Date: Jan 25, 2013 05:56 am Title: Chapter 15
Are you gonna update this story? :)
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Author's Response: Eventually yea
Date: Jan 15, 2013 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 15
Enid, you big mouth. Marlon is a jerk and everyone else is just confused (well, everyone except Michael and Ranye. The rest don!5 know what really went down and need to stfu. lol.
Date: Jan 15, 2013 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 14
Jackie... sheesh. Hectic, drama... I love it!
Date: Jan 15, 2013 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 13
omg, I'm glad you didn't delete! Great story! Rayne is lucky is friggin' has Michael. Rayne's mom is a sorry excuse and Phil is just... naww.
Date: Jan 15, 2013 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
wut. This story is like the best! Don't delete!!!
Date: Dec 06, 2012 09:12 am Title: Chapter 15
Marlon is an ass and started all this fucking shit. It's makes me mad that he destroyed the trust that she had with the family that she ever had. Marlon is an stupid fuckup lol continue i enjoyed ur stories :D can't wait for the next chapter. Much Love
Author's Response: Your review scared me a bit at first lol thanks hun and we will continue
Date: Dec 06, 2012 08:59 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh shit. Shit about to go down. Marlon makes me mad.
Date: Dec 06, 2012 08:42 am Title: Chapter 13
What joseph up to. He scaring me with his sudden kindness.
Date: Dec 06, 2012 08:08 am Title: Chapter 12
Please don't delete it. I enjoy this story. :(
Date: Dec 06, 2012 07:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Her mother is an cold hearted bitch. How dare she treat her daughter like shit. Disowning her daughter angers me. My mom is mean but she has far more respect than her. That be funny if michael sit the woman house. Lol that be awesome ^_^ *laughs evily* XD lol
Date: Dec 06, 2012 07:29 am Title: Chapter 10
Im glad that she told michael and gonna live with him. Im happy for her. I can't wait til they confess their feelings for each other.
Date: Dec 06, 2012 07:08 am Title: Chapter 9
Im glad that she is ok and that she is talking to him again. I hope she trust him and tell him everything.
Date: Dec 06, 2012 06:31 am Title: Chapter 8
Uh oh michael is in deep shit. Why would he do that to her. Hes so stubborn and hardheaded. Lol i still love him even he stubborn. I hope brooke but her 2 dollar hoe of an ass out and let michael be with rayne before i snatch her 50 cent hair piece out her head. Lol im so mean.
Date: Dec 06, 2012 06:18 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh that trifling bitch how dare she. Ugh i just want to shoot her with my bazooka and feed her to my gorilla ^_^
Date: Dec 06, 2012 06:05 am Title: Chapter 6
I hate brooke well just in the story tho. She so cruel and evil. Oh my gosh i just want to punch that bitch. Lol sorry she makes me mad.