Date: Dec 19, 2014 10:18 pm Title: Girls Day Out
Lol i would have pulled a Beyoncé on MJ and woulda been like "bitch, I'm GROWN!!", without the bitch part of course lol. I get why he worries and all that jazz but he can't keep placing restrictions on her. She's his fiancé, not his daughter lol. I would've acted the same way if he came at me like that. And LOL at Tati sniffing Zaria's hair! That's that creeper shit... She does need to be wary of Tatiana. Aaliyah has the right to be skeptical cause that's weird. And poor Zar :( all she wants is the D lol. I feel her pain but I'd also have the same mindset as MJ. But she only has 2 more months of pregnancy so I'm sure she can hold out a little longer :)
Author's Response:
MJ has his ways but you'll see how that turns out eventually. As for Tatiana...tsk tsk. Aaliyah knows that something is up. Zaria is going through but she'll be ok.
Date: Dec 19, 2014 09:46 pm Title: Unexpected Guests
I would've kicked Joseph out flat on his ass for that. And if I were Zaria, I wouldn't have cried either. Fuck his approval lol. And the things that he yelled at MJ were completely uncalled for. That's not someone I'd want in my life. And LOL @ the "I bet my dick is bigger than yours" comment! That's a father/son relationship? Seems like a relationship between 2 brothers who detest one another.
Also I agree that Zaria should've told her mother. In fact I don't think its right that either of them kept that important of an announcement from their moms but I guess they were afraid of certain things. And I also agree with Zaria's mom on Zaria's happiness. Her being with Michael is great but she needs to find something for her to do that will make her happy. I mean unless she's content with being a house wife. We shall see what happens. And jermaine is so petty for lying -__-
Author's Response:
Girl bye, you know you would've cried lol I'm kidding. But Joe was out of line and he knows it. He's petty and that's what petty people do smh. And yea, Zaria was afraid to tell her business given the way that she was viewing herself as being a failure and everything but the truth did eventually come out...not that her mother didn't already know because a mother always knows. And unfortunately, Michael has petty family members here so that's no surprised that it was a typical Jermaine move.





Date: Dec 15, 2014 09:04 am Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. V
NEW READER ALERT...... Please update Soon 🙏🙏🙏. You are so remarkable on your work & now I am addicted to the story. I love everything about it.
Author's Response:
A new reader!
lol! Hi!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank youuuu for reading my story! I'm glad that you love it! And thank you for the review! and I will be updating very soon!





Date: Dec 14, 2014 09:12 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. V
THIS CHAPTER THOOOOO. Dude, it took me two hours to read. but it was worth it lmao. The pictures of the home are so beautiful, i think i spent too much time staring at them. I wanna go wah. But this chapter had me giggling a few times like when Michael goes "my heart is pounding" and him playing with the children later asking Zaria for permission. He is the cutest i cant help but gush gahhhh. The childlike side of him is everything and i love how Zaria reflected on that being the thing she loved most about him. I really like Zaria's cousins too, they seem fuuun.
But okay let me just comment on the part im sure you're waiting for my response for......MICHAE. WHAT. THE. HELL. Talkin' about how why would he use his hands when he's got Zaria's mouth to get him off?!? I fucking DIED. Bold Michael...me gusta. And then rubbing all up on Zaria in front of her family....the people he JUST met? I can't with him. I was shaking my head and smirking so bad loool. No but my favorite was when he had to go to the bathroom while they were eating after Zaria's little "payback" and was resisting the urge to masturbate...I CANT. Zaria to the rescue though (not really since she left him hanging loool). she definitely got her point across lol.
DRUNK ZARIA. She is my favorite too. All my faves were in this chapter lmaooo. She's such a mess. She's gonna be hurtin' bad in the morning i can tell ya that much. And I'm glad Michael's not the strict kind who doesnt let his girl go out and get wasted having some fun lol. Caring Michael comes into action and then i just start gushing again. I was hoping he'd see her tattoos in this chapter because i'm dying to see his reaction to them lmfao. I'm torn between him being mad that she didnt tell him and him being curious & just shocked about it....maybe he'll be both. Who knowssss.
