[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2015 01:41 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
Thank you so much for this! It was a much needed chapter for me :) thank you thank you ! It was awesome as usual!
Author's Response:
You're so very welcome, love!!! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thanks for the reveiw :*
Date: Apr 26, 2015 12:12 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
Seems like Zaria had a good birthday. It was nice, intimate and normal. I like that. Even though her husband is a Titan, they celebrated like regular people. That's so much more special, IMO. Very sweet. And yassssssss I see Mike is back wrapping that thang up in condoms. I'm surprised he didn't complain about it. I guess he's tryna make sure Zar don't get back on birth control. Good to see him keeping his end of the bargain, although I know he misses that good raw sex. Lmao. Anyway, the most shocking thing about this chapter for me was Joseph. Look at this fool tryna be a grandparent. Hopefully he will be a better grandfather than he was father cuz chile.. Mm hmm. Anyway, I'm hoping Zar will go into her meeting with Terrell's crazy ass refreshed, confident and in charge. Good chapter girl!
Author's Response:
A very much needed normal day indeed.
"Even though her husband is a Titan, they celebrated like regular people. That's so much more special, IMO. Very sweet."<--I agree.
"And yassssssss I see Mike is back wrapping that thang up in condoms. I'm surprised he didn't complain about it."<--lol It was her birthday so he kept his mouth shut to please her. And Zaria was never on birth control (she mentioned before in one of the beginning chapters...not sure if you remember but she onlny used condoms when she was with Rashad...she never used any other birth control methods with him or with Michael) which is why she felt that her risk of getting pregnant was so great and why she was so pressed on getting Michael to agree to the condoms usage. But he seems to be trying now so kudos to him. Hopefully he'll keep up with he end of the deal or they may have some troubles in paradise again :O
"Lmao. Anyway, the most shocking thing about this chapter for me was Joseph."<--Oh yes. I'm glad you caught that. Joseph is still trying to ease his way into the picture but Michael's walls are still high. Maybe they'll eventually come down more with Zaria's help. Maybe they won't. :O
"Anyway, I'm hoping Zar will go into her meeting with Terrell's crazy ass refreshed, confident and in charge."<--Let's hope so!
And thank you girl! I really wanted to give you guys more. I got a little "update happy" and left some things out. :/ But I'm glad you enjoyed it <3
Date: Apr 25, 2015 10:43 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
Ahh my Zar did great at her first photoshoot! And Joyeux Anniversaire to her! So I'm guessing tomorrow's the meditation thing. I'm nervous and curious to see how it'll go. I don't trust Terrell for the life of me. But I'll see. And their lovemaking was beautiful as usual. The question is, will Terrell cause trouble? Hmm.
Author's Response:
She did! A very happy birthday to her indeed!
"So I'm guessing tomorrow's the meditation thing. I'm nervous and curious to see how it'll go."<--Yep yep. Let's keep our fingers crossed that everything goes well.
Of course Michael made sure that his Queen was well taken care of for her birthday and the events ahead. Gotta keep her relaxed by any means necessary.
"The question is, will Terrell cause trouble? Hmm."<--hmmmm...
You shall seeeeee XD
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2015 03:43 pm Title: My Rock pt. II
One of my favorite stories! I'm definitely one of your die hard fans!!! Been keeping up with this story for a very long time now! I just had knee surgery and therefore I am stuck in bed for 12 weeks. :((( I've been checking this story daily . I can't wait for more chapters! Thank you so much for this!
Author's Response:
Awwww thank you so much!!! And ;/ I'm so sorry to hear about your knee surgery. I hope that everything went well and I hope that you get well soon :* <333
Date: Apr 21, 2015 08:13 pm Title: My Rock pt. II
So I finally caught up!!
Have to say you had me hooked from the beginning and I couldn't put it down..had to force myself to in order to work on my own stuff..even with the drama and stuff that happens (which by the way both Michael and Zaria get on my nerves and need to grow up during those times so I don't really find myself picking sides)..but there are times I do end up picking sides like the time Michael was telling her what to eat?? I would be pissed too (although I am one who enjoys what we call nowadays "rabbit food") it wasn't like she was eating junk food all day every day..or smoking or something..he wouldn't like it if she was to get on his case for eating KFC when his diet was supposed to be strict during that time..then again both could be overbearing and stubborn idiots..and don't get me started on the double standards both of them show..and fiasco with Tatiana was just low..don't know much about her but I would like to believe she isn't that bad in real life..
