




Date: Sep 07, 2014 06:42 am Title: You Won't Even Have Time to Feen
LOL the funny thing is, I actually agree with Michael ;__; that shit is too weird and I don't see how other people have sex even when the chick has a baby inside. On the other hand I do feel bad for Zaria lmfao. I know she's feeling but I guess she'll have to deal because once MJ has his mind made up, dassit lmao. And I love how he teased her but he would be such an annoying boyfriend/fiancé lol. Although he could've told her from the GET-GO what was wrong lol. All that cryptic mess -__- this was a good chapter btw :) they all are but still lol. And I like how even though this is the 80s, the technology and even the way they talk is new-generational lol
Author's Response:
It is weird. But then again, your hormones do rage when you're pregnant so poor Zaria is going through lol.
"And I love how he teased her but he would be such an annoying boyfriend/fiancé lol. Although he could've told her from the GET-GO what was wrong lol. All that cryptic mess -__-"<--lol typical MJ. He's one of a kind smh.
And thank youuuuuuuu :)
"And I like how even though this is the 80s, the technology and even the way they talk is new-generational lol"<--I had to spice it up :)
Date: Sep 05, 2014 09:14 pm Title: Ribbon in the Sky
Awwww :3 all that lovey-doveyness lmfao. I swear they're like that in almost every chapter. I'm glad Michael stood up for Zar from Frank because that shit was completely uncalled for -__- frank needs to understand his place, man. He's not the boss, MJ's the boss and he's being disrespectful. *sigh* but anyway... I can't wait to see what the sex of the kid will be. I hope it's a girl like MJ said :)
Author's Response:
Nah lol they're not that lovey dovey. As for Frank...tsk tsk. *zips lips* You'll see what the sex is in tiiiiiiime. ^_^





Date: Sep 05, 2014 08:53 pm Title: My Cherie Amour
Oh sweet god -___- LOL!! I knew from the moment that item was mentioned that he was gonna ask for her hand in marriage but did he REALLY have to do all that?? He annoyed her so bad, I wouldn't be surprised or upset if she just left his ass for the entire day lol. That's an odd and very irritating way to ask someone to marry you. But ooooooh snap I wonder what her answer will be ;) I did laugh at some of the moments where he made her mad though ;___; and when she cursed him out lol
Author's Response:
lol He is a troll. You know MJ is different lol he went completely out of the box but his little trollish plan took a wrong turn lol. You would laugh at him acting like he ain't had no home training wouldn't you smh lol. But you'll see what her answer will be... :p
Date: Aug 31, 2014 10:15 am Title: Get It Together
I LOVE THIS STORY! Why are Zaria and Michael the best/cutest couple ever?! I can't wait to see more of them! This is a wonderful fanfic! Keep up the great work, you're a magnificent writer!
Author's Response:
Thank you honey. You're so sweet <3 I'm honored to know that you like my story and thank you so much for reading!
Date: Aug 30, 2014 05:22 am Title: Intuition/Michael, the Stan
Continue please
Author's Response:
I will very soon! <3





Date: Aug 29, 2014 09:49 pm Title: Intuition/Michael, the Stan
KING NEEDS TO GET BEAT. Can Zaria get a hold of Joseph and arrange a little something because he needs to goddamn learn. He was seriously gonna punch Riq for no reason while he slept? He deleted Zaria's calls to Rashad? DEMON FUCKING CHILD. I laughed so hard at Rashad telling King the cartoon wasn't funny and that he was faking though loool. No but I must say....that little part with Rashad and Zaria reminiscing on happy old times got me nervous. And the way he watched Zaria with Riq and stuff....I wonder if he's gonna try anything in the future. I can only imagine Michael's reaction.
FREAKING MICHAEL FANBOYING OVER THE CHAPLIN HOUSE THOUGH. My heart melted. Idk why but it took me reading this chapter to realize Michael and I are one. His fave died before he got to meet him and he can't tell Charlie how much he inspired him AND THAT IS LIKE US. He knew our pain *cries* No but forreal Michael was so cute playing around and taking in the sights. I'm dead at him memorizing that long ass speech word for word though. That would be like us reciting his Exeter speech or something word for word lmaooo. He's such a stan.
