[Report This]Date: May 29, 2015 01:09 pm Title: Can't Get You Off My Mind/Sister to Sister
I gushed so hard throughout this whole chapter basically 😩 I love seeing Zaria play nurse for poor sick Michael...she should play nurse for him again when he's feeling better if you know what i mean *wink*wink*nudge*nudge* loool no but seriously she was laying down the law for Michael and he just wasn't havin it as usual lol I was getting so annoyed every time I spoke like c'monnnn just follow instructions for once. I laughed at him scaring Tiahna with his voice every time he spoke lmao poor thing. I can only imagine how he sounded. And do I spy Jealous Michael making a gradual appearance once again? I hope so, you know how I love me some Jealous Michael, just as long as he doesn't go TOO overboard. Too bad he didn't hear about Rashad checkin' out his woman lmaooo 🙈 this whole "Who's the Daddy" thing is stressing me the hell out, I already have it in my head that Riq is Rashad's to make myself feel better for now. And yaaaassss at the sisterly bonding goin on. Erin has returned with her pregnant ass praiseeeeee! I can't wait til that kid pops out, she's gonna be a mess 😂 jk, we'll see...And Michael better knock Zaria up soon I'm tired of waiting for baby Jackson #2. His drawing of pregnant Zaria had me laughing so hard out loud, forreal looool The face I made towards it 😂😂😂 Dude's baby fever is going above and beyond now, i can't. Anyway, I looooved this chapter, you know how I love the cutesy gushy stuff and Zaria taking care of a sick Michael fits that description perfectly lol
Author's Response:
I'm not surprised at you gushing over this. You little mushy gushy thing, you!
"I love seeing Zaria play nurse for poor sick Michael...she should play nurse for him again when he's feeling better if you know what i mean *wink*wink*nudge*nudge*"<--I enjoyed writing it and get your head out of the gutter, woman! Be careful what you ask for though tsk tsk
Michael's stubborn self was just too much to handle so Zaria let it be but not before telling him like it was first. She knew what she was doing since he finally came to his sense.
"I laughed at him scaring Tiahna with his voice every time he spoke lmao poor thing."<--He wasn't right for scaring that poor child like that lol. Tiahna was so confused.
"And do I spy Jealous Michael making a gradual appearance once again?"<--
^^^ lol it was subtle but surely. You already know that if he was aware of what was Rashad was doing, he'd have lost his mind. Little jealous thing he is lol.
"this whole "Who's the Daddy" thing is stressing me the hell out, I already have it in my head that Riq is Rashad's to make myself feel better for now."<--oh really? tsk tsk
The sisterly bonding is the best. Erin and Zaria both missed each other so it was a must. I'm ready for Erin to have this baby already though but patience is key.
"And Michael better knock Zaria up soon I'm tired of waiting for baby Jackson #2."<--you're just as anxious as he is. Control yourself, woman!
Bye at you laughing at Michael and his raging baby fever lol. The man is going through...to desperate for words smh.
And thank ya babes! I try *flips hair*
Date: May 29, 2015 01:29 am Title: Can't Get You Off My Mind/Sister to Sister
I'm still reeling from the last chapter, but this is definitely a nice change. If the test comes back with Enrique being Rashad's, then I'll die a happy girl. I'd rather Rashad being the dad than Terrell's crazy ass! Michael's silly, Erin's a mess, and Zaria is something else! I'm happy with this chapter and can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Awww really? lol It's ok. More things will be revealed soon. Hopefully the outcome will be as expected :O They all are something else though, aren't that? And thank you honey! I'll try to update soon <3
Date: May 29, 2015 12:29 am Title: Can't Get You Off My Mind/Sister to Sister
Aww, I love their mushy asses. Michael ain't lying, his ass is way more whipped than Zaria is. I still cackle at the chapter where he was playing Ain't No Sunshine when Zaria left him, Erin went to check on him and that fool was a hot sprung ass mess. Lmao. It's cute though, when he's not being petty. Anyway, I am so glad Zaria checked her punk ass baby daddy. Rashad tries to shade Michael a bit too much for my liking and I'm glad she put her foot down and got his big headed ass all the way together! And chile she definitely pulled it when she said she could shade his girlfriend for days but she doesn't cuz she doesn't give a damn about who he's with. I was like yasssss Zaria bitch! Not only does she not care who he dates, but shit, look at Tiny! The shade literally writes itself. Chile good and BYE. Nonetheless, I'm glad she told his ass. Deep down he's still bitter that Zaria is married to an amazing man who loves her and their son as his own and he would never be able to compete. On ANY level. I just hope the DNA test comes back and Riq is Rashad's son. I want Terrell to disappear. Secondly, I guess pregnancy really does bring out women's femininity and softer side. Erin is so much less evil than she usually is lol. I really liked her and Zar's sister sister moment. It's good to see them bonding and talking, their really is no bond like the one you have with your big sister. Hope they have more in the future, especially now that she's pregnant.