And Enrique is the same age as me, roughly..I was born the same year he was though a few months later..I love that..also loved how you made a mention of Power Rangers..that's one of my favorite shows..
hope you update soon!!
Author's Response:
First of all I want to say thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it! I love seeing new readers and I'm so glad to know that you enjoy my story as much as I do writing it (even though I'm very embarrassed about the beginning chapters *hides*)
I can definitely see where you're coming from as far as picking sides between the two and the double standards because Michael and Zaria have had a LOT of ups and downs and even though they've made progress, they still tend to be petty (and like you said, idiotic) toward each other every once in a while smh. They're learning and growing but that's all a part of a loving relationship especially since they kind of rushed into things pretty quickly. If everything was perfect, they'd be boring, right?
As for Tatiana, I don't think she would've done anything like that in real life. She may be a little hooked when it comes to Michael but I don't believe that she would've stooped that low to get what she wanted. That's just down right crazy lol. But then again, I don't know her like that so who knows...she just may have been a little undercover shedevil :O
"And Enrique is the same age as me, roughly..I was born the same year he was though a few months later. I love that..also loved how you made a mention of Power Rangers..that's one of my favorite shows"
^^^ Really? Well that's interesting. I try to make my stories as realistic as possible so it's good to know that you can relate in some type of way! It makes me feel like I'm doing something right. :)
But again, thank you so much for reading! I've been in the writing process for a little minute which means a possible update should be coming soon so be on the lookout!
Date: Mar 22, 2015 06:53 am Title: My Rock pt. II
wowzers that was something. continue
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll try to soon :)
Date: Mar 16, 2015 09:58 am Title: My Rock pt. II
Heyyyyy girl!!!
Well I'm glad they both went to therapy. Zaria's dream scared me as well! They need to do everything that woman said. She needs to stop drinking to down her pain also!
Rashad can kiss my ass! He is havin dreams about Michael lmaooo irky ass!
baby girl is crawling :,)))) *sigh*
and please if you get the chance check out my new story ;)
Didn't review long...on my dumb old iPod :/
Author's Response:
Hiiiii girlie!
The therapy was a life saver, wasn't it? Zaria's dream was all but pleasant but it's good that she decided to go to thearpy to get some more help. And she does need to cool it with the drinking. Thankfully, Michael is there to monitor and help her when she's tempted so hopefully everything will be fine.
Rashad is an ass lol. Always has been one and always will be.
Tiahna is crawlinggggg. The little Munchkin is growing up fast.
And sure :) I'll check it out when I get some free time and that's ok honey. I appreciate the review <3
Date: Mar 15, 2015 10:05 am Title: My Rock pt. II
Lawd Rashad big light bulb head havin ass is such a BAN. If he accidentally died, I would not be sad at all. Ugh. Idk why he keeps Michael's name in his mouth because as Zar said, there's NO competition, he been lost. Tired ass. Smh. Anyway, I'm glad Michael got her stubborn ass to go to therapy and I'm even more glad that he went with her. They both got what they needed to hear. I can understand that Michael only wants to help and smother her in love and support, but at the same time I can understand that Zar needs her space and time to gather her thoughts and feelings as well. I hope they will stay consistent with the therapy sessions and continue to get better from here. PTSD is no joke, my daddy had it. Overall though, I think Zar will be ok. Hopefully when this mediation session happens, it will be a freeing and liberating experience for her rather than a negative one.
Author's Response:
"If he accidentally died, I would not be sad at all."<--oh my god lol. Idk why that made me laugh so hard. That's so harsh!!! But I feel you though. He has to learn how to chill. He already knows that he lost a long time ago and just doesn't want to admit it. Ole boy is in denial smh.
Zaria and Michael both got what they needed from the therapy session. Michael has to learn to give Zaria her space when she needs it and Zaria has to learn how to handle her troubles and talk them out. The session was a win-win for the both of them so God bless. I agree with the consistency comment because that really is important. That's the only way that they'll make any progess because like you said, PTSD is no joke. I hope you're dad is ok, btw.