YES ZARIA IS GOING TO MEET UP WITH MICHAEL FINALLY. Next chapter they will be reunited and all will be right in the world BLESS. He needs to see his baby girl too because we all know he's gonna dwell on the fact he's missing all these moments in her life like holding her bottle by herself. Poor thing, I'm so excited for them to be together againnnnn. This little separation wasn't good for my health I swear. OH and the fan letters and Tiahna's outfit were adorable. I need to see Michael's reaction to it, I can just imagine it now *gushes*
GREAT LONG ASS CHAPTER MY LOVE
Author's Response:
HE DOES!!! Bye at you requesting to have arrangements from Joseph looool. You are something else, you hear me. No but seriously, King has some issues that needs to be dealt with. It's actually sad that he would even try to do anything like that to that precious little boy especially his own little brother...well half brother. Bye at you laughing at Rashad though lol. You're so goofy.
"No but I must say....that little part with Rashad and Zaria reminiscing on happy old times got me nervous. And the way he watched Zaria with Riq and stuff....I wonder if he's gonna try anything in the future. I can only imagine Michael's reaction."<--hmmmm...
Michael was such a sweetheart. That is true what you said about him but like us though! I never really thought about it until you said it. It actually makes me kind of sad :( But yea, Mike stanned hard for Charlie and enjoyed himself in the process. He needed that anyway after the lonesome month that he had to endure. And don't be coming for him remembering that speech looool! That's what you call die hard dedication! After all, the testimony did say that he remembered dates, the actors in the films, etc. So I wouldn't have been surprised if he actually remembered that speech in real life *cries*
Zaria misses her husbaaaaaaaaand. No really, they all need to be together again anyway. One month is too long for a newlywed couple to be apart especially if they have an infant. Michael would probably lose his mind if he misses anything else anyway lol. Poor thing.
"OH and the fan letters and Tiahna's outfit were adorable. I need to see Michael's reaction to it, I can just imagine it now *gushes*"<--
Thank ya babes! I really didn't intend for it to be this long, ugh. But I'm glad you enjoyed it :*
Date: Aug 29, 2014 09:22 pm Title: Intuition/Michael, the Stan
Lol I can't at Zaria calling him a stan! Lol. Mike really was a stan though. He stanned for James Brown, Jackie Wilson, and Charlie Chaplin. He only stanned for the greats though. Can't be mad at that. Anyway, chile I need to hop in this story with my belt!!!!! I wanna whoop King's lil big swole tweety bird head, high yella ASS! Doing Riq like that!! Lil bad ass problem child. Whoo chile I can't stand bad kids. No ma'am. My nerves and patience lawd. Lmao. For real though. Zaria's intention is on point because King is hatin on and harmin her baby. She needs to make sure to tell Rashad's raggedy ass to keep an eye on them because I don't trust King. And speaking of Rashad, bye @ that lil vision or fantasy he had. Zaria been gone boo, get over it. He better fantasize about family life with his funny lookin, muppet face girlfriend Tamera. He irks my nerves so bad. Got his lil bad ass son messing with Riq, and deleting calls n shit. I would beat his ass til it glowed. Smh. Anyway, Mike is missing his ladies as always I see. I can't wait til they're all together again. Mike doesn't wanna miss anymore precious moments with his little sun princess Kari. Her spoiled self. Lol. Good update as always girly! Right on the King's birthday. Been jamming to him all day.
Author's Response:
Girl yes! Mike stanned hard for his faves lol. He was so adorable *gushes*
Now King...lawd have mercy. That boy is BAD! He is very much so a problem child. Gonna have to keep an eye on that one :O Zaria knows something is up but she still hasn't figured it out yet. Let's hope that she does in time. As for Rashad...tsk tsk. He realizes just what he had now that it's gone. Oh well smh.
"I would beat his ass til it glowed."<--lol!!! He deserves a beating though. His bad behind.
Michael is running out of patience. His longing for his family is growing stronger. He did pretty good to by sticking it out this long though.
I'm with you on them being back together again! I think we all miss the Jacksons being united *_* And we defintely don't want Michael to miss out on anything else when it comes to his little 'Sun Princess' especially since she's growing pretty fast.
Anyway, thanks!!! And yaaaas as you getting your life to the King on his birthday lol. Do it up!





