Response: Uhhhh shut ur face. Swan lake has nothing to do with ducks ya country bumpkin. Its a ballet about Swans...hince SWAN lake lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2012 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 36
Melissa and Briana's gossiping had me laughing. Was the guy in the ticket booth seriously flirtin' with a woman who clearly had a date, smh he's lucky Michael only cussed him out. Really enjoyed the longer chapter, great update.
Author's Response: Yea but he can't be showing all out at a ballet
Date: Dec 21, 2012 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 36
Love Meme and Mike together
Date: Dec 19, 2012 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 35
Hooray!!! I'm excited to see what happens!! :D
Author's Response: My teacher sprung an essay on us =( I will still try to update though