"Overall though, I think Zar will be ok. Hopefully when this mediation session happens, it will be a freeing and liberating experience for her rather than a negative one. "<--
^^^ Let's keep our fingers crossed that it does
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2015 08:06 am Title: My Rock pt. II
This chapter wasn't boring at all 😒 I'm never believing anything you say again about your chapters lmao. Her dream was so sad ugh I could never be able to relive that like Zaria has been doing for months. I caught on to her snippy attitude with michael veryyyy quickly but I couldn't even be annoyed because look at what she's going through. She can't help it, I'd be the same way. You just want your space but I could definitely see Michael's point of view too. He's just trying to compensate for not being there for her before a little bit too much. If she says to stop talking or leave her alone, he's gotta respect that. But of course he needed a professional therapist to tell him that for him pshhh his big head lol He means well, he's just gotta look at things from other people's perspectives. I'm kinda iffy about Riq staying with his dad because of King. I hope nothing bad happens to the poor little dude while he's there. Rashad is so disrespectful I cant smh. I wanted to punch him for bringing michael up when he had no reason to even be in the convo....kinda reminds me of someone 😂 Rashad gonna keep calling Michael weak and sensitive but just wait til he pushes Michael past his limit and he'll regret ever thinking of him like that. Michael don't plaaaay. I just hope things get better for Zaria :( I loved this chapter and once again, it wasn't boring at all! Very informative and I especially liked the dream exercise the therapist told Zaria to do with changing the outcome into a positive one 👏
Author's Response:
It was a little dry to meeeee :( But as long as everybody else liked it is all that matters *sigh*
I agree with everything you said about Michael and Zaria and the way that they were handling things. Zaria is a soldier and Michael is trying to help but they both were going through. Poor things. But since Michael basically got his hand popped at the therapy session, he knows better now lol.
"I'm kinda iffy about Riq staying with his dad because of King. I hope nothing bad happens to the poor little dude while he's there."<--hmmmm...
Rashad...lol he's forever hating for no reason. His petty self.
"I wanted to punch him for bringing michael up when he had no reason to even be in the convo....kinda reminds me of someone"<--
^^^ tsk tssssssssssk
Rashad can keep trying his luck if he wants too but he'll end up learning the hard way if he does lol.
Keep hope alive for Miss Zaria. And thank you, dear. I pulled all of that information from reasearching on PTSD and depression so hopefully that info could help someone out there.
I love ya <333
Date: Mar 14, 2015 10:59 pm Title: My Rock pt. II
Man this chapter was wonderful and I enjoyed. The nightmare at the beginning was scary, but I'm glad Michael was there to snap her out of it. Then bringing Enrique to Rashad was kinda hilarious but like any mom, she has every right to worry. And the therapy was soothing and glad to get to the bottom of it all. You're still one of my favorite authors. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you ^_^ Poor Zaria was going through but, like you said, it's good that Michael was there for her.
"Then bringing Enrique to Rashad was kinda hilarious but like any mom, she has every right to worry."<--Really? lol Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it. We all can see that Zaria doesn't play when it comes to her baby boy tsk tsk.
The therapy session was very highly needed. Let's hope that Michael and Zaria will do as they were instructed.
"You're still one of my favorite authors. :)"<--
You're so sweet :*
Date: Mar 11, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Michael: the Bashful, Michael: the Father, Michael: the Jealous, Michael: the Great
aww that was too cute. continue please
Author's Response:
Thank you, honey! <3
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2015 11:18 am Title: Michael: the Bashful, Michael: the Father, Michael: the Jealous, Michael: the Great
So I read this chapter 3 times and just got to reviewing, sorry for the wait! Every time I finished, something came up and I had to log off but not to worry in the voice of Michael Jackson (from SGI) Andrea is here!! lol
I love how you wrote the Princess Diana moment. He looked so awkwardly shy and excited to meet her and she had that face of a fan who was trying so hard to stay calm. They were so cute together.
All the pictures were to die for btw. I love visuals but ugh! at the pictures of Jimmy in them. What an ass he became later.
Zaria and Michael are like the perfect couple I swear! I wish I could write like you. You can write such a romantic moment but make it so funny at the same time. That's a rare talent.
Michael is such a troll. loool Let that girl eat her KFC and worry about your own biscuit lol he is so funny.
I love when Michael is being a dad. He is so perfect but boooooo at Enrique picking Raphael. Michaelangelo is my fave! Pizza dude! Cowabunga!!
Loved the chapter, Shy!! Next please.
And no Tatianas please :D
Author's Response:
Awww that's ok :*
The Princess Diana moments will always be a fave of mine. His awkwardness/shyness was too adorable for words. And Princess Diana...you would tell her inner fangirl was going wild lol. She was so cute.
Mike in those pictures...I cry. But I agree with the Jimmy comment. I won't ever be able to look at him the same.
"Zaria and Michael are like the perfect couple I swear! I wish I could write like you. You can write such a romantic moment but make it so funny at the same time. That's a rare talent."<--
Thanks Drea but you're awesome too! You're a great writer! :**
Of course Michael just had to bother Zaria when all she was trying to do is eat her biscuit and mind her business loooool. He knows he wasn't right.