Oh my god and how could i forget the freakin' instagram part.......Bye at you using "mjs.nipples"....I cant loool. I hope there are future instagram scenes in the future.
lovedddd this chapter so much! cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
I'm sorrrrrry gosh! But I guess since you enjoyed it then that makes me feel better ^_^ That place is too gorgeous for words. When I go to Paris, I'm defintely making my way to that place. I need to see it up close and personal.
"But this chapter had me giggling a few times like when Michael goes "my heart is pounding" and him playing with the children later asking Zaria for permission. He is the cutest i cant help but gush gahhhh. The childlike side of him is everything and i love how Zaria reflected on that being the thing she loved most about him. I really like Zaria's cousins too, they seem fuuun."<--Michael is that type of guy that makes you want to hug and squeeze him one minute and make love to him the next lol. But that childlike side of his is always gushable (<--if that's even a word lol) Zaria couldn't help herself because she knows what she has. Like she said 'That's her Michael' *_*
"MICHAEL. WHAT. THE. HELL. Talkin' about how why would he use his hands when he's got Zaria's mouth to get him off?!? I fucking DIED."<---
(I added the L on Michael since you forgot it loooool) Michael is a naughty naughty boy *grins* Saw a different side of him, huh? Being horny will make you do things like that looool. Let me stop.
"No but my favorite was when he had to go to the bathroom while they were eating after Zaria's little "payback" and was resisting the urge to masturbate...I CANT. Zaria to the rescue though (not really since she left him hanging loool). she definitely got her point across lol."<--Zaria was like
'Do you still want to play these games?' looool She showed no mercy. But yep, Michael learned his lesson the hard way lol.
"All my faves were in this chapter lmaooo."<--of course lol. Drunk Zariaaaaa, ya gotta love her!
"And I'm glad Michael's not the strict kind who doesnt let his girl go out and get wasted having some fun lol. Caring Michael comes into action and then i just start gushing again."<--riiiiight. Michael may be overprotective but he's learned his lesson from the many of the times that he's tried to control Zaria before. He's changing like he promised he woulddddd. A working progress :)
"I was hoping he'd see her tattoos in this chapter because i'm dying to see his reaction to them lmfao. I'm torn between him being mad that she didnt tell him and him being curious & just shocked about it....maybe he'll be both. Who knowssss."<--hmmmm... XD
"Bye at you using "mjs.nipples"....I cant loool."<--I had to do it looool. But don't worry, there'll be more IG moments in time
Anyway, thank youuuuuuuuuuu :*
Date: Dec 14, 2014 09:04 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. V
Yooooo!!! First things first you the realiest!!!! Yaaaaaasss!! Than you updated on my bdayyyyy 12/14 toooooo?!!! To hype! With this good ass chapter! And it was hype! Long good ass chapter equals a Long all over the place review! Lmaoooo sorry girl
Get your cup and a comfy chair cause we chattin girl. ITS ABOUT TO GO DOWN *in jay z voice*
noooooow where should I begin..? Oooo I know! "Killing me sofly" loved it when Michael and Lauryn hill sung it. Both beautiful
next...Michael was so cute being shy! His clingy cute self ;) His ass was teasin Zaria! How dare he! So he thought he was gunna win huh? No bruh! Then Zaria got his ass back! (I remember u tellin one of us She was gunna get him good)
My mans pre cummed all over his pants *dyiiiiiiiing* Zaria pleased him! He should appreciate that shit lmaooo
(I feel like I'm forgetting what I wanna talk about)
anywayyyy...now the ig name. Was it mjsnipples? Lmaooooo I'm sad to say that wasn't even the nastiest I heard. When I first came to mjfiction, and I had to make a username. I just slapped my nickname and favorite numbers together!^^^ lmaooo u see. And I see all the other readers with song titles and stuff. I'm like damn! I should've thought about that! Then...the nasty ones! Michael would turn hot red all over through his damn clothes if he seen em!