Date: Aug 29, 2014 08:46 pm Title: Intuition/Michael, the Stan
here you go again Miss Shy, killing me softly with MJ pics...no complaining tho. Keep it coming but give me some time to calm my beating heart lol
I've enjoyed this little face time interaction Zar and MJ have been having, it's so cute! They are so adorable together. That thing Zaria did by recording Tiahna holding the bottle on her own and then sending it to Michael made me smile hard lol that is something I would do.
Charlie Chaplin was a legend! Loved that speech you included in the chapter.
Rashad, you know I never liked him but I am glad he spent some time with his son and Zaria needs to follow her motherly instinct...if something doesn't feel right, she needs to speak up tho I am wondering why she is feeling that way...King is suspiciously scary tho. *shivers*
And Yess!! Happyy 56th birthday to the king! My love! without him who knows how this world would be...I don't want to find out.
All caught up. Great chapters hun. Enjoyed my reading night!
Love ya! and can't wait for the next update.
xxoo
Author's Response:
The MJ pics are life, right? *gushes*
"I've enjoyed this little face time interaction Zar and MJ have been having, it's so cute! They are so adorable together. That thing Zaria did by recording Tiahna holding the bottle on her own and then sending it to Michael made me smile hard lol that is something I would do."<--
Ya gotta love 'em *_* They're so cute. Of course Zaria couldn't let Michael miss out on a precious moment like that :) Better on video than not at all, right?
That speech that Chaplin gave will always be a fave!
Rashad is working on his relationship with Riq which is good. As for he and Zaria...well that's another story.
"Zaria needs to follow her motherly instinct...if something doesn't feel right, she needs to speak up tho I am wondering why she is feeling that way"<--hmmmm... :)
I don't think I would want to know how any of us or music would be without MJ. Anyway yaaaay at you being all caught up!! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll try to update soon! I love ya! <33





Date: Aug 29, 2014 08:32 pm Title: Fighting Temptation Makes You Stronger/Nessie the Loch Ness Monster
I could see tonight is kill Andrea with the sexy unf MJ gifs...I am slowly dying a pleasurable death! X__X
tsk tsk at Zaria getting jealous about what MJ wrote in "Moonwalk", even if he did write that when he was with Zaria, Diana is his past. She should know she has nothing to worry about. I am so glad she apologized tho.
Oh at the name change...I didn't think you were going to put her real name in the story but I am liking where you are going with this.
By the way, where did the name Zaria come from? It is an interesting name.
xoxo
Author's Response:
lol You! Will! Live!
Zaria was in her feelings for a little bit. We all know how she feels about Diana and she realized that she was being silly so she felt guilty lol. Poor Michael was so lost *sniffs* But they're good now...woot woot.
"Oh at the name change...I didn't think you were going to put her real name in the story but I am liking where you are going with this."<--
And Zaria came from my love of the letter 'Z' lol and also for it's meaning in the Russian language which is 'Sunrise'<--did you see what I did there? tsk tsk. Also in Slavic mythology, Zaria is the goddess of beauty/dawn. It's also Arabic for 'Blossom' or flower and as you can see in SGI, Zaria has blossomed and transformed into someone who's completely different from the way that she was at the beginning of the story. <333





Date: Aug 29, 2014 08:17 pm Title: My Warrior
aww at Zaria feeling like she didn't do well in the interview. I am sure she did well.
I thought it was very sweet of MJ to send Bill to buy pillows, blankets and food for the homeless. Michael had such a great heart.
Those gifs did something to me gurrllll... *__* I watch that short video often, I wish it was longer and that I could hear what he was saying in the bathroom...actually I wish I could see every MJ home video lol
ICE-T was always a bitch. He had one hit album and thought he was the shit. I remember the press giving Ice a hard time because of his lyrics but I took what he said about MJ as a real bitch move. He decided to throw somebody else under the bus so the attention gets switched from him to someone else and who else better than "America's sweetheart"...honestly all he talked about in his songs was about killing cops and the biggest thing that happen in his career is when his bodyguard shot a cop and Ice was never charged with it...and then he goes off and works for Law and Order now...lmaooo...moving on from this irrelevant ass lol
Ohhh I tried picturing MJ masturbating...gosh I would face time him to see that lol...I actually googled that phrase Zaria said in french and when I read the english translation I was like ohh naughty girl *pervert grin* lmaooo
and oh you ruined Aladdin for me!