"I love when Michael is being a dad. He is so perfect but boooooo at Enrique picking Raphael. Michaelangelo is my fave! Pizza dude! Cowabunga!!"<--I love writing daddy Michael. He's so perfect...I gush. Michelangelo is my fave too!!
Anyway, thank you!!!! I'll try to update as often as I caaaan
"And no Tatianas please :D"<--
Date: Feb 15, 2015 11:50 am Title: Michael: the Bashful, Michael: the Father, Michael: the Jealous, Michael: the Great
Happy late Valentine's day girrrrrl. Ok where do I start? Lol
i got the bad tour wembley on DVD. Loooove it! I watched it so much it's a lil scratched up :( princess Diana and michael were the cutest! I remember watchin that vid with my mother she kept on saying prince Charles need to get out the way. He was irky though
and I can't believe michael asked Zaria that question lmaoooo about him and Jayden. He need to lay down with that crankiness
I also looked at the vid with the knight and michael. Michael the king! Michael looked like a baby lookin around like he didn't know. cmon you officially royalty now, man! Lmaooo
i was about to get upset with Zaria. Always tlkin about our baby. But MJ is still slayin these young kids. Can't get at his level. Never lol
zaria and Michael bein Nasty and Michael tlkin about how he want more kids. He wants like 20 probably😩😩😩
always loved the fact that michael contributed so much with fundraisers an orphanages, hospitals and all that. He was love
Lemme just say, I'm glad we have our mjfam. Idk If mjfam and moonwalkers is the same group buuuut but I like mjfam better. And our lil family on tumblr and mjfiction
cause we all grew up with michael. And I adore janet also. And I felt like a outcast with my friends because they couldn't understand why I loved those two so much. But now on here it's like our own little world away from the hatred and weak artists. I love it. Our lil escapism. LOVE YALL!!! << don't even ask me why I got so sentimental. That time of the month emotions be no joke😩😩
Author's Response:
Thank youuuu! Hope you enjoyed your Valentine's day :)
The Wembley concert is everything. When I first got that DVD, I played it out too lol so much to the point where I couldn't stand to look at it at all for a while *hides* The interaction between Mike and Princess Diana was adorable though but the Prince just gave me strange vibes. Poor Michael was so nervous :(
"and I can't believe michael asked Zaria that question lmaoooo about him and Jayden. He need to lay down with that crankiness"<--He knew he wasn't right for that...catching her off guard with something like that smh.
Michael really did look lost on that video lol and the story that Paul Cole said about the event just made it worse when he said Michael just kept grinning and giggling lol. MJ would be the one to do that at a serious event like that...his goofy self.
Zaria don't play about her Charming One lol. It's obvious that she would fight to the death when people come for her husband. Poor thing but we all know how relevant that is...do NOT disrespect MJ.
"zaria and Michael bein Nasty and Michael tlkin about how he want more kids. He wants like 20 probably"<--
tsk tsssssk
And Michael contributions to society were so overlooked. I swear if more people realized how big and kind and loving his heart was then he wouldn't have receieved have the hate that he had *sigh*
I don't really consider myself as a part of "mjfam" and stuff like that (although I used to) because of the unncessary drama and redundancies within the fandom but I completely understand where you're coming from. Everyone who knows me well knows that my love for Michael is more than anything and although they don't understand it, they've come to learn not to question me about it. But you're right, these sites are our ways of escapism where we can unite with other fans to fangirl over him lol. And that's why I love y'all too and it's ok to get emotional over him. We all do from time to time
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2015 10:31 am Title: Michael: the Bashful, Michael: the Father, Michael: the Jealous, Michael: the Great
*throw up over jimmy pictures* 😂 loool but anyway, Michael meeting Princess Diana is one of the cutest moments ever. He was so in awe of her and so nervous, the little awkward thing he is loool. I don't like the vibe I was getting from the Prince eeehhh. He can leave with that little tude. I was imagining Michael performing Dirty Diana and I swear Zaria and I were one. The things I was feelin' maaaaan....