Also how did u do the Instagram thing? With the username the pic and all that. That's soo kooool! U know I'm already fascinated of that photoshop stuff you do anyway lmaooo MAGIC! *in Michael's voice" lmaoo
noooooooooow when she went out with her cousins...
she got a butterfly and a monkey on a crescent? First of all I like butterflies and loooove astrology so u got me with that. And the monkey? Lmaoo the thought is cute! She was tooooo turnt up
"This is my sooooong!" Zaria shouted while standing up from her seat, keeping her glass of champagne in a tight hold as she danced out into the crowd to find her cousins. "Ayeee!" She shouted before laughing as Jackie and Vonnie started dancing along with her.<<<<<< cryin!! I woulda been in my chair actin a fool too! Toooo turnt! 7/11 is a fuuuuuuuuuuun party song. Wild but classy Zaria loooove her!
Noooooooow I wonder how Michael is gunna say when he sees her tattoos lmaooo he's probably gunna be like "woooow"
I still feel like I'm forgetting something!!! But o yea I can't wait until he makes an Instagram! My god if they had Instagram back then.....it would've been the most disturbing comments ever!!!! Lmaoooo holy water for the eyes
Her grandmothers house is very beautiful!!! Soooo pretty! Classic
Guess im done! Thanks for the bday present on the low! ;) this goodchapter! U done it again👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 And girl yes I was too hype lmaooo
Author's Response:
Did I really?! Well alrighty then! lol Happy belated birthday, girlie!! I hope that you enjoyed it! :*
"Long good ass chapter equals a Long all over the place review! Lmaoooo sorry girl"<--you don't have to apologize for that! lol Long reviews are appreciated for long chapters like these especially since it covered a lot lol. It lets me know that you were paying attention tsk tsk
You know what, I can't believe I forgot about the Fugees version of 'Killing Me Softly'! That one is a classic too! Lauryn's voice is so beautiful and the way that they did that song gave off a smooth type of vibe kind of like Janet Jackson's song 'Got 'Til It's Gone', ya know? All three versions of 'Killing Me Sofly' are beautiful although I prefer J5 and the Fugees over Roberta's *hides*
"Michael was so cute being shy! His clingy cute self ;) His ass was teasin Zaria! How dare he! So he thought he was gunna win huh? No bruh! Then Zaria got his ass back! "<--Michael is cute when he wants to be with his playful self lol and he really did try it but Zaria said 'oh you THOUGHT!' lol She said was like
She knew she was wrong for leaving him hanging like that but then again, she didn't care lol. Zaria has no chill whatsoever. He reapt what he sowed lol.