That is all!
Author's Response:
Zaria was having some serious issues. She'll get better with time and experience.
As for Michael, he was such an angel. Bless his heart.
Girl, I wish I knew what he was saying too! He looked so exhausted though lol. Poor thing.
Don't even get me started on Ice-T and his bum ass. He's a nobody and tried to throw Mike under the bus like you said. Either way, it still didn't make a difference because he still got called out for his bs. What he said about Mike didn't even make sense. He tried it. And it's very irnonic how he's on Law and Order now. He isn't even a good actor so *rolls eyes*
"Ohhh I tried picturing MJ masturbating...gosh I would face time him to see that lol"<--You pervert looool. I'm jk. I would love to see that too though tsk tsk
"I actually googled that phrase Zaria said in french and when I read the english translation I was like ohh naughty girl *pervert grin* lmaooo"<--
tsk tsk...Miss Zaria is a freak.
Aladdin...well lol I think that I've pretty much ruined that for everyone including myself *cries* It's not secret that that's my favorite Disney movie too lol. I'm not even ashamed.





Date: Aug 29, 2014 07:42 pm Title: Daddy's Little Girl
ok, Miss Shy...here is my long awaited review. I'm so mad I missed so many chapters due to this email problems we were having. I'm so glad my notifications are back. I hope they fix yours soon.
So anyway on to the story...I had such a proud moment while reading about Zaria creating the portfolio. I'll admit I was a bit scared at first when she wanted to branch out to modeling but now I know she is doing the right thing...I love how independent she is. She loves Michael but won't depend on him or his money. She is such a good woman.
lol I love how Marlon was teasing Michael. Aww Michael... I find it cute that he is missing Zaria already. I do worry about him though, he gets very lonely fast when he is on his own. But I have to say how proud I am of him for letting go of the reigns a little bit and supporting Zaria on her quest.
I am actually glad you included that little snippet of Joseph. It might seem irrelevant in the story but I thought it was a great touch to include that. I think Joe felt he needed to be tough to make sure his family was well taken care of and that his kids grew up strong. Things were just different back in the day. But of course he does love his children...some men just have problems showing that emotion more than others. Now that he is older, you could tell that it is easier for him to express that love inside of him and that he is more in touch with his sensitive side. I applaud you for writing that and I applaud Zaria for staying in touch with the paternal grandparents so the Tiahna grows up knowing them. Some moms just won't do that.
SMH! Sophia tsk tsk...Michael looked so good in those pics and Sophia knew it. She was all over him lol
I've tasted Lambrusco, it's so good! Now that you/MJ mentioned it...it does taste like grape soda :/
I love Giorgio Armani!!! When I read the part where MJ recommended Zaria to him, I was like "oh no Michael that is a very sweet gesture but it might backfire on you, you need to let Zaria do this on her own." I am glad he mentioned it to her later and that she told him exactly what I was thinking...they both have come a long way since the days when they didn't express their feelings.
Oh at MJ using face time but lmaooooo at Zaria dancing to Prince and scaring Tiahna and lol the Prince and MJ "feud" never gets old.
Great job honey!!!
Author's Response:
Ugh! Hopefully they'll be working again for me too! I'm so upset that it's still not working *sigh*
But awww. I can see how you would've been a little afraid at Zaria breaking her chains and trying to gain her independence/find herself agin. But she's got it totally under control now. It was a process but she made it happen and proved that she doesn't need Michael in order to do it.
Marlon, Marlon...lol he wouldn't be doing his job as the older brother if he didn't take his chance to tease Michael.
"I do worry about him though, he gets very lonely fast when he is on his own. But I have to say how proud I am of him for letting go of the reigns a little bit and supporting Zaria on her quest."<--You're right! But he'll be fine. He's trying his best to let Zaria do her thing although its still a struggle on his end. Poor thing.
