[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2012 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 29
Really? How could she not know! lol
Date: Apr 08, 2012 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 28
I love this story. Please bring another update soon and also I think that in the next update something should suddenly happen to Mike and Alex should hve to decide who she loves
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 28
Michael Michael Michael…Poor, lonely, heart-broken Michael…
Now that he’s finally decided to actually do something to earn Alex’s heart, it’s all too late!
So she’s falling in love with Leonce…I guess that makes sense, sadly enough.
I mean Michael never did show any clear traces of admiration, let alone LOVE, to the girl and everybody has the right to feel loved and goes looking for that wherever they can find it.
And since with Michael all she’s found for the longest time was hurt, beatings, scoldings and belittlement, it’s more than normal that she goes looking for that much-needed warmth, comfort, love and affection elsewhere…
After everything she went through in life she probably deserves it more than others do!
But come to think of it; so does Michael! He went through a lot too but his only problem is that he’s so desperate for love yet at the same time so frightened of the foreign feeling that he handles it in all the wrong ways when it’s right there in front of him.
It’s not gonna be easy for him to win her back but I’m totally up for it and incredibly excited to read about him working and fighting for her love…AT LAST! Lol
He rlly can’t mess up this time! This is his last chance! He’s gonna have to come up with something smarter than beatings this time!
Alex is so obviously scared of him and feeling slightly nervous and uncomfortable around him after he trashed her and broke her heart and trust too many times in the past and he’s really gonna have to do something to mend those broken pieces first.
So far I’d have to say he’s doing quite well for not physically or mentally abusing here like he usually does, but she’s probably still walking on eggshells around him cuz she knows it doesn’t take much to get him all upset again…
Poor girl. Her mixed feelings for Michael and now Leonce must be a handful. I can only imagine how confused she must feel.
She does feel attracted to Michael and has a certain soft spot for him, regardless of every crappy thing he’s put her through, because it’s fate! Their feelings for each other are just that strong! They can’t just keep ignoring and neglecting it.
Let’s just say Leonce is a good, sweet and safe ‘temporary rebound’. He’s the only really stable and secure pillar in her life at the moment and just what she thinks she needs after all the pain and fear she’s been through.
But her feelings for Michael are a whole lot different. I’m thinking they’re more sexual, passionate, crazy and unpredictable which is really exciting to me!
She might need security and stability in her life right now, but that’s only until Michael is a changed man and ready to sweep her off her feet and love her likes she deserves to be loved.
I’m hoping that time will come soon and before she loses her virginity to a cheesy boy she’s only with because the picture fits and makes sense.
But we all know the best love affairs are the ones that don’t really make sense because those are way more exciting and adventurous and unpredictable ;D
I’m really really really really really really really really really REALLY impatient to see what else you have in store for us, girl!
I just know it’s gonna be awesome! Thanks darling, Take care! xxx
Author's Response: It's funny how you point out things in the story that I didn't even notice and I WROTE the story. Lol. Thanks for reviewing and thank you for the suggestion of Janet and Michael's chat
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 27
Hey grl! First of all, you have no idea how glad I was to see you'd updated!!
I knew you wouldn't give up! You're too good of a writer for that..;D
I'm so happy you went with the chat with Janet...The only sad part is that it appears to have been pretty futile this time.
What is with him not going for it this time? Now suddenly he cares more about his damn reputation than the girl he supposedly loves?
How will that ever make sense, Michael?
Of course tho, he changed his mind...
And of course once he did he was too late, once again, beaten to the punch by Mr Kiss-Ass French Mime..Smh
I'm really excited to read all about that date of theirs though..
I'm kinda hoping for Michael to go spying on them with a big hat, glasses and a newspaper or something..
Lol. Lots of ideas! hehe
I'm honestly hoping for big-time drama and then Michael coming along to save the day instead of continuing to play the nice little girl who beats up girls but is too chicken to stand up for the love of his life-card...
I rly wished he would start seeing things that way instead of thinking beating up the girl he's secretly in love actually makes him all 'bad-ass'
What Joseph put him through was cruel but the time has come for him to leave the past in the past and make a move for the future..
I just know that Alex turning to look at Michael after so obviously reluctantly admitting to go out with a guy she doesn't truly care for meant a LOT!
Janet's right Michael...There is hope for you..but if you don’t do something about it soon, you’ll be the one snatching it away from yourself ànd Alex!
Well well..Great update hun! I'm hoping Bruno, Tatiana & Monica's little plan will turn out well in the end x'D
Now I’m gonna go and read the other update! YAY! The chapters are getting longer girl! I’m so excited!