"(I feel like I'm forgetting what I wanna talk about)"<--you're so cute lol! It happens! The chapter was TOO long so that's understandable :*
"anywayyyy...now the ig name. Was it mjsnipples? Lmaooooo I'm sad to say that wasn't even the nastiest I heard."<--chile me either! lol I was going to use some that were worse but since they were actual usernames (well mjs.nipples is too but...) and because I never know who's reading the story it would've been too awkward if someone left a review saying that it was their username on IG, ya know? lol. I would've been so embarrassed. And speaking of embarrassing, you're defintely right about the username thing if Michael would've seen them. Some of these fans have absoutely NO chill! lol I get embarrassed for Michael just by reading some of these usernames on IG, Tumblr, this site, etc. And that's cute how you chose your username. Give In To Me is my favorite song on the Dangerous album and since I happened to be listening to it when I was creating my account, I simply went with my favorite command in the song. Not to mention that that username pretty much sums up the theme of the majority of my stories on here *blushes*
"Also how did u do the Instagram thing? With the username the pic and all that. That's soo kooool! U know I'm already fascinated of that photoshop stuff you do anyway lmaooo MAGIC! *in Michael's voice" lmaoo"<--well, I had to use two different PSD's which are like templates for photoshop. So one PSD was of the Iphone and the other PSD was of Instagram. With PSDs, it allows you to edit things with the texts and colors and stuff so for the Iphone PSD, I simply edited the colors on the background to look exactly the way I see things on my Iphone and then with the IG PSD, I personalized it for Zar and added the comments and stuff of what I thought fans would say if Zaria really had posted that picture on Insta. Pretty cool, right? *_* And thank youuuuu ^_^
"she got a butterfly and a monkey on a crescent? First of all I like butterflies and loooove astrology so u got me with that. And the monkey? Lmaoo the thought is cute! She was tooooo turnt up"<--I absolutely LOVE butterflies! And obviously Zaria does as well lol. You'll defintely be hearing more about the reasoning for her crescent/monkey tattoo soon *_* Her cousins may have thought that she was too turnt when she got it but Mrs. Jackson is no fool *winks*
Zaria knows how to party!! lol but she also knows how to keep it classy while she's doing it! Turnt Zar is my favorite Zar lol. 7/11 is my song though! Honestly, I wasn't really feeling it at first but after Beyoncé released the video to it and after constantly listening to it, I grew to love it. The video helped a lot though.
"Noooooooow I wonder how Michael is gunna say when he sees her tattoos lmaooo he's probably gunna be like "woooow""<--
you will soon find ouuuuut
I can't even imagine the things that would've been said if Michael had an IG account lol we would've needed an unlimited supply of Holy Water loooool. You can't help but to laugh just thinking about it.
"Her grandmothers house is very beautiful!!! Soooo pretty! Classic"<--ikr!! I would love to have stayed there. It's so homey and spacious and vibrant!
And you're so welcome, darling! Happy belated birthday again and thank you!! :*
Date: Dec 14, 2014 06:44 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. V
Mike is going through the struggle!!! Lmao I love it. He needs to kick his own ass for playing this game. Up here about to jag off in Zar's granny bathroom. Smh. Lol. Oh well. He made his bed, he gon lay in it chile. Anyway, this www a cute chapter. I love when they're around their families and stuff. All warm and fuzzy. And it's so cute that her family thinks Mike is just this perfect lil thing. Not knowing he's a troll and a hot mess. Lol. But he is childlike and sweet though. Sweet when he wants to be anyway. Cuz he def ain't innocent. Lol. I can't wait to see what happens next. Mike is gon have blue balls until next year chile. Lol
Author's Response:
That he is lol. Zaria had him so frustrated that his mind was discombobulated. Poor thing didn't know what to do lol. The family chapters are always a fave for me too *_*
"And it's so cute that her family thinks Mike is just this perfect lil thing. Not knowing he's a troll and a hot mess."<--Ikr right lol. Michael = the master of disguise...no pun intended lol
"But he is childlike and sweet though. Sweet when he wants to be anyway. Cuz he def ain't innocent."<---you right! lol. Ole troll
More is on the way though so be on the look out XD
Date: Dec 14, 2014 03:10 am Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. V
Them two are some damn trolls I swear! XD. Michael know he wrong and Zaria too! How the hell he gonna finger her in front of her cousins?! But Zaria got him back though. These games they play though got me rolling! XD
Author's Response:
For real lol. Michael tried to play the victim knowing that he was in the wrong too and then really lost it when his game backfired on him lol. They are a mess.





Date: Nov 24, 2014 08:01 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. IV
I really enjoyed this chapter. Loved the HIStory lesson there. I felt like I was back in school lol...and the visuals are always on point. A chocolate museum....Yummm, *homer simpson's voice* chocolateeeee!!! *drools*
(p.s.) so weird, as I am writing this review, the commercial for the movie Horrible Bosses 2 came on and the rock cover of MJ's smooth criminal came on, scaring me lol, he's always watching chileeee
but anyway, like I was saying, don't leave me inside a place filled with chocolate. I'll gain about 150 pounds in a day. I looovveeee chocolate. I have such a sweet tooth lol and that place looked delicious.
