Date: Jan 19, 2012 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Good maybe this whole tourting thing can help them both I liked the way he tricked him that's something my mom would do just to get us to learn, Great update can't wait for the next one.
Date: Jan 19, 2012 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 15
Mike was trying but his sudden outbursts kept getting in the way. Alex seemed kinda calm about. It seems like the are getting a teeny bit closer but they have a long way to go.!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 14
I loved loved LOVED this chapter; Michaels convo with Janet= too cute. ^_^
And awh he comforted Alex...! Ugh i am kind of anxious about what will happen next though, he might deny any feelings then beat her again or something :S
Reading chapter 15 now but will most probably review tomorrow! God bless you. <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
wow is all i can say! this is so deep and touching i feel bad for that young lady being abused like that and michael is a pathetic peice of work in this story i hope he doesn't start raping her next since most abusive guys do that to females ahh but what type of love is that he has for her? deep story and hope you update soon. 1love
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 14
Thank goodness. This chapter ended well. I was starting to worry about her.
Date: Jan 18, 2012 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
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i always pictured Alex looking like this since you've discribed her with a heart shape face and all all she needs is the gray eye's
Author's Response: Great observation! :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
im lovin the recent updates please keep them comin. i come here everyday just to see if you have continued and so far you have NOT let me down. this is getting good.
Date: Jan 18, 2012 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
pleassse pleasse update soon im craving for more there's alot of good stories on this site but wow yours is amazing and i see why you get so many reviews you sure keeps a person intrestedand and i know i comment so much but hey this story is off the chain 4real!!
Date: Jan 18, 2012 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
welp i hope she gets the courage in strengh to hit him right back once they get into agruments and i mean hit him where it hurts his prized jewels if ya know what i mean lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
hmmm after reading all of this im so shocked at michael's behaiver if he begins a relationship with her will it turn into an abusive relationship?? like for instance if they were to argue would he beat her each time they disagree with one another? i wouldn't be surprised if he were to do so. this story is fantastic and well written but so sad and heartbreaking all at once. but anyway your doing great keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you! If they were in a relationship, there's no doubt he would beat the crap out of her. Lol.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 14
aww..man...wow..sh**t wtf??wth? michael is crazy in this story must i say this story is great i love how you detail everything and omg i can feel that girls pain in every chapter i read. idk what type of love that is..but i've heard of tough love but not like this. dayummm!!!
Date: Jan 18, 2012 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 14
this an awesome story so very sad@chichi78 i know what you mean love can be blind but damn i wont be that blind i'll never hookup with someone who beats me up unless he begs me for fogivness and really make a change and go get some damn counceling.
Date: Jan 18, 2012 10:57 am Title: Chapter 14
lovebirds?! is this the love for you? to beat the shit out of the girl you actually love.. and she to love you back.. what a sick world we are living in!
Date: Jan 18, 2012 10:23 am Title: Chapter 13
it is awful, girl how di you think this story? How can a man/boy do that to a girl constantly?! I wonder if you saw that yourself, it is soo cruel that I feel real bad emotions reading it. It is so dark, I can't imagine you are so calm saying us to enjoy the new chapter. ..
Author's Response: Oh yeah. I just realized how happy I am when I update a new chapter. Ha ha. I guess I don't really let the emotion sink in all the way :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 07:15 am Title: Chapter 14
I deleted my review because I talked too much...so boring!!I apologize.
BUT...I really loved this chapter.Thank you.