Thank you so much xxx
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 01:11 am Title: Chapter 28
Okay- i am GLAD that Michael didnt 'force' her to stay and is restraining himself from putting his hands on her but he needs to do more than just that to even get a chance at Alex... She clearly thinks about him a lot though haha. Awh i kinda find Leonce cute but sometimes when he is talking, Alex doesnt take an interest lmfao. :P
Anyways THIS STORY IS JUST THE BEST OMGGGGGG. My absolute favourite...
I am so glad to see that you are updating regularly! ^__^
Much LOVE! :D , <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2012 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 28
Alex is his bitch.? Such a charming name for the women you claim you love! Janet is right. Michael is jealous and stubborn.He just needs to tell her how he feels.
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2012 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 28
THERE U GO BABY I KNEW U HAD SOME
FIGHT IN U DON'T GIVE UP :DDDDD XD
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2012 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 27
even though i want to see Michael happy. i think Alex deserves someone better at the moment. if michael don't stop being mean to her im gonna lose all faith in them being together.
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2012 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 27
I actually kinda of feel bad for Michael but what does he expect.? That Alex is going to run into his arms after all the shit he put her through.? He just needs to tell her how he feels!
[Report This]Date: Mar 30, 2012 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 26
Ahhh finally i was able to read this story; i had an intense week of assignments this week; giving 6 units consisting of 3 assignments each aint easy xD Lmfao.
But omgz back to the story- WOW, i loved the last couple chapters.
Michael just really needs to show his emotion but is finding it hard to, i think... Im suprised Alex hasnt noticed!Lmao
Ahhh i am loving this, please update soon PYT because this is just... THE BEST :)
(Im already shipping them and they aint even together ahaha)
Author's Response: I know how you feel. It's like all of my teachers give me all this work and think that I don't have other classes that gove me assignments too. Lol! I have had a stressful week(with all my teachers seeming to want to make me fail) but I made it! :)
Date: Mar 30, 2012 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael is such a meanie :O but I love it :) you are verry good :P
Date: Mar 29, 2012 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg, cain't wait till the next update.
Date: Mar 29, 2012 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 26
Lol omg I want them to kiss already !!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2012 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 26
this chapter was really good. i understand what u mean im having a writer's block my own self. but atmjshouse she's really good with idea's she said anyone needed her to just contact her.but i do hope to michael try to ask alex out on a date to prove that he could the better man. like he can impress her and all. but i hope u update more soon.
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2012 06:19 am Title: Chapter 26
Awww, you’re not planning on letting them get together at all, girl? Please don’t break my heart like that?
They would make such a beautiful couple! Even Leonce can tell Michael loves her! It’s faith, that’s what it is ;P
Pls don’t slip into writer’s block-zone on us. I just started reading this story and I’m really loving it!
I’m hooked already and I rlly hope you won’t leave me hanging like many other writers have…
Okay, enough with the peptalk. You know who needs pep-talking right now? MICHAEL!
His sorry little ass needs a firm ass-whooping for leaving Alex there, dumbfounded like that without a single word! lol
He should’ve told her all that stuff while she wasn’t unconscious and actually HEARD him!
I wonder how long it’s gonna take for him to realize that. He just might lose her for good if he doesn’t…
Maybe Janet can have another chat with him in the next chapter and talk some sense into the boy’s head…
Now there’s a plan!
She’s like his fairy godmother or something x’D Such a wise girl.
I’m hoping Alex will turn out fine after running and collapsing like that. So she broke the record, hah? In her condition and everything. The girl is a hero!
She needs to start eating again though. Cars can’t drive without engine and people can’t live without food. Simple as that.
I’m not sure what else you can write about in the next chapter if it can’t involve them finally getting together because honestly, that’s the only option I’m seeing here. And isn’t that what we’re all secretly dying for? I know I am ;D
I think Michael has to find a way to open up to her first. The rest will happen naturally if she does feel the same way about him which I’m pretty sure she does, considering the fact that she was dreaming about him and even when waking up after he left she still felt the sensation of his presence and his kiss... No mistaking that!
And if she doesn’t they’ll be right back where they started. Which would be really really tragic XD
You have reached chapter 26 now so perhaps you’ve kept us waiting long enough…? Seriously girl, I’m dying for a kiss or a confession at the very least!
I’m hoping my PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE will convince you… haha
Hope you’ll update soon, girl! You’re a great writer so I don’t think you have much to worry about.
Great things will come. Just write whatever you feel; think about your love for Michael and put yourself in Alex’s position. Hopefully that’ll help some.
Thanks so much for the quick update, btw! xxx
Author's Response: You just gave me tons of ideas just by that review. Thank you! And yes, I suppose I have kept y'all waiting long enough but stuck around. There's more drama to come :)