I loved how Michael was in the museum, it reminded me (i forget where I read it, i think it was in the bodyguards book tho I think I heard it elsewhere) how MJ when he took his kids to the museum, he would be so educational with them, reading every sign, etc and Prince would pay attention but Paris and Blanket were not interested lol I could totally see him being "Mr. Know it all'
ok, I'm all caught up. Can't wait to read some more. You know I love me some SGI.
Love youuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!
Drea
Author's Response:
Awww thank youuuuuu. I figured it was about that time for another History lesson tsk tsk. We can never have too many of those. Looking at that Homer pic just made me crave chocolate even more than I already was -__-
"(p.s.) so weird, as I am writing this review, the commercial for the movie Horrible Bosses 2 came on and the rock cover of MJ's smooth criminal came on, scaring me lol, he's always watching chileeee"<--yes he is lol Mike be knowin' :O
Girl you and I both have that weakness for chocoate. I swear there were days at school where all I ate was chocoloate. Of course I ended up with a stomachache but I regretted nothing lol.
"I loved how Michael was in the museum, it reminded me (i forget where I read it, i think it was in the bodyguards book tho I think I heard it elsewhere) how MJ when he took his kids to the museum, he would be so educational with them, reading every sign, etc and Prince would pay attention but Paris and Blanket were not interested lol I could totally see him being "Mr. Know it all'"<--yes! Like with watching him on the videos when he went to places like that, he always seemed so knowledgeable and so interested in what was going on. But then again that was also because the man was always reading and learning. He was such a nerd lol but a cute nerd *_* and I think what you're talking about is from Bill and Javon's book about Michael in his final days. I'm pretty sure that I remember reading about that in there. Mike really was an intelligent man *sigh* I want a man like him lol
And yaaaaay, you're all caught up! Glad you enjoyed the chaptersssss. I love ya more :*





Date: Nov 19, 2014 01:55 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. III
Michael is a troll..forget what I said in the last chapter lol I feel bad for Zaria lol
ok, who is Diablo in real life? That hair tho XD envy the curls lol
I've never seen that Les Twins video. I like it. I am learning so much from them because of you. You made me a fan.
Jay Z's voice: Onto the next one...
Author's Response:
He is and ohhh Zaria has her ways lol. Vengeance is hers.
Diablo was a part of Criminalz Crew and La Clique with the twins but he still dances with the Criminalz group although I wouldn't really say that the twins are still a major part of the group since they're mainly almost always doing their on thing or are with Beyoncé and Jay-Z. But they still rep Criminalz Crew though so yea. I would say Diablo is like one of their close dancing brothers. I mean, they've been in Criminalz Crew since they all were teens so yea, they're like distant brothers imo.
"I've never seen that Les Twins video. I like it. I am learning so much from them because of you. You made me a fan."<--





Date: Nov 19, 2014 01:33 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. II
omg, I am such a bad SGI fan...it's taking me so long to read these new chapters. I am sorry but I am here now...I couldn't help to feel bad for Michael lol every time he started something, somehow they got interrupted or the conversation switched to something else. It's tough being him XD
and Noemie is so beautiful!! gosh, so jealous and she looks so young...i need to know what she is drinking to look like that so I can take it lol
and this part:
""Would you stop callin' that filthy thing that?" Michael whined. "You're ruinin' Aladdin for me.""
lmfaoooo THAT RIGHT THERE HAS RUINED ALADDIN FOR ME!! THANKS A LOT, SHY!
Author's Response:
That's okaaaaay. You're here so that's all that matter *hugs*
Michael couldn't catch a break. Poor thing lol.