Lastly, Michael is a stubborn mess lol smh. I hope he gets better and starts taking better care of himself. Back to back laryngitis is no joke. If he wants to keep slaying the stage, he's gonna have to stop thinking his ass is Superman and take better care of himself. And I peep him drawing Zaria with that baby bump. Tryna be slick about it. He wants her knocked up and barefoot so bad lol. It'll happen when it's supposed to. Speaking of, I hear Noemie is pregnant is real life right now too! Crazy right? Lol. But anyway, I will be so glad when he's done with this damn tour. Fool been on tour FOREVER! I am ready for that to end and for Zaria to slay the modeling world, then she can have another baby later. Good chapter girly!
Author's Response:
They're just too cute for words, right? Michael is definitely more whipped than Zaria lol. At least he isn't too proud to admit it.
"I still cackle at the chapter where he was playing Ain't No Sunshine when Zaria left him, Erin went to check on him and that fool was a hot sprung ass mess."<--lol Michael was a mess, wasn't he? smh
I agree with him being cute when he's not being petty though. Let's hope it stays that way.
Zaria finally had enough of Rashad and his childish behavior. Rashad just didn't get when enough was enough...always taking things too far and saying stuff for no reason. Just straight up petty.
"And chile she definitely pulled it when she said she could shade his girlfriend for days but she doesn't cuz she doesn't give a damn about who he's with."<--you caught that?
^^^ Zaria clearly doesn't give a care about Rashad and that's his probelm like you said. He's still feeling some type of way about her actually finding someone better than him and wants to try and get under her skin but she isn't giving into him and it's eating him alive.
"Not only does she not care who he dates, but shit, look at Tiny! The shade literally writes itself."<--
^^^ You are too much!! lol I didn't want to say anything but *coughs*
As for the DNA test, you'll find out more sooooon. We all want Terelll to be disappear so hopefully everything will go well XD
Erin has made a 180 degree change. That pregnancy is defintely bringing the softer side out of her. We'll see how long that lasts though tsk tsk. The sister/sister moment was much needed esepcially for Zaria since she's been so out of touch with her family besides a few hellos and goodbyes. There's nothing like spending time with your older sister especially when the oldest sister always knows best. I say that because I'm an older sister lol so I know.
Michael is as stubborn as a mule but Zaria finally got through to him even though it took forever and a day. He better take to heed to what his wife is saying.
"And I peep him drawing Zaria with that baby bump. Tryna be slick about it. He wants her knocked up and barefoot so bad lol"<--lol that man is determined to implant the thought into Zaria's head. He won't let her forget that that's what he wants smh. But like you said, it'll happen when it's supposed to. He just has to be patient.
And yes!! Noémie is pregnant! Six months to be exact! I'm so mad at her for holding out for so long! I knew that she was gaining weight from seeing pictures of her each month and I remember her saying that she wanted more kids in one of her interviews last year but I didn't think that it was gonna be so soon! She hid that really well because you can barely tell that she's pregnant until you see her belly. Ugh!
"I will be so glad when he's done with this damn tour. Fool been on tour FOREVER! I am ready for that to end and for Zaria to slay the modeling world."<--lol! We all will be!! But it won't be long before it's over.
And thank you!!! <333
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2015 08:05 am Title: The Phantom of Obsession pt. I
PLEASE CONTINUE...you are doing a remarkable job on this story that I want to know more about Erin & her pregnancy plus the court case against Terell & Zaria.
Author's Response:
Thank you honey!! I appreciate the love and support! More is on the way, I promise <33
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2015 06:22 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
ohhh kerry washignton!! and hot stuff from blue collar *faints* love this story!! the long updates are the best! :)
Author's Response:
Yesss Miss Kerry! I just had to include her. And lol you mean White Collar? Matt is a looker, ain't he? *grins* And thank you so much for reading/reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoy the long updates because I despise writing/editing them *hides*
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2015 12:07 pm Title: My Rock pt. II
so this website is not working right and it has me turn off so bad with so many things that I honestly don't even come here no more except to read your story, i love SGI tho it seems i missed 3 chapters again...the notifications really ain't shit.
anyway onto the review....just when i think these two are moving along just fine, they take a step back...it takes communication in order for the relationship to work...i know every man and woman need their own space, etc but not like this.
i've always said that zaria never reacted the way i expected her to after dealing with such a traumatic experience, she just hid it under the blanket and went on as if nothing happened but those memories will always come back to bite you. i am glad michael is there to help her when she is in need and i get his frustration but it's never a smart move to attack the person in need, it will just make them run away.
overall, i am glad they went to see a therapist. i think they both learned more from each other than they expected. i enjoyed it. i'll read more when i get home. loved it and love youuuuuuuuuuuu! xoxo
Author's Response:
Child it's been acting up for me too. I just come back to check it periodically and whenever I'm updating. I wish it would get fixed somehow but there's nothing we can do which is depressing :/ And awww it's ok, girl! You know I still love you lol.
