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Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2015 02:34 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VII

O yea and I forgot to talk about the photoshop gif..YAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSS!! U know I love your work! Lol and when are we gunna get a Michael Instagram? Lol He gunna get like a billion likes and followers



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Thank youuuuu and in due timing XD You already know that Michael is gonna be introduced to the crazies even more once he finally gets one :O

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2015 02:01 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VII

Happy ney years to you as well! 

..in the beginning it was sooooo freakin cute! The surprise he had for Zaria!! So cuuuuute he's so sweet. Mhm he can be so shy! But once he on stage...comfortable...like he was close to having sex with her lmaoooo

hold on..his speeches though...he's so shy and bashful his speeches...just one sentence lmaoo but it's all good!

lady in my life..live....orrrr I WISH IT WAS LIVE!!! That and "baby be mine" omgggg I wish it was a thriller tour..I mean I still wouldn't be born yet to fully experience but the feelings looking it up on YouTube though..the love!! 

Michaels dimple is perfect!!! Girl please put a gif of him and his dimple..when he smiles it's like...how can u be mad at him..a stress reliever lmao

soooooooo they finally did the nasty lmaoooo yoooo so was the dedication to Zaria apart of getting some and doing something really special? They're both full of surprises

i want my thriller tour now Lmaoo..I mean I love his brothers dearly but cmon now..take a moment and think about a thriller tour...my cheeks are burning from smiling. Over here lookin like a Cheshire Cat lmaoo

HOL' UP HOL' UP!!! When Zaria had Michael masturbate in front of her...remember I told you a way back he might do that...hey! *wink wink*

she said she wanna sing on the MIKE..YAAAAAASSS!!!! See being how I am I would've really sung a song on it! (Lord help me) 😩😩😩 it'll be karaoke night messin wit me! On it like "SO I CREEP YEAAAAHHH! Surfboard! Surfboard! Rollin! Rollin in the riverrr!" Open mike night in that bedroom...girl I must be on one tonight!😩

^^u see that. That means my crazy ass need to take a nap. Talk to you later girl  

ZZZZZzzzzzzz



Author's Response:

Thank you, girlie :) 

Michael knew exactly what he was doing. The stage is his home so that gave him the perfect opportunity to be himself and come out of his shell to publicly express his love and admiration for his wife without feeling bashful in the process. Zaria is one lucky woman, I'll tell ya.

His speeches always made me smile and sometimes laugh because he was so bashful but then the older he got, the more bolder and longer his speeches became. He's so adorable.

'The Lady in My Life'...I swear if he ever performed that song live...all of my life would've been given ESPECIALLY during the ad libs. That man, that man. I just cannot deal with him.

His dimples are my weakness lol. And that smile...priceless *_*

"soooooooo they finally did the nasty lmaoooo yoooo so was the dedication to Zaria apart of getting some and doing something really special? They're both full of surprises"<--Ehhhh...I guess you could say the dedication was for him to get some but he had already been planning on doing it for months (if you remember how he had Zaria pose for the camera at the one rehearsal prior to the second leg of the tour starting). So he had been working on that for a while. Zaria giving it up was just icing on the cake lol

And I wish that he would've done a separate tour for Thriller too but everything happened for a reason and I feel like he probably wasn't quite ready to be on his own yet. I mean, with his potential and dedication, he could've done it with the number of songs that he had but I think it was best for him to go solo during BAD because he had more time on his hands. I feel like there was too much going on for him to be doing a full world tour like that in his early twenties especially since Thriller was receiving as much attention as it was. The Michael Mania was too real so poor MJ would've been stressed out. Although I do have to admit that it would've been great to see it. But like I said, everything happens for a reason and has its time and purpose and that wasn't the right timing for him.

"HOL' UP HOL' UP!!! When Zaria had Michael masturbate in front of her...remember I told you a way back he might do that...hey! *wink wink*"<--I remember tsk tsk. And Zaria had seen him do it before earlier in the story and since they had recently done it when she was away and they were having their little FaceTime session when she first introduced him to her Prince Ali *snickers*, she couldn't help herself by wanting to see him do it again in the flesh *grins*

"she said she wanna sing on the MIKE..YAAAAAASSS!!!! See being how I am I would've really sung a song on it! (Lord help me) 😩😩😩 it'll be karaoke night messin wit me! On it like "SO I CREEP YEAAAAHHH! Surfboard! Surfboard! Rollin! Rollin in the riverrr!" Open mike night in that bedroom...girl I must be on one tonight!"<--lol you are a mess! I don't blame you though. Michael makes you want to do that all of that and more.

