[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2012 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
:-) She and MJ are too cute together already. Paying for her ice cream, ayeee.
And ewww, the stepdad again. He's so ratchet and ugh. But Lawd, how you drug dealin' and you buyin' all that extravagance??? LAWDD smfh. He's just disgusting. I get mad when I read about him -_-
:-) Gotta read more, Gotta read more!!
Author's Response:
Love them=) And girl, you gonna be cursing that MF well before it's over. Lol Thanks for reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2012 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
:-) Madison sounds like my Madison, Lawd she STAYED asleep in class XD
And heeeeeeeyyyyy my man Mike done entered the story. YES.
"Hey, hey, hey, I go to sleep for a hour and wake up looking at sexual chocolate, excuse me caramel" Madison said to me regarding Michael. <----- LMAO, I'd be just like that.
Lawd, I wish I WAS in a class with Mike, I wouldn't be focused then I'd get ba grades so that way I'd have to have him be my tutor. We wouldn't get much tutoring done ;)
And lmao "hey, um, do you know where room 319 is?" I'm such a perv, I started thinking about that Prince song '319' smh.
And go head on Mike, he drove the NEW CAR to school! Ctfu!
Their relationship is about to get hella interesting :-)
Author's Response:
XD, that's me and my friend were, except I was somewhere with a hangover XD
Yess, Mike has moonwalked his sexy self into the story, Lmao.
Lol, Why you think I used 319???? XD That and because that was the room number of my Advisory class LMAO!
Hells yeah, Mike brought out the new whip!!!
And oh MOST definately XD
Thanks for reviewing Lemon Cake!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2012 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
:-) Awww, I'm glad she has friends and family of the friends to rely on. They're like her surrogate family and she really needs that.
And damn, their teacher needs to stop! Like omg he's so much extra smh. And haha, when I was in high school is different in New York. I'd never heard of "blocks" we would be like 'first period' 'second period' etc XD
And lmao "Michael, the baby boy....." that made me kinda laugh, I was like 'damn, she cut Randy out of the story?' XD
Loving it already dear heart :-) xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Lol if you notice, I say he has brothers but I don't really go into depth on that, so basically, everybody got kicked out XD Girl that is the same ratchet ass teacher I had in HS.
We had 8 periods at first too, but it was 10th grade I think they changed us to Block Schedule, where we only had 4 classes in a day, then switched in the middle of the school year to new classes. 1 Block was 90 minutes long.
I's glad you loving it!! Thanks for reviewing love!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2012 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
-_- Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww the stepdad is so gross and ugh.
How can one abuse a child? Smh, he and the mama need help. They on that other other shit.
Her life is so sad :/
But aww, I just tear up at the name Madison lol, I'm such a baby. *le sigh*
This is a great start, Honeybee xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
=/ I know....some would say I'm twisted for writing this, but I have a close friend that went through this same thing and I was front row for it all. It was, just *slightly* less exaggerated. Lol I always seem to use the name Madison in a story, but don't worry she's a positive character=) Thank you and thank you for reviewing, love!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 12
Haha, wait till Joe finds out. I didn't expect Audrinna to have a sailors mouth. Suprises, suprises. I wonder why people weren't concerned about MJ getting shoot... mystery....
Author's Response:
Lmao, yes, she in fact does...much like the authorXD and as stated previously, Emilio, Audrianna's stepfather, runs Northside, Police Department included.
Thanks for your review, love!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2012 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
OH DANG!!!! Sorry if I didn't review, I'm a bit busy. But you left us with a shock at the end, good thing this story isn't over.
Author's Response:
It's all good=) and no, it's far from over;) Thanks for your review love=D
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2012 06:31 am Title: Chapter 13
That was sweet!! I enjoyed it.!! I just couldn't help but noticed that they didn't use a condom and he came inside her. Hmmmm.?
Author's Response:
Thank you, and *nods* that's right;) XD Thanks for reviewing love!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2012 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
BOOYAH!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Lmao, I take it that you liked it? Lol, thanks for reviewing love!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2012 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 13
wow that was steamy gurl! lolz but i liked how he took his time with her. they are so cute togethere. hope to read more soon. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks girl, and they are a cute couple aren't they? Lol I hope to have another chapter up soon. Thanks for reviewing!!!=)
Date: Jun 21, 2012 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
O.O *drools*
Author's Response:
XD Next chapter sooner than you think!! Lol thanks for the review!!
Date: Jun 21, 2012 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thank goodness Michael is ok. Dri & Michael are so cute
Author's Response:
IKR and =) They really are! Lol thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2012 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ahwww soo romantic cant wait for the next part! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2012 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
That was cute!! I'm just glad Mike is okay. I wonder if the the cops know that Emilio was responsible for all this.
Author's Response:
Oh yes they do, Emilio runs Northside, Police Department included.......Thanks for your review love!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2012 11:30 am Title: Chapter 12
OHHHHHHH GIrl!!! You SO Wrong!!!!
Author's Response:
Lmao!! What did I do??? XDThanks for your review love!!
Date: Jun 21, 2012 09:58 am Title: Chapter 11
Nooooooo :'( more pwease!
Author's Response:
=) More coming soon!!! Thanks for reviewing!!