You're exactly right with the communication. They both are working progresses. They try and sometimes, they slip up but they both are still growing and learning and they defintinely got the scolding of a lifetime from the thearapist so let's just hope that they continue to go on the right road with that and follow her advice.
"i've always said that zaria never reacted the way i expected her to after dealing with such a traumatic experience, she just hid it under the blanket and went on as if nothing happened but those memories will always come back to bite you. i am glad michael is there to help her when she is in need and i get his frustration but it's never a smart move to attack the person in need, it will just make them run away."<--I agree. And we all know that Zaria has a way of handling things differently than most people would. Her main issue is that she tries to repress things to the point where it eats her alive because she doesn't like to talk about it or tries to relieve her pain through other harmful activites (partying, drinking, etc.) which only makes things worse. But the only way that she'll truly be able to change is if she allows herself to do so. Michael and the therapist and everyone else can try to help her until they're blue in the face but it'll only cause more damage if Zaria doesn't let them in. It's truly up to Zaria to decide how she will deal with her issues but she's trying. She's taking her baby steps on that rocky, traumatic road of hers and is going at her own pace.
"overall, i am glad they went to see a therapist. i think they both learned more from each other than they expected."<--Oh most defintely! And it all goes back to the both of them being afraid which is why therapy is a much needed remedy for the both of them because they can both freely express how they feel with a mediator. So if things do get out of hand, it can just as easily be settled with Dr. McCall's help (if that makes sense). And that's why the therapy sessions are important because it not only helps Zaria to cope but it also helps Michael to learn how to react to Zaria's episodes without making things worse.
And I'm glad you enjoyed iiiiit!! I love you more!! :*
Date: May 05, 2015 09:21 am Title: The Phantom of Obsession pt. I
Yasssss for the Godfather all up and through this chapter. I love it. I've always wondered what Michael thought about his high speed chase situation, I can imagine his reaction being like that. Since he stanned for James, he was not tryna hear nothing bad about him chile. Lol. I love it. And it was just his bday a few days ago too, we were jamming! Lol ok moving on. I'm really glad Zar talked to that bastard but it just mad angry all over again. This victim shaming shit of rape victims is so fucked up and disgusting. I really wish she would have hands laid on Terell and say fuck it but I know she's not that kinda person. Terell is scum and really don't deserve to live, much less have any contact with her. That's why I KNOW that Riq is not his child. I can't stand Rashad big head ass either but he's the lesser of two evils at this point. Enrique is Rashad's child and that's all that needs to be known at this point. I hate Terell and hope he dies and rots. Lastly, Erin evil ass is pregnant!!!! I kinda had a feeling that's what her news was. Wow. Can't wait to see how she is during this pregnancy cuz lawd knows she is a mess. Lol another good chapter girl!
Author's Response:
Uncle James took over! lol and I've always wondered that too! I agree with you that Michael mostly likely tried to avoid any negative talk about James. We all know how Mike stanned for James lol.
"And it was just his bday a few days ago too, we were jamming!"<--For real?! I didn't even know that lol that's crazy.
"This victim shaming shit of rape victims is so fucked up and disgusting."<--Exactly and the fact that there are people out in this world who have the same mentality is even worse. I can't even explain the hate that I feel toward people who are like that. But let me not get in my feelings right now.
Zaria's heart is too pure to inflict the pain that he caused on her back on him even though she mentioned that if something did happen to him, she wouldn't feel any sympathy. She always has been kind hearted but sometimes it tends to bite her in the butt.