"and Noemie is so beautiful!! gosh, so jealous and she looks so young...i need to know what she is drinking to look like that so I can take it lol"<--Ikr! I swear she's drinking from the fountain of youth.
"""Would you stop callin' that filthy thing that?" Michael whined. "You're ruinin' Aladdin for me.""
lmfaoooo THAT RIGHT THERE HAS RUINED ALADDIN FOR ME!! THANKS A LOT, SHY!"<--
I'm not even sorry looool
Date: Nov 16, 2014 07:36 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. IV
aww that was cute continue
Author's Response:
Thank you, honey! I will soon :)
Date: Nov 16, 2014 12:54 pm Title: Deception
Look at me havin another throwback lmaooo but omg!!! So the card bet with Michael and George actually happened and he ran off crying?!!! *sucks teeth* POOR BABY!!!!! Omggg!! Ugh Gamblers can be something else. If he said he didn't wanna do it...then he didn't wanna do it! He really tricked him -__- >:(( I'm mad! Lol! Did it happen that day with him wearing the red and black suit too??
Author's Response:
Aww lol. And yea, that bet actually happened. George had tricked Michael into betting on the horse and when Michael found out, he took off because he felt guilty. Poor thing. That was really grimy of George to do that though when he knew that Michael was clearly oblivious to what he was doing. He completely took advantage of Michael and should've been ashamed smh. But then again, gamblers don't care. They're only in it for the money. And I'm not sure if it happened on that particular day but I've always assumed that it did being that I believe Michael only visited the track with Liz once or twice maybe? Don't quote me on that though. I do know that they were act the track on those pictures though but that's pretty obvious lol. But since George was there with them I'm gonna just go with my gut and say that it happened on the same day.
Date: Nov 14, 2014 10:44 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. IV
I've had a lil throwback readin this story all yesterday and today Lmaooo I think I was on chapter 50-sumthin but giiiiiirrrl lookin at those old photoshop and spam pics and the new one you put up...if there was a award on mjfiction for doing that..most definitely I would vote for you! You are so good at that!! Like it looks like Zaria was really with Michael. And I hope you never second guess yourself about this story because you really deserve all these reviews,readings, and that ribbon too lol!!
but back to the story...lol. Zaria was like "now I know why your nieces and nephews call you uncle doo doo....because you're full of shit" BAM! I loved it Lmaooo
And girl yes I know I'm not the only one that knew michael had a little nerd in him. Not saying it's anything wrong with that. but cmon now we Already know he was a very intelligent man, very smart lol ready to learn type of person. In the words of my mother "that was a brilliant man!" The cutest nerd eveeerrrr
Haha it's michael fault that Zaria is being that way with withdrawing sex! It's his fault! Lmaoo more power to her! He can use his damn hand! I'm surprise he ain't masturbate in front of her..shoot we all know they freaks anyway lmao
And I also agree with Zaria, telling Mike he can't Be the fun guy all the time he has to put his foot down too!!! Riq is my baby but one day..hehe..he might talk back to him.
Author's Response:
Awww did you? *blushes* You're so sweet. I'm so glad to know that you're enjoying my story as much as I do writing it. I'll have to admit that the beginning chapters are quite embarrassing though being that I was a beginner to the whole fan fiction writing thing lol. I was so bad at it. I'm surprised that the story got as much as attention that it had so I'm very grateful for that and the people, like you, who took the time to give my story a chance. Thank you so much! SGI is my baby *gushes*
"lookin at those old photoshop and spam pics and the new one you put up...if there was a award on mjfiction for doing that..most definitely I would vote for you! You are so good at that!!"<--
^^^ thank you!! It took a lot of practice and patience teaching myself how to do it so I guess that hard work paid off, aye? You're too sweet though. You got me over here blushing lol. It's funny that you said I shouldn't second guess myself because when I first started doing it, I was so bad at it lol but I kept trying until I got it right. I blame the perfectionism in me. But thank you again! :*
"Zaria was like "now I know why your nieces and nephews call you uncle doo doo....because you're full of shit" BAM! I loved it Lmaooo"<--lol she told it like it is! Michael knew that it was true tsk tsk
"I know I'm not the only one that knew michael had a little nerd in him. Not saying it's anything wrong with that. but cmon now we Already know he was a very intelligent man, very smart lol ready to learn type of person. In the words of my mother "that was a brilliant man!" The cutest nerd eveeerrrr"<--right! He's so adorable. Intelligent men are highly attractive *winks*
"Haha it's michael fault that Zaria is being that way with withdrawing sex! It's his fault! Lmaoo more power to her!"<--He failed at his own game lol. Zaria was like 'you thought that you won the battle but it hasn't even started yet' lol.