Anyway, thanks for the review! And I hope that you got a good nap! ^_^ 

Reviewer: the-dreams-i-would-dare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2015 09:43 am Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VII

Lord Jesus....Loooord Jesus. Lemme just start with the special performance. Michael is the ultimate man, I swear. The fact he sang that song to her for the first time ever in front of everyoneee...I gush. The visuals were amazing too, I could definitely see what you were envisioning when you made them so good job. Zaria is one lucky woman I'm tell in' ya. And when he called her to the stage gahhh. She went from romantic straight to horny though in a matter of seconds talking about how she'd fuck him right there if people weren't there lmao I feel her though. Now as for their little quality magic-making time together....Lord. Bye at Michael evacuating the whole place and sending the children off lmao smart thinking. Don't want little Riq hearing his mommy being punished 🙈 imagine if he walked in on that lmaoooo scarred for all eternity. Michael showed no damn mercy yes God! And they even were tryin' out some new positions, huh? 😏 I laughed at Zaria admitting she was scared lol poor thing. But ughhhh this whole chapter was so great, it had my two favorite things: gushy romance and well...you knowwww lmaooo can't wait for more!! 



Author's Response:

Michael gets all of the awards for that one. Making his mark and proclaiming his love for his wife for the world to see in the city of love and it being Zaria's favorite city at that?! HUSBAND OF THE MILLENNIUM! Zaria and the kids' trophy to him for the best father/husband of the year was surely not in vain.

"The visuals were amazing too, I could definitely see what you were envisioning when you made them so good job."<--good because I was struggling trying to explain it the way that I saw it in my head. I was worried so bad about it not making any sense *sighs of relief*

Now Zaria...poor thing was struggling trying to contain herself. Knowing her, you would know that she would've done exactly what she said if no one was around. That daredevil she is tsk tsk.

The magic making...

Michael knows his Sunshine well so he knows what was coming once they got back to the hotel. Not to mention that he's fully aware that Zar is a screamer so it was mandatory for him to have that place evacuated at all costs lol

"Don't want little Riq hearing his mommy being punished 🙈 imagine if he walked in on that lmaoooo scarred for all eternity."<--I don't even want to think about the expression on poor little Riq's face if he walked in on that lol. He'd be so terrified.

And Michael and his punishment...he gave her exactly what she asked for/told him to do tsk tsk. She had no choice but to deal...even with his little experiments on the new positions lol. Lil nastiessssss. And of course you enjoyed this chapter you perv smh.  

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2015 07:45 am Title: The Special Date

Awww cute 



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Thanks! :)

Reviewer: MissMichelleJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2015 06:04 am Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VII

I am following this story for a pretty long time and I have to admit it's amazing! But this chapter.....my god. Yep you made it. I would give anything to be Zaria. He is so romantic at the beginning but then he becomes a sex god. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Awww 

Thank you so much! Honestly, I was so jealous of Zaria while writing it lol. She's so blessed to have a man like Mike no matter how badly he may get on her nerves sometimes. And he really did turn from a charmer to a sex god, didn't he? lol. Thanks again! :*

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2015 05:15 am Title: Get It Together

I've finally decided to try this story out! Judging by the amount of reviews I'm guessing It's pretty good :)



Author's Response:

A new reader!!!! 

Hiiii darling! Thank you for reading my story and I hope that you enjoy it even though the beginning is a little rough *hides in shame*

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2015 01:22 am Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VII

Aww Michael was so sweet! I loved that he performed The Lady In My Life for her. And he got some well deserved poonany for it. Lol. Loved it!