Let's just hope that Enrique is Rashad's *crosses fingers*
ERIN IS PREGNANT! lol What a journey it will be tsk tsk. And thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2015 04:34 am Title: The Phantom of Obsession pt. I
Awwww look at my surprise 😭 You're so cute, I love you moreeee. But you're trying to kill me with this damn update. Enrique might be Terell's???? Nah I refuse. I'm not even gonna be worried because he's Rashad's. You wouldn't do this to us, ESPECIALLY ME. Take pity on my soul. If it comes back any other way I'm just gonna ignore it and pretend it didn't happen 😌 Dude my anxiety level was going crazy with Zaria when she was going into the meeting, it's too early for this stress. I'm glad she kept her composure during the one on one chat with him. Not only that, but she dished it back good with that Mother comment. She's so strongggg. I can't believe they gotta wait a whole month before doing this DNA test smh I'm sure time will go by fast though while they're on the road. Zaria did nothing but preachhh to Michael about women's fashion and men's sick mentality. I'm glad he understood. I laughed when he contradicted himself about not letting Kari out of the house the way she wants until she's grown lol but his reasoning behind it makes sense. No matter how good your morals are and how you know things should be, not everyone will be on board with that. Especially with the celebrity status he has?? And the nasty sick freaks out in the world?? They could make him and his family a target so he's gotta make sure everyone is safe even if it's unfair to them. The price of faaaameee. And oh my god at Erin being knocked up, Michael's reaction is priceless lmao Her as a mother?? No wait, her with raging pregnancy hormones?? I'm scared for them lmao Anyway, loved this update and my sweet surpriseeee. You're the best, my love
Author's Response:
"Enrique might be Terell's???? Nah I refuse. I'm not even gonna be worried because he's Rashad's. You wouldn't do this to us, ESPECIALLY ME."<--
^^^ I wouldn't?
"If it comes back any other way I'm just gonna ignore it and pretend it didn't happen"<--lol you would
"Dude my anxiety level was going crazy with Zaria when she was going into the meeting, it's too early for this stress. I'm glad she kept her composure during the one on one chat with him. Not only that, but she dished it back good with that Mother comment. She's so strongggg."<--I'm sorryyyyyy. And she tried her best. Even though she had to wear a façade, she did pretty good.
You don't have to wait too long. A month will come by in no time.
"Zaria did nothing but preachhh to Michael about women's fashion and men's sick mentality."<--Zaria was fed up. But she spoke from the heart. Michael knew that she was right so it was good that he understood. I mean c'mon...Janet and LaToya are his sisters who are more than provocative lol. He had no choice.
Bye at you laughing at Michael's little comment. You know that his tradition had to kick in some kind of way. He just wants to keep his little girl safe.
"No matter how good your morals are and how you know things should be, not everyone will be on board with that. Especially with the celebrity status he has?? And the nasty sick freaks out in the world?? They could make him and his family a target so he's gotta make sure everyone is safe even if it's unfair to them. The price of faaaameee."<--EXACTLY!
Erin's gonna be a mommyyyyyyyy. May the Lord be with them lol. Anyway, you're so very welcome, babes. I love you more <33
Date: May 05, 2015 12:59 am Title: The Phantom of Obsession pt. I
Noooo!!!!! I swear if Terrell is Riq's daddy I'mma fucking PUKE! That conniving bastard! Then we really won't get rid of his ass! The fact his ass is using a DNA test to try to get to Zaria more makes me hate him so much! Welcome to being number one on my shit list Terrell, you put yourself there. Please let Riq be Rashad's!
Author's Response:
Let's hope that isn't the case.
"The fact his ass is using a DNA test to try to get to Zaria more makes me hate him so much!"<--He is the definition of crazy. The man needs serious help.
"Please let Riq be Rashad's!"<--you'll seeeeeee
Date: May 03, 2015 06:27 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
definitely worth the wait..the lovemaking section was super sexy..and Nelly is a cutie for sure..also like to point out the irony, how Zaria gets all irritated at Michael admiring her beauty yet it's ok for her to stare when he was sticking to the strict diet in the other chapter..that's no better reason for it and I don't understand the logic..
but anyway..hope Terell doesn't try to pull anything or else..
Author's Response:
Thank you!
"the lovemaking section was super sexy."<--I try *blushes* I was struggling trying to do that scene so I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Nelly is very cute :D
"also like to point out the irony, how Zaria gets all irritated at Michael admiring her beauty yet it's ok for her to stare when he was sticking to the strict diet in the other chapter..that's no better reason for it and I don't understand the logic.."<--I'm not completely sure of what you're trying to say here. Are you saying how you don't understand how Zaria gets on Michael when he stares at her yet she does the same to him? If so, Zaria is a little complicated but we know this already lol. She tells Michael not to do certain things that he does to her and yet she turns around and does the same things to him. Most of the time, she's not serious about it though...(like the way that Michael said in the chapter that he thought that she told him to stop staring and she told him that she lied and that she could never get enough of it although it made her nervous when he constantly did it)...she can contradict herself at times.
And you'll see what happens next really soon. :O Thanks for reading!
Date: May 01, 2015 08:58 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
Well Nelly is fine as hell!