But Michael spending quality time with Riq was so cute!! And him not wanting to overstep his boundaries, he's so cute I can't deal. Daddy Michael is everything and I could just see him bringing a million bags home with toys and stuff lol at least most was for charity so its okay. SPEAKING OF WHICH...he looked so good in those pictures from the hospital. Black definitely suits him. The article made me so mad, Zaria is right how they throw random shade at him when all he does is help people. His surgery was completely irrelevant to the whole thing. Her crying to him about that made me tear up not gonna lie (but what doesn't make me tear up lol). I felt her frustration. And Michael's nonchalant attitude towards it was sad too, he's just so used to it by now. Ugh. I'm flip flopping around everywhere but I'm glad Michael is letting Jayden take time off to be there for the birth of his baby. Good job, Michael 👏 And I'm nervous for Zaria when she has to go court to see that disgusting bastard. I know she wants to do it on her own, but I feel like Michael being there would be the comfort that she'll need. Oh well, her choice.
AND THIS ENDING. Just no. Damn you, woman loool other than the ending, I loved this chapter and I can't wait for moreee 😘
Author's Response:
Oh cut that out lol. Michael meeting the Princess was cute lol he was so awkward and bashful and ugh. I just wanna hug him. The Prince's vibe was a little off, aye? You could tell that Michael looked a little uncomfortable but hey, Princess Diana saved the say so woot.
Michael performing Dirty Diana...he deserved to be punished for that. He knew he wasn't right...showing off like that lol.
Michael and Enrique...
Daddy Michael is the best Michael...well coupled with husband Michael but you know what I mean.
Michael in all black...I cannot. It's a sin for somebody to be that fine. He knew exactly what he was doing by dressing like that. I can't stand him.
That article...that thing made me so mad when I read that. Like they didn't even have a legit reason to include that in the article. Childish, hating asses. And bye at you tearing up over that part lol You sensitive boo bear, you. And yea, Michael's reaction is just as depressing as the frustration Zaria felt. That's so heartbreaking for someone to have to become "used" to something like that. *sigh*
Of course Michael wasn't gonna keep Jayden from missing the birth of his child. He's too kind for that.
"And I'm nervous for Zaria when she has to go court to see that disgusting bastard. I know she wants to do it on her own, but I feel like Michael being there would be the comfort that she'll need. Oh well, her choice." <--
"AND THIS ENDING. Just no. Damn you, woman loool other than the ending,"<--
lol you will be ok, greedy! But thank you! <3
Date: Feb 15, 2015 08:32 am Title: Michael: the Bashful, Michael: the Father, Michael: the Jealous, Michael: the Great
These nasties! Lmao I love it. And yet more of the King's glorious HIStory. You know I love that. Man there will never be a star like Michael EVER who was as celebrated as he is, all over the world. It is absolutely amazing. Nobody comes close either. I love it. Now as for the chapter itself, I was almost fearing an argument over that Jayden mess but I'm glad to see that it died down. Michael is a jealous mess and I'm happy he can admit that. He just wants Zar to pick him as her everything over everybody, every time. He's such a greedy troll lol but it's cute and its sweet. And LAWWDDD, he done started back easing in the baby talk. Is Zar on birth control? I can't remember if they ruled against it or if they're back to using condoms. I can't even remember. Either way, they need to keep it down for a little bit longer, especially now that her modeling career is about to pop off. Don't knock her up just yet Mike! Lol. Lastly, as for the mediation thing with Terrell, I think she will be fine. She just has to make it clear that he needs to keep his deranged ass the hell away from her and her family before she has his ass put away for good.
And oh, yasss to Princess Di and Michael! Lol she wanted all of Dirty Diana in its glory honey! I ain't mad at her. I've always thought there may have a little crush between them too. Don't tell Zaria that though lol.
Author's Response:
Tsk tsk...the hornballs. Gotta love 'em lol.
"Man there will never be a star like Michael EVER who was as celebrated as he is, all over the world. It is absolutely amazing. Nobody comes close either."<--you are absolutely right! That man was treated like royalty EVERYWHERE. Who else do you see anybody do that for? Nobody!
Michael knows what his flaws are and isn't ashamed to admit it but the good thing is, they talked it out and everything is good. Michael's jealousy is cute though, isn't it? *giggles*
"And LAWWDDD, he done started back easing in the baby talk. Is Zar on birth control? I can't remember if they ruled against it or if they're back to using condoms."<--lol he had to ease that on in there...he thinks he's slick smh. And no, they never agreed to birth control and the condom use has been occassional so...
You'll see what happens as far as that though. The mediation...Zaria knows what she wants and knows exactly what she's doing we you'll see how that goes as well.
Princess Diana wanting to see Mike perform Dirty Diana lol somebody had a freaky side...she knew what kind of effect that song had. Bless her heart lol. And who knows, I hear a lot of people saying they thought the same thing about Michael and Princess Diana :O