[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2014 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 18: Venice (Part I)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW she got her first kiss!!!:) its gonna lead to some naughty things:):):):):):):):) plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):)):):):):):):):):):):):):)):):):):):):):)
Date: Apr 20, 2014 01:44 pm Title: Introduction
Ugh....don't do this to me, girl! She promised not to be all hot n cold after this! I ain't in the mood for no Raine mood swings! -_-
Nu uh!
Author's Response:
Hahaha omg! I live for your reviews!!!! I love them so much!
Girl...you're gonna love the next chapters! :)
Date: Apr 20, 2014 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 18: Venice (Part I)
I'm a new reader and I love this story:) I just hope that she doesn't say that she was just drunk and she really didn't want to kiss him or something like that D: It would crush him! But update soon pleasee! :)
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait and see! Thanks for your review!!! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2014 11:17 am Title: Chapter 16: The Girl Is Mine
Heyy, I'm a new reader and I really am liking this story :) btw do you like Lianne La Havas? Cos I recognised her song as I started reading it and that's one of my faves! :D
Author's Response:
Lianne La Havas is the visual of Raine...haha I was goof to reveal her in the next chapter. Hopefully others don't read the reviews! Hahaha
btw I love her!
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2014 10:13 am Title: Chapter 18: Venice (Part I)
So she had avoided him after what happened in the last chapter. Idk why I laughed at that lol but awww at her getting a kiss on her birthday. I'm pretty sure that they're gonna have some things to talk about regarding their friendship since this happened. Luckily Janet or Jake didn't wake up to see them. Good chapter, twin :)
Author's Response:
Totally avoided him! The first kiss on her sweet sixteen is dope right? Lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2014 10:09 am Title: Chapter 18: Venice (Part I)
Oh hell yes!!! FINALLY!! I'm glad she's coming around! :)
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Wellllllll.....who said she is?
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2014 06:26 am Title: Chapter 17: Baby Be Mine
Ughhh they need to kiss already!!!
Author's Response:
Waaaaaait for iiiiit.....lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2014 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 17: Baby Be Mine
Jermaine would be the one lurking lol. Mike is so cute with his shy self. But I wish that he would just go ahead and tell Raine that he likes her.
Author's Response:
You know Jermaine be on it. He's always thirsty for fresh meat!
You gotta give it time twin! Lol it'll happen...maybe
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2014 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 17: Baby Be Mine
Seriously, Quincy?! Let's give him the bad timing award! ;(
I hope Raine isn't upset with Michael after this. I mean, it was obvious to everyone but her that he likes her. Apparently she's blind! I can't believe she just asked him to take her home. Finish the kiss, dammit! If you don't, I'll die or....something! Just....PLEASE!!!!!! See, I'm begging!
Author's Response:
She definitely is blind! Haha. If you thought this chapter was something, you better watch out for the next one! Just saying!
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2014 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 17: Baby Be Mine
DAMN THEY WERE ABOUT TO KISS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):):):)):):)):):):):)
Author's Response:
Hahahaha! Sooooo close right? There's more coming soon! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2014 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Girl Is Mine
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Ok, doing the math here. She's only a few months away from turning 18, right? Oh, please, tell her how you feel. Please, please, PUHHLEASE!!! Yes, I'm begging here! Update soon, I've missed this story!! ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2014 04:23 am Title: Chapter 16: The Girl Is Mine
Im glad you picked this story back up! I feel bad that they can't be together yet smh
Date: Mar 28, 2014 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 13: November 27th
HaHaHaHaHa...that was too cute at the end!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 28, 2014 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 8: Family Day (Part II)
Sorry I've not left any reviews thus far but that's because as soon as I read one chapter I'm on to the next!! This is a really good story by the way!! I'm loving it!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Girl Is Mine
You updated!!! *cries tears of joy* I seriously thought that you forgot about this story maaaan. But yaaaaas for the update lol.
Ok now for the review, Raine is so cute with her shower singing. My sister does the same exact thing lol. I laughed so hard at Michael asking Jehovah to forgive him. I could picture him doing something like that lol.
Raine was a troll for influencing Paul to have Michael to another take lol. And I wonder what that little comment that Michael made about not being able to have something was all about. I know he's feeling her...but I wonder if he's gonna actually come out and admit it. Hmmmm...
Don't wait too long to update, Twin. I love youuuu <3