Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2012 08:12 am Title: Chapter 38

Smdh -_-   I know this may come as a bit of a shock to most of you…

But OBVIOUSLY Alex is the one at fault here!

I mean face it: Homegirl has to stop swingin’ around the fence and make up her mind already cause right now she is playing a dangerous-ass game, sampling off of two different desserts at the same time..
She’s risking herself one hell of a painful descend downhill!

And don’t give me all this Michael’s-the-coward-who-doesn’t-deserve-her-cause-he-never-told-her-he-loves-her Crap!

Think about it; he didn’t even have to do that for Alex to know about his feelings!

First of all, remember how he STARTED telling her, for like the hundredth time or so, about his feelings but got interrupted by Janet barging in after they kissed?

And even aside from that: after Katherine telling Alex personally about her son’s feelings; the things Michael told Alex outside that coffee shop after she went missing ÀND that amazing kiss they shared in only the previous chapter – Alex would not only have to be Stupid, but also Mentally-Disabled NOT to know how he feels…

She’s the one who doesn’t know what she wants over here!!

And Michael’s right; clearly he made a mistake going soft on her cuz look at Alex willingly pressed up against the wall with a different man between her legs already!

I’m not saying he should go back to bullying or beating her, but obviously he went just a tad too easy on her if she’s already foolin’ around behind his back like that one day after they kissed…

Sure, that was nice of Leonce to make her a banner, but if she were to start handing her virginity over to EVERYBODY kind enough to make her a damn piece of paper with her name written on it, no doubt she would be the school’s mattress by now…

Pisses me off! She didn’t even give Michael a fair chance is what it is! People just have to wake the heck up and stop dwelling in pity for Alex already cuz it’s getting old.

I believe she has some serious thinking to do here….

Who’s it gonna be girl? Michael or Leonce? I’m rlly hoping she’ll follow her heart for once n make the right decision…

 

Thanks girl. Can’t wait for the next one!

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2012 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 38

Oh no! :( I agree with my fellow reviewer tho saying that Michael actually doesn't deserve her. Maybe he'll learn the lesson and NOT move backwards for once. She learned the way to break a heart...She learned from the best...She learned from him. That Whitney Houston song "I Learned From The Best" just came to my mind.

Michael, just quit the tough act, tell her that you love her, fight for her. That's the chance you got. Be nice. Don't move backwards now. How would she know you love HER of all people? Leonce is the one she likes, the nice guy, but she loves Michael, the "bad" guy. That's the way it always is. lol She tries to love with reason, giving Mr. Nice Guy a go, but reason does not have anything to do with love, Alex! I hate to burst your bubble!

 You'll end up with Michael anyway and he was the one, who made you stay. Michael, you just gotta make that move...FINALLY...you coward!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2012 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 38

Nooooo wait what a twist you've pulled off.. I was not expecting this to happen I thought that.... OMG NOOOO :'(

Reviewer: Dri Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 38

"Dammit! I hate this! I hate him! I hate her! I hate her so much..."

And...HERE WE GO AGAIN! :

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2012 06:07 am Title: Chapter 37

Oh Dear, OF COURSE WE NOTICED THAT KISS!!!!

How could anyone possibly miss something so perfect? ;D

Oh my goodness, that was the sweetest thing EVER! Michael cheering her up, tickling her, making her laugh and then kissing her like that…

Whew! He rlly Does know how to make her feel better ;D

I’m so glad you gave them this moment, even if it was only brief and of course disturbed by Janet X’D

That just had to happen, didn’t it ? lol

It did make me laugh tho; I could totally picture that happening!

 

I just wish Michael would realize that he and Alex really CAN be together..

He makes her feel so much happier than Leonce ever could when they have rare moments like these.

So beautiful… I felt just as giddy as Alex reading this, I swear! The chemistry between them is so real!!

I can’t wait to see what happens after this… Hopefully they’ll have many more moments like this to come, even if they are rather short, they’re still so perfect & worth it!

Thank you so so so much!

I really hope you’ll update soooon xxx

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2012 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 37

AHHHHHHHHHHH THEY KISSED, well he kissed her but OMG THEY FINALLY KISSED. Second time but this time she was awake!!! 

Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2012 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 37

THEY NEED TO BE TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol jk great chapter

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2012 10:20 am Title: Chapter 36

Wow, that was intense!!

Seriously girl, this was one of the best chapters ever so far!
It’s rlly sad that Aunt Becky passed away :( but I’m so glad she wasn’t alone and had a very loving Joe by her side.
And how sweet was that kiss goodbye? I got goose bumps all over me readin’ that! No joke!
Poor Alex though. All on her own again and instead of being understanding, Michael acted like the same ol’ jerk all over again now that she needed him most!
But this time, for some reason, with him yelling at her like that but at least not hitting her, it was different…
Not sure why but I guess it had to do with him being so boldly honest and open about his feelings for her for the first time.
Telling her how scared and worried he was to have lost her for good n all that… It was actually kinda sweet, in an odd way , hahah.
And then when he hugged her like that, it was just so real and passionate! I was so happy that he got over his jerkish ways and ended up hugging her like that instead of hurting her or anything!
Bravo girl! That was just the perfect ending to this wonderful chapter!

I was getting a little scared over here that he was completely turning into his old self again and was about a hair away from causing her physical damage, but then that happened…Beautiful!

Hopefully it’ll stay that way.
And I’m thinking joy2thaworld might be right about aunt Becky and Joe being an older version of Alex & Michael…
Wouldn’t that just be awesome? Joe might be a jerk at times but at least he’s sure about his love for his wife and kids. And something tells me Michael is just the same XD but perhaps a little sweeter…and cuter, lol ;D

I can’t wait for Joe to sit down and have a talk or something with these two stubborn-ass kids xD..Maybe that’s the last push they needed?
We’ll see…

I can hardly wait!
Thanks giiirl, keep it up!  xxx