[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2014 08:54 pm Title: I Can't Help It
Raz is being more sensitive towards Michael :) <3. I was happy when she called him Mike n Ike and he called her razzle dazzle. Everything is going good for them right now I hope it stays this way :D
Author's Response:
She isssssss.
"I was happy when she called him Mike n Ike and he called her razzle dazzle."<--Aww...were you really? lol
But you're right. Everything is going well as it should. Let's just hope it'll last.
Date: Apr 18, 2014 06:41 pm Title: I Can't Help It
they is just too cute I love them...they are just perfect for each other...Can't wait for prom night tho!
Author's Response:
They are, right? And it's coming soon!
Date: Apr 18, 2014 04:13 pm Title: I Can't Help It
Awwww!!!! This chapter was too cute. I'm surprised Mike wasn't tryna get some more booty. Lol. I'm surprised he told Lau and Dre about his deal. Hopefully they won't go blabbing off to everybody cuz then the whole school will be on his jock. And Raz ain't havin that shit chile. Lol. It's cool though that everybody is happy for him and so supportive. That's what's up. And prom!!! I can't wait to see what Raz will be wearing. Her and her man are gonna look so damn cute. Raz is gonna look like a girl so I know everybody will be super shocked. And of course the ending of this chapter was so cute. Raz and Mike's crazy asses are growing up. They really are the cutest couple. They'll be together for a long time I think.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
"I'm surprised Mike wasn't tryna get some more booty."<--tsk tsssssk
"I'm surprised he told Lau and Dre about his deal. Hopefully they won't go blabbing off to everybody cuz then the whole school will be on his jock."<--he couldn't hold back from his boys any longer. Let's just hope that they don't 'cause that'll be a mess for real.
Prom is near! The dynamic duo will be right. Believe that lol.
"Raz is gonna look like a girl so I know everybody will be super shocked."<--!!!!!!!!
They really are growing up and it's showing greatly. They'll be together for a while lol.
Date: Mar 27, 2014 07:50 pm Title: Sorry is For the Birds
So these fools done finally made up! Praise the lawd. lol they were wearing me out, but I applaud Raz for making Michael's ass work for her. Good. He needed to. And he always should. Thank goodness her mama didn't find out what they were really doing again. Lmao nasty asses. And chile if Mike don't look fine in that damn pic! Only thing that made me raise my eyebrow a bit was the pill talk. Hopefully Raz is remembering that she has to take the pill everyday at the same time. Since her and Mike aren't using condoms no more, she better be extra careful. They like fuckin too much and she will mess around and get pregnant real fast. Be toting a gut full of Mike n Ike, and chile I don't mean the candy. Lmao. I'm glad to see them make up though. It seems like it's been forever seeing them happy. Good to see all is well again. Now they need to gon head and resume making up at his house where they won't be interrupted or have to hide it. Lol
Author's Response:
Yess chile they made up for real this time lol. Raz wasn't going to let Mike get off easy especially since he had treated her like the side chick when they were in GA. They got off the hook with the messing around...this time lol. Michael knew he was all that and then some with his fine self.
"Only thing that made me raise my eyebrow a bit was the pill talk. Hopefully Raz is remembering that she has to take the pill everyday at the same time."<--Michael was being real cautious. But you right, Raz gotta be on her game or they WILL have some little Mike 'N Ike's running around for real lol.
"Now they need to gon head and resume making up at his house where they won't be interrupted or have to hide it. Lol"<--
tsk tsk
Date: Mar 27, 2014 07:20 pm Title: Sorry is For the Birds
Don't fret about the length, that's a good thing...it was a Good long chapter, I've been anticipating an update for a while now!! Loved It!!
Author's Response:
Well thank you, honey. I dread writing long chapters but I'm glad that you enjoyed it lol.
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 06:51 pm Title: Sorry is For the Birds
Poor Mike had to endure the raft of Original Raz for the day. She had his poor little head spinning. She just kept shunning the hell outta him. I'm so glad Raz stopped pushing him away and let him back in. She knows she loves her some Mike 'n Ike lol *Clapps for Mikey being a food bf again* OMG the way Michael was looking at Raz had 'Bitch' written all over it.
Idk if its me but their makeup sex was just a total mikegasm. Lordy lordy lordy. I need some water.
welp, back to studying I go....
Author's Response:
Raz was giving Michael the run around for real. She had no type of mercy lol. She knew exactly what she was going. Such an evil little thing smh bu she gave iiiiiiin. She knew that she couldn't resist her Mike 'N Ike. 👏👏👏👏 for Mike being a good boyfriend and fighting for his relationship. He wasn't gonna give up on his Razzle Dazzle that easily. That picture of Mike makes laugh every time. He looked so shady...almost like he wanted to slap her lol.
"Idk if its me but their makeup sex was just a total mikegasm."<---really? Lol he didn't do much but he did put in enough work to satisfy Raz for a while lol.
Hope that you're studying went welllllll!
Date: Mar 27, 2014 04:37 pm Title: Sorry is For the Birds
No I love that it was a long chapter. Finally Mike n Ike and Razzle dazzle made up. Yay!
Author's Response:
Well thank you honey lol. Mike and Raz are starting to make some progress again. Woot! Woot!
