




Date: Apr 24, 2012 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 33
God this is AHHHHHHHHHHHH xD





Date: Apr 24, 2012 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 33
im so happy things are going good for Michael and Alex. i hope they end up together. but you got to crawl before you walk and he's got to prove to her that he really loves her and that he will stop being so abusive. he has to earn her trust and respect.
Date: Apr 24, 2012 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 33
*wipes sweaty forehead* phew I thought she was actually leaving him! Thank goodness she went back, try deserve each other :3 why are u so surprise u got over 200 reviews...this story's the bomb!!!!! XD
Date: Apr 24, 2012 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 33
Amazing chapter I loved it now I wonder why they wouldn't want her back they should be ecstatic right? ? Just keep updating :)





Date: Apr 24, 2012 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 33
Oh!! I hope they express their feelings for one another next chapter!!





Date: Apr 20, 2012 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 32
Oh yes. Michael turning on the charm certainly is working wonders over here..
I rlly love this new side to him and I have a feeling Alex does too..He’s really fighting for her trust right now which is just what they both needed.
His advice and moral support are so wise and insightful!
And when she pulled him back inside and hugged him I swear my heart skipped a beat! That was so sweet!
I still rlly think you should go with the Alex moving in with Mrs Kate idea girl!!
Perhaps Janet and her could not only tell each other secrets about Mike and Ross, they can also Prank Michael..
Like place a bucket at the top of his door so when he enters his room he gets drenched with water X’D
And maybe sneak in a red sock with his white laundry so everything turns pink, hahah
Awww, brings back memories of my brother and I. lol
Of course he can bully them back, but in a fun and not violent way this time ;P
He could hide a mouse in their beds or wardrobe to freak em out, or smear hot sauce on their lips while they’re sleeping then videotape their reaction..
Yeah, those were the days XD Pranks galore!
I’m rlly hoping you’ll do that but of course every once in a while they should have sweet moments like these, too…
I can hardly wait for more, girl!
Hope my suggestions helped some.
Loved the update!! xxx





Date: Apr 19, 2012 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 32
One of the beat chapters!!! If she leaves Michael should follow her.. You didn't say that one so it counts lol Or they could hang out/go on a date not actually date. And he could give her a bear he won for jer and/or she could give him something to remember her by. He could give her the best memory of her life before she goes. And maybe a kiss :D





Date: Apr 19, 2012 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 32
Maybe she can move in with Michael. Monica mom and Alex don't get along. Mrs. Jackson seems to like Alex. I think it would work out or she can move in with Tatiana.





Date: Apr 19, 2012 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 32
wow thease chapters are getting sweet now:) it's good 2 c michael is finally treating alex better now maybe this a way 4 him 2 earn her love. they should definitly work on there relationship. and i think they should learn more about eachother's ways.





Date: Apr 19, 2012 03:14 am Title: Chapter 31
Oh no!!! Alex is leaving??
She can't leave! NO! They cannot do this to her! ;(
Poor Michael, too. He's gonna miss her so much..
Hey, wait a minute though...Maybe she can move in with Mrs. Kate for a while?
Oh yeah! That would be so cool!
She could sleep in Janet's room and they could become friends and Janet could tell her all sorts of embarrassing things about Michael,
and Alex could in turn tell Janet embarrassing things about Ross, bahahah XD
Then maybe, in the far future, she could start sneaking into Michael's room late at night when Janet's out, snoring like a bull, LOL. And maybe they could, y’know… ;D
Awww, look how much fun that would be!
I rlly feel for her aunt though...Can't believe she's that sick! :(
Do Kirk, Ross and Alex even know about her condition?
Damn you Uncle Joe for being so rude to Mrs Rose Fine!!
That woman was like an angel! Did you know she called Michael her son and Michael considered her somewhat of a mother when she toured around with him and his brothers in the J5 days? God rest her soul!
That was real sweet of Michael to teach Alex to stand up for herself against her uncle!
She sure had him with that one, didn’t she? I could totally picture him all speechless and shocked, caught off guard by his own 16 year-old niece, lol.
That was just what she needed! And he needed it too to be brought down a peg or 2..
Gosh, I just hope everything’s gonna turn out fine!
Thank you so so much!! I’ll be waiting (impatiently xD) for the next update, girl! xxx
Author's Response: You know, I have actually been thinking about Alex staying in the Jackson household but I wasn't quite sure how that would work out but now, I'm actually considering doing that. Thanks for the ideas! I especially like Janet telling Alex secrets about Michael and Alex doing the same for Ross





