Date: Dec 24, 2013 04:12 pm Title: I Fucked Up
Yep you damn right you fucked up Raz! And to make matters worse, you thought you could fix it with sex? Girl bye. She needs to possibly get her ex and Michael together in the same place and tell him what it is. She brought up a lot of old shit that Michael did yet it still doesn't compare to what she just did with the ex boyfriend. Michael has always wanted HER and her ass only. So yes she was disrespectful as hell. Especially given the fact that Michael was RIGHT there! Smh idk how she's gon make it up to him but she definitely needs to. They don't need to be down there arguing n shit and letting other people see them have problems. They need to fix this shit. Razlina's yellow ass was wrong and I can't say I blame Michael for being mad and mean to her. He's just trying to teach her a lesson. That boy loves her.
Author's Response:
She messed up badly. And you know its really bad if Michael let her leave in the middle of her little attempt to win him back. It's tragic. She knew she messed up and being that she tried to hide it just made matter worse. smh. Hopefully they'll be able to work it out because you're right, they don't need to be letting other people see them in their worst moments. Michael gave her tough love so we'll see how that goes.
Date: Dec 24, 2013 04:09 pm Title: I Fucked Up
Dayum... :(
Author's Response:
:(
Date: Dec 24, 2013 03:54 pm Title: I Fucked Up
Awwww poor Mike and Raz
Author's Response:
I know :/
Date: Dec 16, 2013 04:53 am Title: Well Damn
Her siblings are too adorable lmfao. And welp, I knew she'd talk about sneaking out. Anywho, damn MJ and his mom have a lot of drama lol. They need to work all dat out. But anyway, I really hope Michael tells her about his life. Hell, I know I'm interested in finding out lmfao. Lets get some MJ history lol
Author's Response:
They are with their little bad behinds. Of course, Razlina the Rebel, doesn't abide by the rules. And yea, Michael and his momma have been through.
"I really hope Michael tells her about his life. Hell, I know I'm interested in finding out lmfao. Lets get some MJ history lol"<--
*Dory's voice* just keep reading, just keep reading, just keep reading, reading, reading.
Date: Dec 16, 2013 04:39 am Title: Busted
LOOOOOOL! Oh god, not the condom! C A U G H T! Looooool looks like she's got some explaining to do. But tbh, her mom seems to be handling it better than I ever would've thought. Well she seems like she does. My mom would've beaten me up lol
Author's Response:
The most embarassing way to get caught at that lol. But her momma let her slide...well somewhat. Momma Trinity is cool tsk tsk.
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2013 03:42 am Title: Someone's Gotta Take the Lead
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!
*R. Kelly voice* I really don't see nothin wrong, wit a little bump and grind baby~
LOL! Yaaaas they gots it in, they gots it in. She got dat DIK treatment lmfao!
All jokes aside, awwww. They're in love with each other. How sweet. Dey in love lol. Dey was made for each other. Dey got it in. This was a really good chapter, and I'm glad Raz opened herself up to him. I know that must've been hard for her to do. Awwwww ^_^
btw I know that song by Alicia Keys lol. Yaaaaas~
Author's Response:
lol I can't with you. You need to quit tsk tssssssk.
"Yaaaas they gots it in, they gots it in. She got dat DIK treatment lmfao!"<--
You need help lol but yaass they got in. Mike and Raz's relationship is growiiiing.
"I'm glad Raz opened herself up to him. I know that must've been hard for her to do."<--I guess you could probably see now a little why she's so angry all the time lol but yass at you knowing that song lol. People be surprised when I tell them that I know it too smh.
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2013 03:10 am Title: I'll Change the Game for You
They are too cute lol. Ratchet as I don't know what but cute. If Michael serenaded me I'd probably be blushing extra hard. Man I woulda had a stroke lol. And I seriously hope Lashae backs off. Even her crazy, scary ass can find someone for her lmfao. But man I can't wait to see how their relationship develops. Because AWWWWWW! Lol
Author's Response:
tsk tsk. I would too to be quite honest. Mike is a charmer tsk tsk. As for Lashae...well
my lips are sealed. And you'll see more in timmme. Glad you're enjoying it :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2013 07:26 pm Title: The Crew
I'm ready for them to go back to NY! I couldn't wait for them to go on this trip but now that Raz has seen her ex and is talking about old feelings came back its time for them to go. What does she mean old feelings especially after he played her like that -.-!!!
Author's Response:
lol! Raz had a slip up....a true weak moment. Hopefully she'll get herself together because that wasn't cool. Good thing she didn't tell Mike because who knows what his reaction may have been tsk tsk.