Author's Response:

I know right! He's such a charmer but his charming wasn't in vain lol. Zaria had no choice but to give it up after that XD

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2014 11:47 pm Title: Off to Hawaii

They are so lovey-dovey *gags*. Lmfao I'm jk they're cute :). First thing tho: why even bring Tati on the trip? I'm not asking because she's crazy (which she is), I'm asking because I'd hate to be a third wheel. I mean you got Mike and Zar acting like its Valentine's Day every 5 minutes and the poor thing has to watch them and be around them lol. Also, I wonder what Tati has up her sleeve... She's an odd one lmfao. And Zar's right, they need to communicate more. Can't keep hiding stuff from someone who's gonna be your wife lol. And Jimmy and riq's lil quick friendship is cute.

anyway, the area they're vacationing in is beautiful but...I feel like something's gonna happen... Cause of Tati lol. Who knows. And I still think Aaliyah should've come



Author's Response:

They ain't all that lovey dovey. Trust me. And you'll find out more of what happens the more you read. Zaria knows what she's talking about as far as the communication thing but its up to Michael to actually follow through. It can't be a one-way street. Enrique is a friendly kid so things between him and Jimmy were bound to be positive. Zaria taught her son right. And how are you gonna say the thing about Tati being a third wheel but then turn around and say that Leah should've gone smh? Leah would've been a third wheel too! Make up your mind, child lol.

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2014 09:34 pm Title: Plans, Plans and More Plans

Ooo a baby shower :) and lol I'm with Zaria on that one...I mean I get why MJ doesn't wanna do it but that would play with my emotions sooooo much. I'd be just as frustrated as she is rn. And lol at Aaliyah not wanting to go because Tati's going. But Tati is acting weird though. Still, I'd prolly go on vacation anyway



Author's Response:

I don't remember everything happened in this chapter so idk what to say but Aaliyah just knows that something isn't right with Tatiana. And yea, Aaliyah couldn't have gone if she wanted to at such a short notice anyway because she had to work so it wasn't meant to be.

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2014 09:12 pm Title: Deception

Lmfao MJ is such a huge baby. But I'm glad Zaria taught him a little lesson. I'm also glad that she got to meet Elizabeth. They seem like they'll get along fine. And I'll be looking forward to read more flashbacks :)



Author's Response:

Poor Mike smh and yea Zaria and Elizabeth are pretty cool together. Don't worry though, there are a lot of flashbacks that I think you'll enjoy. :)

Reviewer: Crystalstarr85 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 27, 2014 06:00 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. V

You are so awesome !!! Thank you for this long chapter I needed this tonight ! :))) I love :: SHE GOT IT:: so very much !



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter because I dreaded the length *cries* But thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2014 02:50 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VI

I will always love those pictures of Michael peaking out at the fans!! Soooo adorable

michael singing in French is just..just. So beautiful. Tear jerker definitely 

giiiiiiiirl u was wrong! U wanna know why? cause there was no damn caution sign warning about the cuteness of this chapter!!!! Enrique's and Zaria's speeches thooooough! I can't! And I can't forget little Tiahna 's lil speech eitherrrr. Sooo cute!!! Michael thought he was gettin some Lmaooo! The games are still on bruh!

Lmaoo and yes it's crazy Nene that left that long ass review in the last chapter Lmaooo

And PS: "What did you think I was doing?" Zaria snickered. Michael's face reddened. "The number two."

^^^i was dyiiiiiiiing! No she wasn't doing that Michael and o yeah.. HAPPY 3rd BIRTHDAY SHE GOT IT!! Oooooh it's getting soo big! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎊🎊🎊🎊🎊
and HAPPY HOLIDAYS GIRRRRRRRL <333333

 

 



Author's Response:

They are adorable, right? I love him and his childish self lol. 

"michael singing in French is just..just. So beautiful."<--ohhhh yes. He knew how to make his voice so angelic. Ughhhh.

"giiiiiiiirl u was wrong! U wanna know why? cause there was no damn caution sign warning about the cuteness of this chapter!!!!"<--

I'm sorrryyyyy lol. I had to do it though. Michael deserved it especially since he had been working so hard. Poor thing works so hard to the point that he doesn't even think about his feelings sometimes. He just keeps going but Zaria had to open his eyes for a bit to show him that he is somebody and he deserved to be recognized for who he is. :) Bless her heart.

And you are a very memorable reviewer, Nene lol. You're so cute <3

Mike is goofy for thinking that Zaria was doing that though lol. And SGI is my precious babyyyyy. It's getting so old lol. Thank you and I hope that your holiday was a wondaerful one too! And I hope that you have a very Happy New Year.