As for the thing with Joe, I just had to include that in there. I thought it was a must especially after that conversation that you, Toni and I had and after seeing some things on tumblr with people bashing Joseph. We all know that certain things that he did were wrong but at the end of the day, he made his boys into successful men. And just like you said, some people have a hard time expressing their love and obviously Joseph was one of those types of people and now he's become a somewhat better person and you can see that he clearly loves his family. Point. Blank. Period.
As for Zaria, she's said it time and time again that she doesn't want to cause any problems regarding Michael and his father or his brothers so it was her duty to let her newborn know who her family is as a good mother should.
Sophia was clinging to Michael like a leech! lol. Mike did look good at that party though.
"I've tasted Lambrusco, it's so good! Now that you/MJ mentioned it...it does taste like grape soda :/"<--The truth is...I've never tasted Lambrusco loool *hides in shame*
Giorgio Armani!! Michael tried it. Although his heart was in the right place, Zaria had to turn him down. But you're very right, after all that they have been through, their communication and relationship as a whole has come a mighty long way. They're making progress *claps*
MJ using FaceTime lol he's moving on up in the world tsk tsk. Zaria almost gave that poor child a heart attack! lol. But the "feud" with Prince and Michael will forever be laughable lol. Anyway, thank youuuu Drea! <3
Date: Aug 29, 2014 07:40 pm Title: Intuition/Michael, the Stan
Was this chapter cute or what??? And Zar needs to talk to Rashad about King!! If she feels those motherly instincts she needs to do something. OMG Michael with an Instagram? I'mma faint!
Author's Response:
It was indeed! Zaria's instincts are kicking in strong so we'll see what she does to handle the situation. Michael with an Instagram...tsk tsk. :)
Date: Aug 29, 2014 04:41 pm Title: Intuition/Michael, the Stan
That little BRAT! Fuck that shit. I might like King in real life, but he's a little brat in this story. He got some nerve. LOL at Zaria calling Michael a Stan though.
Author's Response:
He is! That little boy is troubleeeeee. And Zaria was telling it like it is lol. Michael is a die hard stan!
Date: Aug 28, 2014 02:44 pm Title: Fighting Temptation Makes You Stronger/Nessie the Loch Ness Monster
I fucking love this PLEASE PLEASE continue
Author's Response:
Aww thank you honey!!! <3





Date: Aug 26, 2014 06:46 pm Title: Fighting Temptation Makes You Stronger/Nessie the Loch Ness Monster
Yesssss honey yessss!! The DNA meeting went wayyyyy better than the first one ^_^ Zaria was feeling super confident and the way she answered the questions with so much poise and competence. Omfggg I'm ready to be slaaaayed by Noémie *squeals* chileeeee the world isn't ready! Lmaoooo
As for Sheryl's ole tadpole lookin self she best stay in her lane because she knows that Michael is a married man *scoffs* I'm so done at the looks she's giving him -____- Michael knows he attracts the crazies smh he better have his guard up just case Miss Tadpole tries something sneaky, Just Sayin!
The Moonwalk book lawdddd Mike just keeps getting himself in trouble doesn't he? LOL I'm totally on Zaria's side on this situation. Calling Diana his first love was bound to cause an issue between Michael and Zaria. I mean shit, any wife would feel some type of jealousy reading that. Either way I hope they can put this behind them. At the end of the day Mike loves him some Zaria Jackson ;)
Rashad, Rashad, Rashad, hmmmm I wonder what his Can't-Pick-Up-A-Damn-Phone ass is up to ??? Welp I hope Riq is okay or else Zaria is gonna go the fuck off on his behind Lmaoo
Yayyyy I'm offically all caught up ^_^ Can't wait for the next update!
XOXOXO Toni
Author's Response:
It did! Zaria was much more confident of herself this time. Let's hope that her interview went well. Although, it's obvious that it did tsk tsk.
Sheryl...she thinks she's slick. Michael better watch out! Like you said, he always attracts the crazies. Who knows what Sheryl might be up to.
Moonwalk...lawd, Michael dug himself into a hole and didn't even realize it lol. Poor thing. But yes, the whole world pretty much read that so poor Zaria felt like she was in second place for those few moments. But she knows that Michael loves her so she'll be fine. Although her disdain for Diana is still evident lol.
Rashad and his phone situation...tsk tsk. You'll find out about that in the next chapter.
Yaaaaas at you getting caught up!! Woot woot!
I love ya! <3