Date: Jan 18, 2012 02:44 am Title: Chapter 4
I am wondering, is it the true in american schools, really? Behind masks and money and good behaviour infront of the teachers the kids could abuse so badly other kids and even boys can beat so hard a girl?! I sure don't want to live in there. We have our issue in here, but this is unbelievable.
Anyway, your story is interesting, and I got angry every time I read about this bad, bad, bully, this agression... Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Author's Response: At my school, I've only seen this boy beat this girl up once but it wasn't as brutal as Michael. Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2012 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
I wanna give her a Hug so bad, and kick Mikes ass for all he had done to her. Ugh but I hope that she doesn't get it twice as bad for him actually being nice and hugging her.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2012 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
omgosh!!! this story is soooo gooood plzzz update soon it's sad but i like it i most definnitly felt the poor girls pain through out all the chapters. your a talented writer keep it up.
Date: Jan 17, 2012 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
I really hope things are getting better. I hope so but part of me feels like Michael is going to start being mean to her around his friends. To maintain his image.
Author's Response: Thank you. You just gave me an idea!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2012 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 14
this is a good and beautiful story.
i love reading your stories i enjoy it. i knew
Michael was a softie.
cant wait for the next chapter
Much Love Dear
Date: Jan 17, 2012 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
I agree with Jrmspfingston they should work on some type of friendship of some sort atleast without him beating the living mess outta her. Gees i wanna read more so bad lolz
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2012 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ah!! Continueeeee as soon as you can !
Date: Jan 17, 2012 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 14
Awe what a sad poor Alex can't catch a break for nothing I want to hug her myself and I didn't think it was right for her boss to fire her. Great update I hope Michael gets out of his tough guy shell and at least tries to make friends with her. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2012 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
wow michael needs to stop playing games with alex either he wants her or wants to continue beating her up. now he wants to comfort her which is nice but im glad alex is keep her guard up and not getting to sucked into it smart choice. cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2012 03:57 am Title: Chapter 13
Damn can Michael not just leave her alone?! If i was there i would throw the fucking oranges at his back and make him leave her the hell alone. >.<
But omg you cant just stop there! lmao sorry but you just leave us craving more and i cant stand it. xD
Great chapter!!
Date: Jan 16, 2012 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey DreamAngel i just wanna say your welcome i most definitly enjoy your story and your other's as well keep it up and hope to read more chapters soon..
Date: Jan 16, 2012 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
Loved please update soooon
Date: Jan 16, 2012 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 13
Maybe it was that boy that helped het before. Michael just needs to stop. He's gone WAY to far!!
Date: Jan 16, 2012 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was that Brandon brad whatever his name was boy!!!!!!! michaels a bitch :O I love this story. He need to carry a switchblade with her & stop letting them hurt her.