[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 05:56 am Title: Chapter 5
I can't stand joseph. Hes not a friendly like owen wilson said on the movie with ben stiller can't remember what movie name is. I think it's night at the museum:the smithoains somethin' like that.lol i can't wait til michael moves out. I wish rayne can soon fight against the abuse that her stepdad. He shouldn't land an hand on any woman. I hate men like that.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 05:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Michael is overractiving and paranoid. Why he calling brooke?
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 05:15 am Title: Chapter 3
I don't like marlon. He's too much in her space. If he was an gentleman. He should let her breathe. Michael seems to like her alot.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 04:52 am Title: Chapter 2
They both jealous ha. They make an great couple. I hope rayne tell michael the truth someday. Marlon look like he didn't take very well. Lol well michael can't help to claim whats rightfully his. Rayne
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2012 04:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Hehe Rayne is so jealous and she is indenial. Cha-ching im so weird in my own way. Lol. I hope one day she get the courage to tell michael that her stepdad hurts her.
Date: Nov 21, 2012 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 15
Glad to see this story back in action
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2012 06:30 am Title: Chapter 15
Marlon is an asshole, he just disappeared like nothing was going on. Poor Rayne, Michael really is all she has now. Great chapter; glad you were able to update.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
Loving it still !!<3
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2012 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 15
Yay you're back! :D I hope you don't stop updating this story 'cause I love it and maybe it hasn't as much reviews you were hoping for, but there are actually a lot of read counts! :) xoxo
Author's Response:
we are not really worried about reviews. reviews are not what makes a story. we only care that you are enjoying it. thanks for the review though.
Date: Nov 20, 2012 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
Mmmhmm Rayne rather you like it or not Marlon started this shit. He thought it would turn Michael against her. Boy that shit backfired huh Marlon? Ha!
Author's Response:
girl preach lol thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: Nov 13, 2012 04:47 am Title: Chapter 14
When are you gonna update this story? :'(
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2012 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oooooh it's getting better all the time! Please update as soon as possible! I wanna read moooore
Author's Response:
we didn't think people still was interested in this story. but thank you for proving us wrong.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2012 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 14
Please continue :) I've missed this story, wonderful chapter btw ! Loving the drama
Date: Aug 13, 2012 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 14
I wanna know what happens. And marlon know damn well she ain't running into nobody's arms but michaels.
Date: Aug 13, 2012 10:32 am Title: Chapter 14
You should continue on! Marlon's a mess and trying to get Rayne by starting drama will make her hate him.