[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow what a way to meet Brooke. She is a nasty piece of work
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Why did michael do what he did. He loves rayne and should tell her instead of chasing brooke
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh my I hate Marlon right now. How could he be so mean to his own brotther and still the girl he loved
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
Haha I love jealous Michael and i sure hope marlon does not get his way with rayne. She deserves better than him.
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my is Michael jealous because his brothers want to take Rayne out. he is with brooke after all .
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far. I dont get why Rayne keeps what his ste dad is doing to her a secret. he needs to be punished. She needs to tell Michael
Date: May 23, 2012 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1
if you delete this story i'll hit you...
okay, so i won't hit you but i'll be really, really angry....
...and sad...
:(
Date: May 23, 2012 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1
If you delete this story I will...........cry! Im just now catching up on my favorite updates cause I havent been getting them so Idk Whats going on!! Please Dont delete it!!! If you delete I will upload a video and post it on here of me crying! And you dont want to see me crying cause I turn red and make the most ugliest faces!! :/ I love this story like it is my child (Which I dont have)
Author's Response:
we just didn't feel it was going anywhere. i got to say....it feels pretty good to know our story is loved this much.
Date: May 23, 2012 07:39 am Title: Chapter 12
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Date: May 23, 2012 07:36 am Title: Chapter 12
Dont do it -_-! I'm a silent reader fir a reason but no deleting thus story because it's the bomb and shiot!
Date: May 23, 2012 04:55 am Title: Chapter 12
Okay. I'll admit that I am one of those silent readers, but I genuinely like this story and would very much like to see where its going especially since she has been removed from that house.
Date: May 23, 2012 04:10 am Title: Chapter 1
You guys say you don't want it to end. Yet each chapter has like two reviews. This story has too many silent readers.
Date: May 23, 2012 02:24 am Title: Chapter 12
Whaaat? No,no,nooooo!! :o please continue!! please :( im new and you guys are awesome! you are amazing! Pleasee :( im so in love with this story please :( <3 <3
Date: May 23, 2012 12:09 am Title: Chapter 12
Nooo don't delete it I love this story and the idea of Michael and Rayne.. But if you must Write two more chapters and finish it... I would hate not reading this story any more but just make it short for the ones who read it.. Please finish it :(