Happy Birthday to Zaria! Ayyyyye she had a photoshoot and it went well!
Baby kari is a big girl! laughing and eating baby food?! You know how I am with babies! :,)
lmaoooo at Michael when Joseph said they'll watch her. lmaoo that part was hilarious he was like "um..what?"
"We could watch her." Joseph spoke up, startling Michael from his one-sided conversation.
"Pardon?" Michael asked, unknowingly holding Tiahna tighter against his chest as he stood to face his father.
^^OMG Like Joseph? lmaooo
Michael tried his hardest to resist smiling at Joseph's reference to Zaria as his wife but his lips still quirked
^^ Michael was fighting that smile girl! You know his ass would've been grinning!
Michael took our girl out and showed her a good time ;))))) lmaoo and of course I had to listen with the song reading it! lmaooo I love that song!
Waiting for this shit with Terell the next day. He better not start shit! Got my girl having bad dreams and shit! We don't play that!
Psssh. Don't let the façade fool you. He can be an ass at times. Zaria thought before simply replying
^^ Don't we know it girl?! His ass be trollin!
I saved your story last. I was going to read this chapter on a free day and I did! I need to be completely focused on your story when I read it.
<33333
Author's Response:
Isn't he though? XD And Zaria did pretty good for her first shoot, aye?
Baby Kari is growing up fast! Isn't she a sweetheart?
Michael and his reaction to Joseph...poor thing. Joseph is trying and Michael was terrified lol
" Michael was fighting that smile girl! You know his ass would've been grinning!"<--Truuuuue. Truuuue lol
And Michael, the Charmer, taking his care of Mrs. Jackson since 1986 lol. He had to do something a little special for his lady.
As for Terell...I hope you're prepareeeed.
And awww...thank you so much. You're so sweet.
Date: Apr 28, 2015 02:25 am Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
I 4 1 can agree with the lose hair during the passion scenes n ur right it is a must have it had me gone lol I luv the story mj is 2 cute
Author's Response:
I know right! The loose hair is a weakness! And thank you honey!
Date: Apr 26, 2015 10:30 pm Title: Get It Together
I love this story I know I'm late n 2 reading it But I'm in love wit the banner plz keep writting
Author's Response:
Awww thank you honey!!! I'm glad that you love it! And I will. Thanks for reading! :*
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2015 09:44 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
Yaaaaaasssss at the passionate magic session, I am here for itttt. Of course Zaria wants his hair all loose and ish, the image of him ripping out the scrunchie gah daaaaamn. And I caught that "don't come back pregnant" comment hmmmmm I hope that's a sign for something in the future. Those condoms better have holes in 'em 😂 I need another Jackson baby in my life. Speaking of Jackson babies, I'm so glad Michael let Tiahna stay with Katherine and Joe. He's gotta do it eventually and it was nice to see Joe put in the effort in their relationship. MJ's hesitance made me laugh lol And freakin' Zaria with "you're beautiful too" comment I cantttt. I legit snorted, she's so goofy. I'm mad you got Matt Bomer playing Nelly, I don't claim you anymore lmfaooo. I'm so nervous for this meeting, Zaria's anxiety is killin me. I hope we won't have to wait long for this next chapter 👀 I'm sure everything will be fine...you never know though. Gah! Loved this update as usualllll. (This review is all over the place I'm sorry, I can't be bothered transitioning into different topics since I'm half dead rn) Lol okay bye love yaaaa
Author's Response:
Of course you are, you perv smh. I'm just kiddingggg. You know Zaria lives for the lose hair during the magic making! It's a must.
"And I caught that "don't come back pregnant" comment hmmmmm I hope that's a sign for something in the future."<--
^^^ You would like that wouldn't you? tsk tsk
Michael is trying his best with trying to get along with Joseph so three cheers for him. And bye at you laughing at his hesitance! He's going through! Let him be lol.
"And freakin' Zaria with "you're beautiful too" comment I cantttt. I legit snorted, she's so goofy."<--lol Zaria is a goof troop. She wasn't thinking before she spoke. Poor thing.
"I'm mad you got Matt Bomer playing Nelly, I don't claim you anymore lmfaooo."<--
^^^ You know you love me for using him lol don't play
As for this meeting...you'll see how it goes very soooon. I'll try not to keep y'all waiting for too long. And this was review wasn't all over the plaaace. I hope you got some rest. I love ya more, boo bear :*
Date: Apr 26, 2015 01:44 pm Title: It's Gonna Be Alright
I just can't get enough of Zar n Michael !!! So in love with this story !.... Thank you again !
Author's Response:
Awww you're so sweet. You're welcome!