Date: Mar 27, 2014 04:01 pm Title: Sorry is For the Birds
Nooo don't apologize I like when the chapters are long....I'm glad Mike And Raz are on good terms again...Can't wait til the next chapter Update soon please
Author's Response:
Aww well I'm glad that you enjoyed it ^_^ I just really don't like writing long chapters lol. Michael and Razlina are getting back to where they used to be *_* I'll try to update as soon as I can!
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2014 09:11 pm Title: Long As You Know Who You Belong To
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time :(. I have been busy but now I finally am catching up on my favorite story ;D!!! Michael a hoe for trying to fix it with sex. He got mad when she tried that with him now he does it with her? Hmmm no! Wit his hypocrite ass. But anyways I am glad they are good now. I want them to get back to how they used to be :(.
Author's Response:
That's ok honey! Take your time. The story isn't going anywhere lol. And yep, Michael was being a true hypocrite for what he tried to do. How in the world would he get mad at Raz when she did it but then expect for her to fall for it when he tried it? Smh. He obviously didn't believe in a double standard at that moment lol. And hopefully they'll return to the way that they were very soon.
Date: Mar 14, 2014 11:29 pm Title: Long As You Know Who You Belong To
Chile boo. Michael betta get the fuck out with that. He treated that girl like complete shit over essentially nothing. Like she said, all his baggage and bullshit, she coulda left his skinny ass, but she didn't. The ball is definitely in her court and I say she needs to make his ass work for it! Shit ain't sweet like that. He acted on some pure bitch shit so he needs to play it however SHE wants to play it. Her rules. So I don't blame Raz one but for how she's treating him. And the audacity of HIM tryna get some makeup sex out the deal? Nah son. I hope she makes his ass go through the drought. She don't need to fuck him no time soon. Raz you have the power now girl. Make that nigga crawl. He got a lot of damn nerve. Now that he realizes how fucking dumb he was, he gives that WEAK ass insincere childish ass apology, and she's just supposed to be cool with it? All supposed to be forgiven just like that? Hell naw. Raz makes to make that nigga swear for it, work his ass off, the whole nine.
Author's Response:
Raz has all the power right now. Michael is seeing now how he messed up even though in the beginning it was because of Raz. He took everything to far and now Karma is biting him in the butt. Raz isn't here for his games anymore. He tried it though. But yea, he's realizing now that the apple doesn't fall too far from the tree. He should've thought about what he had done before he did it. smh.
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2014 05:48 pm Title: Long As You Know Who You Belong To
Raz is wrong for slamming the door in his face. Straight shunned him. But he should have called her back and let her know he was over being mad at her, like what did he think her response to seeing him was since the last time they were together they weren't on the best terms with each other smh.
I laughed so hard when she said "you want some of my binaca?" cuz it reminded me of the censored version of Poetic Justice when they replaced poonani with binaca lmaooooo
Author's Response:
She was smh. She did it with no shame but then she felt bad after doing it lol. And yea, Mike was wrong for what he did too. He ain't right. He should've known that her reaction wasn't going to be giddy after all that he had done to her.
"I laughed so hard when she said "you want some of my binaca?" cuz it reminded me of the censored version of Poetic Justice when they replaced poonani with binaca lmaooooo"<--lol! I was watching that crappy clean cut version of Poetic Justice the other day when I was writing and decided to include it in the chapter. Although I meant to include it a long time ago when Mike and Raz had first met but I had forgotten about it. But I really do love that part in the movie.
Date: Mar 14, 2014 05:39 pm Title: Long As You Know Who You Belong To
Yay! They back together again but I hope they get back to how they first were
Author's Response:
They're back together...woot! Woot! Let's hope that they'll be able to get back to their happier places soon.
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2014 05:08 pm Title: Long As You Know Who You Belong To
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!! love the sex scenes and this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll try to update as soon as I can! And thank you honey! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: Feb 24, 2014 08:14 pm Title: I Have to Get Used to This
Yeah I read it like that and it's all your fault! lol You titled the chapter 'Fuck It' I think you did that on purpose lol I get so emotional when I read, I had to like pause and breath then continue reading.
Author's Response:
Awww lol! Sometimes I do use certain titles to throw the readers off at times lol Most times the name of the title for the chapters that I write appears somewhere in the chapter. I think I had Razlina say it in there somewhere for this one. But I'm the same way especially when it's dealing with something that you know has some tension lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it though!
Date: Feb 23, 2014 09:41 pm Title: Fuck It
I'm glad that Raz is really trying to make amends with her dad and the rest of some of her petty ass family. Shows she's trying to actually grow up, and that's good for her. And I cracked up at her calling her granny an old prune. LMFAO a mess. Anyway, I see Mike is feeling the burn now and seeing what an ass he was. I figured he would end up seeing those texts but at least he knows the truth now. He owes Raz a HUGE apology and I'm hoping she makes his ass work for her forgiveness too for acting the way he did. She definitely don't need to fuck him no time soon. Make his ass work for that shit. Cuz he really acted a fool. Hell if it was me I would cuss him out before I forgave him.
Author's Response:
She is. She's still growing so she's trying as best she can.
"And I cracked up at her calling her granny an old prune. LMFAO a mess."<--lol she ain't got no sense.
Michael is realizing how dumb he was so now the guilt is getting to him. He really does owe Raz and apology because she tried to tell him and he wouldn't listen. But we'll see what happens between the two of the soon. :p