Date: Apr 14, 2012 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 31
Just caught up on the last 2 chapters.
OMG chapter 30; Mike was SO SHWEEEEET :3 And Alex is just to cutest ahahh, i had no idea Michael got a job at a childrens daycare!! This chapter was just.... BEAUTIFUL. You're just the most amazing author, seriouslllyyyy xD
I wonder if Alex will forgive him... Hmmmm what he put her through is harsh, but he is tryna change, right?
And ahh chapter 31- Im glad Michael gave her the push to stand up to her uncle. He was so supportive and knew her problems almost instantly which means he has been paying real close attention to her and cares... True love:')
Awh its so sweet how you put someone dear to you in the story, Linda sounds so lovely and very important to you!:))
And haha i love how you use actual people from Michaels life and adapt them...
For example; I noticed Rose Fine was the principal and in actual real life she taught MJ at a young age all the way through to the mid/late 70s... Michael still kept in contact with her and paid for her medical bills if i remember correctly? :/
ANYWAYS I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, keep it coming girl! You're the best.
Much love, <3
Author's Response: I'm surprised that someone actually noticed Rose Fine. I just wanted Michael to have a nice principal because usually, I would choose a really mean one. I'm glad that you noticed. You truly are an Mj fan! :)





Date: Apr 14, 2012 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 31
I am so speechless....You are always so amazing that I have no words. This chapter made me cry, especially the ending. It's so full of emotion, I adore this story. To say that you did a great job it's not enough. You are simply amazing, can't wait to read more, and more. I love it. Please update soon. All the L.O.VE in the world to you <3<3<3





Date: Apr 14, 2012 12:39 am Title: Chapter 30
Oh YAY! Michael and Alex finally had a ‘moment’!
Girl you should see the smile on my face right now x’D I’m just so excited about this!
Good thing Kirk and Ross woke her to go to the park and she ran into Mrs. Jackson there.
I’m so glad she spoke to Katherine before bumping into Michael and Janet and I’m also glad she didn’t recognize Alex at first or chances are that she would’ve never known about Michael’s feelings!
What Alex decides to do about it of course is in the hands of the Heavens right now.
Awww, she’s still mad at Michael and indifferent. :/ Makes perfect sense but I hope he’ll find a way to earn her trust and heart back in the long run.
I’m so glad he’s a changed man! He’s a bit late now but well…Not too late, is he?
Alex is a forgiving person. And I’m sure if he keeps this up soon she’ll have no choice but to give up on her grudge against Michael and fall just as madly in love with him.
No pressure tho girl! I know you like to take things slow… I respect that, I really do!
But there’s nothing wrong with being a lill excited about these two hooking up at last, right?
I just know they’ll make a beautiful couple in good time…
Speaking of beautiful couples…How adorable are Janet and Ross together? –VERY! ;D
I never saw that one comin! Hehe! That was so cute! Young love really is a beautiful thing.
I can only imagine how confused Kirk must’ve felt, standing there surrounded by all those teenagers with raging hormones x’D
I lol’d so hard readin that, hahah.
What can I say girl? This chapter was perfection! Just what they needed right now.
I’m so glad you updated! Yay, I’m so excited, lol!
Sorry for the late reply…Lots of love and hugs! xxx





Date: Apr 13, 2012 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 31
Now that she's moving, Michael is going to her how he really feels. I also feel like Alex will realize that she does indeed have feelings for Michael.
Date: Apr 13, 2012 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 31
Oh poor Alex and Michal but it is good that she stood up to her uncle. Hope you update soon.