"He can use his damn hand! I'm surprise he ain't masturbate in front of her..shoot we all know they freaks anyway lmao"<---
tsk tssssssk. I can't say anything for story purposessssss.
And yes, it's about that time for Michael to learn that he can't always be so fun or no one will be able to take him seriously which could result in some very bad and frustrating things for him. But we'll see how that goes. Thanks so much for this review though! It had me smiling the whole time but then again...all of my reviews do lol. This is a special review though so bless your heart, darling <3
Date: Nov 14, 2014 10:40 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. IV
I love these little history lessons in these chapters. Like Zaria said, I haven't heard this stuff since elementary which was eons ago. Lol. More importantly tho, Yassssss at her taking control of this petty ass game her husband started! I'm so glad the tables have turned. His petty appleheaded ass has been on my last nerve and still on it chile. So I am happy she's sticking it to his ass now. That's what the hell he gets. Smdh at him thinking when he wants sex, it's supposed to just happen. Nah bruh! Fuck yo hormones! Lol. He shall DEAL! I hope his ass goes through the struggle too. Teach his ass a lesson that games are not to be played when it's time to get down. And he's not the only one who controls when the magic happens. I'm also glad Zar is giving him some pointers on the parenting tip. Michael is too damn.. Fun. Lol. He has to learn to be firm and mean it. When Riq shows bim that rebellious side, he's gonna see what Zaria was talking about. Anyway, I am thoroughly looking forward to Michael's struggle with horniness. I do not feel sorry for him. He started this shit and Zaria is going to finish it. Yasssss. Seethe!
Author's Response:
"I love these little history lessons in these chapters."<--
^^^ thank youuuuu. We all knew that Mike was a little History nerd and so am I so I like to take things back from time to time :) To be honest, I had to refresh my memomy a little when it came to Cortés though lol but it's all good. I learned something new with the history of chocolate too though! Amazing how it all tied together back to the Mayas, Toltecs, etc., right?
As for Zaria, she warned Michael that he didn't have as much control as he thought he did tsk tsk. He didn't want to listen so he's learning the hard way smh.
"Smdh at him thinking when he wants sex, it's supposed to just happen. Nah bruh! Fuck yo hormones! Lol."<--I know right? lol he tried it. He had to have forgotten that Zaria doesn't play that. She's not his puppet tsk tsk.
"I'm also glad Zar is giving him some pointers on the parenting tip. Michael is too damn.. Fun. Lol. He has to learn to be firm and mean it."<--Poor Michael lol. He has a lot to learn but Zaria is slowly guiding him through. He'll catch on someday. Hopefully sooner than later.
I'm cackling at your bliss of Michael's struggle though lol you ain't right!





Date: Nov 14, 2014 10:27 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. IV
i really love the pictures! the visuals make the story pop. and michael is getting a taste of his own medicine lol what he deserves! you go zaria
Author's Response:
"i really love the pictures! the visuals make the story pop."<---
^^^ thank you darling. I try my best <3
And Michael is definitely becoming a victim of his own game. He regrets it now lol