Date: Dec 12, 2013 11:44 am Title: The Crew
At work bout fell out my chair when I got to the end and seen you used the characters from boyz in the hood and menace to society.
Author's Response:
lol did you really? tsk tsk. I just had to use them. I really love those movies lol.
Date: Dec 12, 2013 02:01 am Title: The Crew
Chile... I was bout ready to come snatch the fuck outta Raz!!!! Old spark my ass! Mike is nothing but good to her goofy ass, and he's FINE. That lil boy that's her ex looks like a fuckin 12 year old wearing his big brothers clothes. She better get her shit together and keep it together. Michael is a good one honey. So I don't blame him for gettin a lil jealous and pissed at her. She needs to get off the bs. That shit is a turn off and it's immature. X, Y, Z whoever the fuck he is, is a non factor and that is what he shall remain. She better remember the shit they went through with Lashae's ratchet ass. She didn't like it when another chick was all on her man, so she better think about Michael. This X fellow ain't worth two dead flies. Just useless niggrum status chile. But I was ready to clear her ass. I'll be glad when they have some alone time together. They been meeting people and doing shit since they got down there.
Author's Response:
lol Raz had a weak moment although she didn't really show it but then again maybe she did.
"That lil boy that's her ex looks like a fuckin 12 year old wearing his big brothers clothes."<--looooool. He does.
Raz needs to pull herself together and quit. Poor thing is having some internal conflict and not in a good way. Hopefully with this alone time they'll be able to let loose and relax because they need it.
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2013 08:14 pm Title: A Good Plan Gone Bad
*deep sigh* Lashae just doesn't know when to quit huh. I hope Raz knows that Michael definitely didn't want to kiss her behind. Like, I have to give it to her, she's persistent but in an annoying way. The thirst she has for him is too real. And lol @ what Raz was saying about Lau. Yeah he's cute and I think they'd make a great couple but you know... Lol she is with my bew. Omg I hope there won't be a love triangle later on LOL! Well maybe I do... But still xD
Author's Response:
Thirsty hoes never quit lol. They know no chill. As for Raz and Lau...well...lol. Imma just keep my mouth shut and let you continue reading tsk tsk. But there won't be much trouble from Lau. That's all I'll say.
Date: Dec 09, 2013 10:30 pm Title: Truth or Dare
Lmfaaaaaaaaaoooooooooo what kind of truth or dare is this??? They all just got right to it super quickly lmfao. But they should just go ahead and tell everyone that they're dating lol. And well, Lau is cute and cool so I don't blame Raz for blushing but MJ is cuter, obviously ^___^
Author's Response:
lol they ain't wasted no time. And yea they should but they're still trying to keep people out of their business. You'll see how long that lasts though. And yea, if I was Raz I would have been blushing hard too. Being crushed on by two fine brothers is a tough situation lol. But of course Mike always wins. ^_^
Date: Dec 09, 2013 10:06 pm Title: You Ain't Shit
Hell I'd have Pizza Hut on speedial too if they delivered to my neighborhood ;___; they don't deliver here anymore because they get robbed loooooooool. Anyway this chapter was good so hush. I hope their plan works. All this stuff Lashae and her friends are pulling is just so petty
Author's Response:
That's the thing, they don't even deliever in my neighborhood either lol. I used to call in to have my order ready so when I got there I wouldn't have to wait. And maaaan some of these chapters weren't all that. I just wrote because I felt the need to update but not because I wanted to. And Lashae and her friends are basic. Always have been and always will be. smh.
Date: Dec 09, 2013 09:45 pm Title: We'll Beat Them at Their Own Game
They are so dumb and petty loooooool. I have this thing where I can detect fake people. It comes from experience lol. I hope Raz ain't that gullible. I know she's not lol. They have issues forreal. All that just to try and break them up knowing damn well MJ doesn't want that girl lol. And my mean bb amused me once again in this chapter
Author's Response:
I can't even remember what happened in this chapter and I'm too lazy to read to see so Imma just agree with what you said lol. But of course you know Raz ain't stupid so what happens, happens. I'm glad you're enjoying it *_*
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2013 07:31 pm Title: That Didn't Go So Bad
Awww that was a cute chapter! I'm glad Troy is going to be a better dad to Raz she deserves it. That little moment between Raz and man man was too cute :D.
Author's Response:
Troy realized that he was wrong so hopefully he'll be a better father like he says.
"That little moment between Raz and man man was too cute :D."<-- ^_^ thank you.