Reviewer: the-dreams-i-would-dare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2014 10:41 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VI

I GUSHHHHH. Why must they be so cute? I totally forgot about Michael having a first Father's Day so this was a complete lovely surpriseeee. Riq and Michael's relationship is so cute. His little speech...I can't. I wanna smother him with kisses. And Michael too trololol. I was tearin' up at Zaria's speech though and I could just see Michael getting all choked up too lol so cute. That was such a good idea for her to do because of the Grammys, he really needed that. 

I can't wait for this special little IJCSLY performance!!! I need to see visuals of this video too they're putting together. Sounds adorable as hell. Zaria is gonna be so surprised lord Jesus. He's literally the perfect husband, I have no words.

Their intimate time together...oh my godddd. I was gushing again (no surprise there). Zaria's torturing poor Michael with all of this waiting lmaooo. It'll be worth it for the both of them when that time comes though. I feel like any other guy would be like "no I wanna have sex NOW" after getting all those surprises that Zaria gave him and chilling in a bath but Michael is the perfect gentleman...hes so special ugh. 

Oh and Michael's reaction to Zaria's tattoos was perfect. I'm glad he wasn't the least bit angry or upset. And the meaning behind the monkey and crescent moon one is so well thought out. Good job, wifeeee! 

Anyway, I loved this chapter of course. I love them all loool Can't wait for the next update!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY SGI!!!



Author's Response:

Michael wasn't ready *_* I'm so done with you and your want to smother Enrique with kisses lol. Riq is pretty adorable though, aye?

"I was tearin' up at Zaria's speech though and I could just see Michael getting all choked up too lol so cute."<-oh lord smh. You would but that's a good thing though. Means I'm explaining it right *_* Michael did need that pic me up though. I still get upset thinking about that show. Poor thing was so hurt *sniffs*

"I can't wait for this special little IJCSLY performance!!! I need to see visuals of this video too they're putting together"<--I can't wait for y'all to see it too but it won't be looooong before you do.

"Zaria's torturing poor Michael with all of this waiting lmaooo. It'll be worth it for the both of them when that time comes though. I feel like any other guy would be like "no I wanna have sex NOW" after getting all those surprises that Zaria gave him and chilling in a bath but Michael is the perfect gentleman...hes so special ugh."<--I agree to all of this. Zaria knows what she's doing lol troll. But, Michael, being that perfect gentleman that he is, fought with his desires even if he is struggling. I want me a Michael *cries*

"Oh and Michael's reaction to Zaria's tattoos was perfect. I'm glad he wasn't the least bit angry or upset. And the meaning behind the monkey and crescent moon one is so well thought out. Good job, wifeeee!"<--Michael may have his ways but I think he's grown to know that he can't order Zaria around on what to do with her body by now lol. And the meaning of the tattoo...it fitted perfectly didn't it?! *dusts shoulders*

SGI is getting old lol. Who'd thought it would make it this far smh. I'm glad that you enjoyed the update though and I'll be updating sooooon.

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2014 10:14 pm Title: Toi et Nul Autre (You and No Other) pt. VI

Aww what a cute chapter! Zaria was on point, I wouldn't want my child where I couldn't get access of him across the country either.



Author's Response:

Thank youuuu and she was. No woman wants to allow her child to be around people that she doesn't know. Rashad should've known better smh.

Reviewer: Lenetta16 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2014 10:52 pm Title: Just Call Me Superwoman

Good chapter. I think it's cool they're finding out about each other's ancestry but... -__- "so that's why you're so beautiful" <- he implying that she's beautiful cause she's mixed??? Or did I read that wrong lol. I hope I did. But anywaaaaay, you can definitely spot the Native American in MJ's facial structure. It's STRONG as fuck lol. And lord, G is something else lol. He really does curse like a sailor. And I know for a fact that Mike is gonna be super dad lol. He'll be around that baby at. All. Times. Lmfao. But he'll make a great zaddy ^_^ and yeah Zaria is a lil cray lmfao. Quick to anger and everything. She goes from 0 to 100 a lot looooool



Author's Response:

You didn't read it wrong. He said it but Zaria corrected him. And yea, that jawline of Mike's tells no lies. Gianni has no filters and clearly doesn't care about how anybody else feels about it.

"And I know for a fact that Mike is gonna be super dad lol. He'll be around that baby at. All. Times. Lmfao. But he'll make a great zaddy ^_^"<-- :)

Zaria is in the last trimester in her preganancy so at this point, anything pisses her off. She just wants to drop that load.

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